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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
雨林是地球的绿色屏障,被称为“地球之肺”。面对海南热带雨林所面临的问题,你所在的学校将举办一场雨林保护宣传活动。活动以“雨林守护,我在行动”为主题,请你以此为题写一篇短文,参加该主题的英语征文活动。内容提示如下:
※make the air fresher and cleaner
※hold the water
※save trees
※build parks
注意:1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 语句连贯。词数80左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Protect the rainforest. I'm in action!
Rainforests are the lungs of the earth.
雨林是地球的绿色屏障,被称为“地球之肺”。面对海南热带雨林所面临的问题,你所在的学校将举办一场雨林保护宣传活动。活动以“雨林守护,我在行动”为主题,请你以此为题写一篇短文,参加该主题的英语征文活动。内容提示如下:
※make the air fresher and cleaner
※hold the water
※save trees
※build parks
注意:1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 语句连贯。词数80左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Protect the rainforest. I'm in action!
Rainforests are the lungs of the earth.
They can help control the climate. The plants in
the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They also help to hold the water when
it rains. Besides, rainforests give us wood, food, medicine and many more useful things. But
now, rainforests are becoming smaller and smaller. It's time to take actions to save the
rainforests. First, we can save trees by using less paper. Second, we can build parks to
protect rainforests and wildlife. What's more, we can encourage people to care about and
protect them.
Rainforests are a treasure for both China and the world. Let's join together to protect them!
the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They also help to hold the water when
it rains. Besides, rainforests give us wood, food, medicine and many more useful things. But
now, rainforests are becoming smaller and smaller. It's time to take actions to save the
rainforests. First, we can save trees by using less paper. Second, we can build parks to
protect rainforests and wildlife. What's more, we can encourage people to care about and
protect them.
Rainforests are a treasure for both China and the world. Let's join together to protect them!
答案
One possible version:
Protect the rainforest. I'm in action!
Rainforests are the lungs of the earth. They can help control the climate. The plants in
the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They also help to hold the water when
it rains. Besides, rainforests give us wood, food, medicine and many more useful things. But
now, rainforests are becoming smaller and smaller. It's time to take actions to save the
rainforests. First, we can save trees by using less paper. Second, we can build parks to
protect rainforests and wildlife. What's more, we can encourage people to care about and
protect them.
Rainforests are a treasure for both China and the world. Let's join together to protect them!
Protect the rainforest. I'm in action!
Rainforests are the lungs of the earth. They can help control the climate. The plants in
the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They also help to hold the water when
it rains. Besides, rainforests give us wood, food, medicine and many more useful things. But
now, rainforests are becoming smaller and smaller. It's time to take actions to save the
rainforests. First, we can save trees by using less paper. Second, we can build parks to
protect rainforests and wildlife. What's more, we can encourage people to care about and
protect them.
Rainforests are a treasure for both China and the world. Let's join together to protect them!
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇环保主题的英语书面表达，主题为“雨林守护，我在行动”。解题思路分为以下几步：
1. 开篇承接已给开头，先阐述雨林的重要性：结合思维导图提示的“净化空气、涵养水源”，再适当拓展，比如调节气候、提供资源等，让内容更丰富；
2. 引出雨林当前面临的危机（面积减少），自然过渡到需要采取行动；
3. 结合思维导图的行动要点“保护树木、建造公园”，拓展具体做法（如少用纸来保护树木），还可补充其他合理行动；
4. 最后发出呼吁，呼应主题，升华主旨。
写作时要注意语句连贯，词数控制在要求范围内，要点齐全且适当拓展。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，先拓展雨林的重要性：用“They can help control the climate.”说明调节气候的作用，接着结合提示点“The plants in the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They also help to hold the water when it rains.”，再补充“Besides, rainforests give us wood, food, medicine and many more useful things.”丰富资源相关内容；
2. 转折指出现状“But now, rainforests are becoming smaller and smaller.”，引出行动的必要性“It's time to take actions to save the rainforests.”；
3. 列举具体行动：“First, we can save trees by using less paper.”拓展保护树木的具体做法，“Second, we can build parks to protect rainforests and wildlife.”对应建造公园的要点，再补充“What's more, we can encourage people to care about and protect them.”呼应呼吁部分；
4. 结尾用“Rainforests are a treasure for both China and the world. Let's join together to protect them!”升华主题，完成呼吁。
【答案】
One possible version:
Protect the rainforest. I'm in action!
Rainforests are the lungs of the earth. They can help control the climate. The plants in
the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They also help to hold the water when
it rains. Besides, rainforests give us wood, food, medicine and many more useful things. But
now, rainforests are becoming smaller and smaller. It's time to take actions to save the
rainforests. First, we can save trees by using less paper. Second, we can build parks to
protect rainforests and wildlife. What's more, we can encourage people to care about and
protect them.
Rainforests are a treasure for both China and the world. Let's join together to protect them!
【知识点】
环保主题写作、英语议论文写作、话题词汇运用
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣“雨林守护，我在行动”的主题，内容完整覆盖了思维导图的要点，还进行了合理拓展，逻辑清晰，从雨林重要性到现状，再到具体行动和呼吁，层层递进，语句连贯自然，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的环保主题书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们要明确这是一篇环保主题的英语书面表达，主题为“雨林守护，我在行动”。解题思路分为以下几步：
1. 开篇承接已给开头，先阐述雨林的重要性：结合思维导图提示的“净化空气、涵养水源”，再适当拓展，比如调节气候、提供资源等，让内容更丰富；
2. 引出雨林当前面临的危机（面积减少），自然过渡到需要采取行动；
3. 结合思维导图的行动要点“保护树木、建造公园”，拓展具体做法（如少用纸来保护树木），还可补充其他合理行动；
4. 最后发出呼吁，呼应主题，升华主旨。
写作时要注意语句连贯，词数控制在要求范围内，要点齐全且适当拓展。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，先拓展雨林的重要性：用“They can help control the climate.”说明调节气候的作用，接着结合提示点“The plants in the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They also help to hold the water when it rains.”，再补充“Besides, rainforests give us wood, food, medicine and many more useful things.”丰富资源相关内容；
2. 转折指出现状“But now, rainforests are becoming smaller and smaller.”，引出行动的必要性“It's time to take actions to save the rainforests.”；
3. 列举具体行动：“First, we can save trees by using less paper.”拓展保护树木的具体做法，“Second, we can build parks to protect rainforests and wildlife.”对应建造公园的要点，再补充“What's more, we can encourage people to care about and protect them.”呼应呼吁部分；
4. 结尾用“Rainforests are a treasure for both China and the world. Let's join together to protect them!”升华主题，完成呼吁。
【答案】
One possible version:
Protect the rainforest. I'm in action!
Rainforests are the lungs of the earth. They can help control the climate. The plants in
the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They also help to hold the water when
it rains. Besides, rainforests give us wood, food, medicine and many more useful things. But
now, rainforests are becoming smaller and smaller. It's time to take actions to save the
rainforests. First, we can save trees by using less paper. Second, we can build parks to
protect rainforests and wildlife. What's more, we can encourage people to care about and
protect them.
Rainforests are a treasure for both China and the world. Let's join together to protect them!
【知识点】
环保主题写作、英语议论文写作、话题词汇运用
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣“雨林守护，我在行动”的主题，内容完整覆盖了思维导图的要点，还进行了合理拓展，逻辑清晰，从雨林重要性到现状，再到具体行动和呼吁，层层递进，语句连贯自然，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的环保主题书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
