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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
本学期你所在的学校举办了体育与英语跨学科主题系列活动,活动形式丰富多彩,如“我最敬佩的运动员”英文征文比赛(The Athlete I Admire Most)、趣味运动会(Fun Sports Meet)、体育赛事解说员选拔赛(I'm the Sports Reporter)等。请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文参加学校英语报的专题征文活动。
Who is the athlete you admire most?
What makes him/her special?
How does he/she influence your attitude towards sports and family?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Our school held a series of cross-subject activities of PE and English.
本学期你所在的学校举办了体育与英语跨学科主题系列活动,活动形式丰富多彩,如“我最敬佩的运动员”英文征文比赛(The Athlete I Admire Most)、趣味运动会(Fun Sports Meet)、体育赛事解说员选拔赛(I'm the Sports Reporter)等。请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文参加学校英语报的专题征文活动。
Who is the athlete you admire most?
What makes him/her special?
How does he/she influence your attitude towards sports and family?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Our school held a series of cross-subject activities of PE and English.
答案
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Our school held a series of cross-subject activities of PE and English. The athlete I admire most is Wang Meng, China's famous short-track speed skater.
What makes her special is not only her excellent skills, but also her strong will.
Although she once faced injuries and difficulties, she never gave up and kept training hard. She finally won four Olympic gold medals and made history. What moves me most is that she always cares for her teammates and family deeply.
She teaches me that hard work can lead to success. Besides, she shows me that sports are not just about winning, but also about love and responsibility. From her, I learn to face challenges bravely and cherish my family more.
Our school held a series of cross-subject activities of PE and English. The athlete I admire most is Wang Meng, China's famous short-track speed skater.
What makes her special is not only her excellent skills, but also her strong will.
Although she once faced injuries and difficulties, she never gave up and kept training hard. She finally won four Olympic gold medals and made history. What moves me most is that she always cares for her teammates and family deeply.
She teaches me that hard work can lead to success. Besides, she shows me that sports are not just about winning, but also about love and responsibility. From her, I learn to face challenges bravely and cherish my family more.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，围绕体育与英语跨学科主题活动，要求以“我最敬佩的运动员”为主题写短文，需覆盖三个核心问题：①最敬佩的运动员是谁；②该运动员的特别之处；③其对自己关于运动和家庭的态度的影响。解题思路：先选择一位事迹明确、传递正能量的运动员，再按“承接开头→点明人物→阐述特别之处→说明影响”的逻辑组织内容，注意控制词数（100左右）、不透露个人真实信息，语言符合中学生英语水平，语句通顺。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头句，直接点明最敬佩的运动员是中国短道速滑名将王濛；2. 阐述其特别之处：不仅拥有出色的运动技能，更具备坚强的意志，曾面对伤病仍坚持训练，斩获奥运金牌，且关心队友与家人；3. 说明对自己的影响：教会自己努力能带来成功，明白运动不仅关乎胜利，更承载爱与责任，学会勇敢面对挑战、珍惜家人；4. 检查词数与语法，确保符合征文要求。
【答案】Our school held a series of cross-subject activities of PE and English. The athlete I admire most is Wang Meng, China's famous short-track speed skater.
What makes her special is not only her excellent skills, but also her strong will.
Although she once faced injuries and difficulties, she never gave up and kept training hard. She finally won four Olympic gold medals and made history. What moves me most is that she always cares for her teammates and family deeply.
She teaches me that hard work can lead to success. Besides, she shows me that sports are not just about winning, but also about love and responsibility. From her, I learn to face challenges bravely and cherish my family more.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作、跨学科主题写作
【点评】本题结合体育与英语跨学科活动，既考查学生的英语写作能力，又引导学生学习优秀运动员的精神品质，贴近校园生活，要求学生清晰表达观点、合理组织内容，兼具实用性与教育性。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头句，直接点明最敬佩的运动员是中国短道速滑名将王濛；2. 阐述其特别之处：不仅拥有出色的运动技能，更具备坚强的意志，曾面对伤病仍坚持训练，斩获奥运金牌，且关心队友与家人；3. 说明对自己的影响：教会自己努力能带来成功，明白运动不仅关乎胜利，更承载爱与责任，学会勇敢面对挑战、珍惜家人；4. 检查词数与语法，确保符合征文要求。
【答案】Our school held a series of cross-subject activities of PE and English. The athlete I admire most is Wang Meng, China's famous short-track speed skater.
What makes her special is not only her excellent skills, but also her strong will.
Although she once faced injuries and difficulties, she never gave up and kept training hard. She finally won four Olympic gold medals and made history. What moves me most is that she always cares for her teammates and family deeply.
She teaches me that hard work can lead to success. Besides, she shows me that sports are not just about winning, but also about love and responsibility. From her, I learn to face challenges bravely and cherish my family more.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作、跨学科主题写作
【点评】本题结合体育与英语跨学科活动，既考查学生的英语写作能力，又引导学生学习优秀运动员的精神品质，贴近校园生活，要求学生清晰表达观点、合理组织内容，兼具实用性与教育性。
【难度系数】0.6
