B. 书面表达
上文作者与母亲之间温暖感人的故事,让我们深深感受到家庭的重要性。作为家庭的一分子,通过履行家庭责任,我们可以更好地关爱家庭成员,增进感情,理解家庭的真正意义。请你写一篇英语短文,分享你对家庭责任的看法及承担家庭责任的经历。要点如下:
(1)对家庭责任的看法:家庭责任的重要性,家庭责任包含哪些事;
(2)承担家庭责任的经历:主动分担家务、关爱家人的原因,自己具体做过的家务,做完之后带来的结果(家人的反应等);
(3)收获和感悟:做完这些事后内心的体会等。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。
参考词汇:responsibility 责任 strength 力量 support 支持
上文作者与母亲之间温暖感人的故事,让我们深深感受到家庭的重要性。作为家庭的一分子,通过履行家庭责任,我们可以更好地关爱家庭成员,增进感情,理解家庭的真正意义。请你写一篇英语短文,分享你对家庭责任的看法及承担家庭责任的经历。要点如下:
(1)对家庭责任的看法:家庭责任的重要性,家庭责任包含哪些事;
(2)承担家庭责任的经历:主动分担家务、关爱家人的原因,自己具体做过的家务,做完之后带来的结果(家人的反应等);
(3)收获和感悟:做完这些事后内心的体会等。
注意:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。
参考词汇:responsibility 责任 strength 力量 support 支持
There is no doubt that family responsibility is of great importance. It includes caring for and supporting our family members. It helps the family members feel close to each other.
Last Friday evening, my parents didn't come back home on time because of their busy work. So I decided to cook a meal for them. I took out some meat and vegetables from the fridge and searched for some cooking methods on the Internet. Two hours later, I finished my dishes. When my parents came back, they were surprised, with tears in their eyes. They were proud of me.
This experience taught me that even if my strength is small, I can still take responsibility for my family. What's more, it helped me understand the meaning of love.
答案
参考范文:
There is no doubt that family responsibility is of great importance. It includes caring for and supporting our family members. It helps the family members feel close to each other.
Last Friday evening, my parents didn't come back home on time because of their busy work. So I decided to cook a meal for them. I took out some meat and vegetables from the fridge and searched for some cooking methods on the Internet. Two hours later, I finished my dishes. When my parents came back, they were surprised, with tears in their eyes. They were proud of me.
This experience taught me that even if my strength is small, I can still take responsibility for my family. What's more, it helped me understand the meaning of love.
There is no doubt that family responsibility is of great importance. It includes caring for and supporting our family members. It helps the family members feel close to each other.
Last Friday evening, my parents didn't come back home on time because of their busy work. So I decided to cook a meal for them. I took out some meat and vegetables from the fridge and searched for some cooking methods on the Internet. Two hours later, I finished my dishes. When my parents came back, they were surprised, with tears in their eyes. They were proud of me.
This experience taught me that even if my strength is small, I can still take responsibility for my family. What's more, it helped me understand the meaning of love.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写英语短文,需紧扣三个核心要点:一是阐述对家庭责任的看法(重要性、涵盖的内容);二是分享承担家庭责任的具体经历(原因、做的家务、家人反应);三是写出相关收获与感悟。写作时要注意语句连贯,词数约80,不得出现真实信息,合理运用参考词汇,结构清晰、情感真实。
【解析】
写作时先开篇点明家庭责任的重要性及内涵;接着叙述具体经历:因父母晚归主动做饭,描述做饭过程和家人的反应;最后总结感悟,点明收获。具体内容如下:
There is no doubt that family responsibility is of great importance. It includes caring for and supporting our family members. It helps the family members feel close to each other.
Last Friday evening, my parents didn't come back home on time because of their busy work. So I decided to cook a meal for them. I took out some meat and vegetables from the fridge and searched for some cooking methods on the Internet. Two hours later, I finished my dishes. When my parents came back, they were surprised, with tears in their eyes. They were proud of me.
This experience taught me that even if my strength is small, I can still take responsibility for my family. What's more, it helped me understand the meaning of love.
【答案】
There is no doubt that family responsibility is of great importance. It includes caring for and supporting our family members. It helps the family members feel close to each other.
Last Friday evening, my parents didn't come back home on time because of their busy work. So I decided to cook a meal for them. I took out some meat and vegetables from the fridge and searched for some cooking methods on the Internet. Two hours later, I finished my dishes. When my parents came back, they were surprised, with tears in their eyes. They were proud of me.
This experience taught me that even if my strength is small, I can still take responsibility for my family. What's more, it helped me understand the meaning of love.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、家庭话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求的三个要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯,情感真挚,合理运用参考词汇,符合词数要求,准确表达了对家庭责任的看法、经历及感悟,是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写英语短文,需紧扣三个核心要点:一是阐述对家庭责任的看法(重要性、涵盖的内容);二是分享承担家庭责任的具体经历(原因、做的家务、家人反应);三是写出相关收获与感悟。写作时要注意语句连贯,词数约80,不得出现真实信息,合理运用参考词汇,结构清晰、情感真实。
【解析】
写作时先开篇点明家庭责任的重要性及内涵;接着叙述具体经历:因父母晚归主动做饭,描述做饭过程和家人的反应;最后总结感悟,点明收获。具体内容如下:
There is no doubt that family responsibility is of great importance. It includes caring for and supporting our family members. It helps the family members feel close to each other.
Last Friday evening, my parents didn't come back home on time because of their busy work. So I decided to cook a meal for them. I took out some meat and vegetables from the fridge and searched for some cooking methods on the Internet. Two hours later, I finished my dishes. When my parents came back, they were surprised, with tears in their eyes. They were proud of me.
This experience taught me that even if my strength is small, I can still take responsibility for my family. What's more, it helped me understand the meaning of love.
【答案】
There is no doubt that family responsibility is of great importance. It includes caring for and supporting our family members. It helps the family members feel close to each other.
Last Friday evening, my parents didn't come back home on time because of their busy work. So I decided to cook a meal for them. I took out some meat and vegetables from the fridge and searched for some cooking methods on the Internet. Two hours later, I finished my dishes. When my parents came back, they were surprised, with tears in their eyes. They were proud of me.
This experience taught me that even if my strength is small, I can still take responsibility for my family. What's more, it helped me understand the meaning of love.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、家庭话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求的三个要点,结构清晰、逻辑连贯,情感真挚,合理运用参考词汇,符合词数要求,准确表达了对家庭责任的看法、经历及感悟,是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
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