三、阅读表达 阅读下面短文，然后根据短文内容回答问题，案过7。
Shanghai-born novelist Lu Shi'e wrote a fantasy novel called New China in 1910. In the book, he described a dream where trains were running underground, an iron bridge crossed the Huangpu River, and Shanghai hosted a successful World Exposition (博览会) in the underdeveloped Pudong area at that time. The blueprint described in the novel became real exactly after 100 years.
On May 1st, 2010, the World Exposition, with about 160 years of history, drew back its curtain in Shanghai. According to the Organizing Committee of the World Exposition 2010, Shanghai, it was expected to attract more than 70 million visitors, making it the most popular exposition in history. And it did. It was also the first time that the World Exposition had been held in a developing country.
About 600 years ago, Shanghai was just a small fishing village in China's eastern coastal area. It grew into a commercial (商业的) city thanks to its prosperous port (繁荣的港口), and Shanghai also became one of the first Chinese cities that opened their doors to the world. Along the way, it became the economic and commercial hub of China. Today, Shanghai has become an international metropolis (大都市).
1. Where was the novelist Lu Shi'e born?

2. When did the blueprint become real?

3. How many visitors did the Shanghai Exposition attract according to the material?

4. What was Shanghai like about 600 years ago?

5. What's the passage mainly about?

1. (He was born) in Shanghai.
2. (It became real) after 100 years.
3. (It attracted) more than/over 70 million (visitors).
4. (It was) a small fishing village.
5. (It's about) the changes in Shanghai.

【分析】
这是一道限定答案词数的英语阅读表达题，解题思路清晰：首先通读5个题干问题，标记每个问题的核心关键词，之后带着关键词回到原文精准定位对应语句，提取符合问题要求的核心信息，最后精简内容，确保最终答案的单词数不超过题干要求的7个，同时保证信息准确对应问题。细节题都可以直接在原文找到对应线索，最后主旨题梳理全文的时间线和核心描述对象，提炼出核心主题即可。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第一句"Shanghai-born novelist Lu Shi'e wrote a fantasy novel called New China in 1910"，直接提取陆士谔的出生地信息，精简后得到符合词数要求的答案。
2. 定位原文第一段末尾"The blueprint described in the novel became real exactly after 100 years"，提取蓝图成真的时间信息，精简后符合词数要求。
3. 定位原文第二段"it was expected to attract more than 70 million visitors, making it the most popular exposition in history. And it did"，说明上海世博会实际吸引了超过7000万游客，提取核心信息即可。
4. 定位原文第三段开头"About 600 years ago, Shanghai was just a small fishing village in China's eastern coastal area"，直接提取600年前上海的属性信息。
5. 全文从陆士谔小说里的上海幻想，到2010年上海世博会举办，再到上海从渔村逐步发展为国际大都市的历程，核心围绕上海的发展变化展开，提炼核心主题即可。所有答案均严格控制在7个单词以内，符合题干要求。
【答案】
1. (He was born) in Shanghai.
2. (It became real) after 100 years.
3. (It attracted) more than/over 70 million (visitors).
4. (It was) a small fishing village.
5. (It's about) the changes in Shanghai.
【知识点】
细节信息定位，阅读理解主旨归纳，简答规范书写
【点评】
本题属于基础类阅读简答题，绝大多数细节题都可以在原文直接找到对应线索，没有设置复杂的推理障碍，解题的核心注意点是严格遵守题干要求的答案词数上限，不要添加多余的冗余表述，主旨题只需要梳理全文的描述主线就能轻松得出正确结论。
【难度系数】
0.7

四、书面表达
岁月如梭，时光变迁，过去与现在对于我们，正如时空穿越之旅。假如你是陆风，是学校英语社团主席，请用英语写一篇短文，向外国友人介绍一下你的家乡——无锡。
注意事项：
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于90，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I've lived in Wuxi since I was 6.

One possible version:
I've lived in Wuxi since I was 6. There have been great changes in my hometown. In the past, the roads were dirty and narrow. People used to travel around on foot, by bike or by boat. Local people lived in old and small houses. They lived a hard life. Now things are quite different. The streets are clean and wide. People go travelling by bus, taxi or high-speed train. There are big boats in the Grand Canal. They are busy carrying different kinds of things to different places. Most people have moved into new flats. They have a happy life now.
(90 words)

【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确核心写作要求：以陆风的身份向外国友人介绍家乡无锡的今昔变迁，首先梳理清晰写作逻辑：第一步承接题目给出的开头，直接点明“家乡发生了巨大变化”作为全文总起；第二步按照“过去-现在”的对比结构展开内容，分别从道路面貌、出行方式、居住生活三个维度对应描述过去的落后状态和当下的发展状态，还可以加入无锡京杭大运河的本地特色细节让内容更贴合主题；最后要注意时态匹配，描述过去的内容用一般过去时，描述现在的内容用一般现在时，保证语句通顺，词数满足不少于90的要求，不要遗漏核心要点。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，直接点出核心主题：There have been great changes in my hometown，开门见山引出家乡变化的核心内容。
2. 展开对过去无锡面貌的描述：依次介绍过去的道路状况In the past, the roads were dirty and narrow，过去的出行方式People used to travel around on foot, by bike or by boat，过去的居住与生活状态Local people lived in old and small houses. They lived a hard life，全部使用一般过去时，符合描述过去情况的时态要求。
3. 使用过渡句Now things are quite different，自然完成今昔场景的转折，衔接流畅。
4. 展开对当下无锡新面貌的描述：对应过去的维度依次介绍现在的道路The streets are clean and wide，现在的出行方式People go travelling by bus, taxi or high-speed train，加入无锡特色的大运河细节There are big boats in the Grand Canal. They are busy carrying different kinds of things to different places，最后介绍现在的居住生活Most people have moved into new flats. They have a happy life now，前后对比呼应，逻辑连贯，总词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
I've lived in Wuxi since I was 6. There have been great changes in my hometown. In the past, the roads were dirty and narrow. People used to travel around on foot, by bike or by boat. Local people lived in old and small houses. They lived a hard life. Now things are quite different. The streets are clean and wide. People go travelling by bus, taxi or high-speed train. There are big boats in the Grand Canal. They are busy carrying different kinds of things to different places. Most people have moved into new flats. They have a happy life now.
【知识点】
今昔对比写作
一般过去时应用
家乡话题表达
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题目所有要求，结构清晰明了，采用总起-过去场景描述-转折-当下场景描述的经典变迁类作文结构，内容要点完整，前后今昔对比维度一一对应，还加入了无锡本地的京杭大运河特色元素，内容真实有辨识度，时态使用准确无误，语句通顺连贯，词数符合要求，是一篇非常规范的同主题参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.7