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Ⅲ. 书面表达。
最近,外文杂志社在我校调查了初中生最喜欢的娱乐活动,有200位学生参与问卷调查。请根据调查结果(见右图),完成英文调查报告。
内容要点:1. 排名前三的娱乐活动是哪几项;
2. 这三项娱乐活动的调查结果分别怎么样;
3. 谈谈这几项娱乐活动带来的好处。
要求:1. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The survey result on Top 3 fun activities in my school
We did a survey on the fun activities in my school.
最近,外文杂志社在我校调查了初中生最喜欢的娱乐活动,有200位学生参与问卷调查。请根据调查结果(见右图),完成英文调查报告。
内容要点:1. 排名前三的娱乐活动是哪几项;
2. 这三项娱乐活动的调查结果分别怎么样;
3. 谈谈这几项娱乐活动带来的好处。
要求:1. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The survey result on Top 3 fun activities in my school
We did a survey on the fun activities in my school.
答案
One possible version:
The survey result on Top 3 fun activities in my school
We did a survey on the fun activities in my school. We asked two hundred students. The
result shows that the top 3 fun activities are going shopping, reading books and watching
movies.
Most of the students enjoy going shopping. It's fun for them to hang out with friends
and taste delicious food. Some of the students love reading books. They think they can enjoy
the moment of joy from books. A few of them are interested in watching movies at the
weekend. They think watching movies makes them laugh and relaxed.
In short, having fun is a good way to make friends and it brings friends closer. Having
fun can also make us happier and keep lifting our spirits.
The survey result on Top 3 fun activities in my school
We did a survey on the fun activities in my school. We asked two hundred students. The
result shows that the top 3 fun activities are going shopping, reading books and watching
movies.
Most of the students enjoy going shopping. It's fun for them to hang out with friends
and taste delicious food. Some of the students love reading books. They think they can enjoy
the moment of joy from books. A few of them are interested in watching movies at the
weekend. They think watching movies makes them laugh and relaxed.
In short, having fun is a good way to make friends and it brings friends closer. Having
fun can also make us happier and keep lifting our spirits.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确这是一篇基于调查图表的英文书面表达题，要完成调查报告。解题思路如下：
1. 审题：确定内容要点为排名前三的活动、各项活动的调查结果、活动的好处，同时注意词数要求和行文连贯。
2. 梳理图表信息：从饼图中提取出排名前三的活动是购物（60%）、读书（30%）、看电影（10%），明确各活动的参与占比。
3. 组织内容：首先承接开头，说明调查人数并点明前三活动；接着分别针对每项活动，结合占比描述学生参与情况，同时阐述活动带来的好处；最后总结这些娱乐活动的积极意义，使文章结构完整。
4. 语言表达：使用符合初中生水平的英语表达，注意句式多样，保证行文流畅，适当发挥内容让文章更充实。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：承接给定开头，补充调查人数“two hundred students”，并点明排名前三的活动“going shopping, reading books and watching movies”，清晰引出调查结果。
2. 分述活动：
针对占比最高的“going shopping”，用“Most of the students”描述参与情况，阐述其好处：和朋友闲逛、品尝美食。
对于“reading books”，用“Some of the students”说明，点明好处：从书中获得愉悦。
针对“watching movies”，用“A few of them”描述，说明好处：让人欢笑、放松。
3. 总结升华：用“In short”总结这些娱乐活动的整体益处，如交友、提升心情，使文章主题更突出。
【答案】
One possible version:
The survey result on Top 3 fun activities in my school
We did a survey on the fun activities in my school. We asked two hundred students. The
result shows that the top 3 fun activities are going shopping, reading books and watching
movies.
Most of the students enjoy going shopping. It's fun for them to hang out with friends
and taste delicious food. Some of the students love reading books. They think they can enjoy
the moment of joy from books. A few of them are interested in watching movies at the
weekend. They think watching movies makes them laugh and relaxed.
In short, having fun is a good way to make friends and it brings friends closer. Having
fun can also make us happier and keep lifting our spirits.
【知识点】
1. 英文调查报告写作
2. 图表类英语作文
3. 日常活动英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求和图表信息，内容要点完整，逻辑层次清晰。从介绍调查结果到分述活动益处，再到总结升华，行文流畅自然，语言表达符合初中生的英语水平，适当的发挥让文章内容更充实，很好地完成了书面表达任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们需要明确这是一篇基于调查图表的英文书面表达题，要完成调查报告。解题思路如下：
1. 审题：确定内容要点为排名前三的活动、各项活动的调查结果、活动的好处，同时注意词数要求和行文连贯。
2. 梳理图表信息：从饼图中提取出排名前三的活动是购物（60%）、读书（30%）、看电影（10%），明确各活动的参与占比。
3. 组织内容：首先承接开头，说明调查人数并点明前三活动；接着分别针对每项活动，结合占比描述学生参与情况，同时阐述活动带来的好处；最后总结这些娱乐活动的积极意义，使文章结构完整。
4. 语言表达：使用符合初中生水平的英语表达，注意句式多样，保证行文流畅，适当发挥内容让文章更充实。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：承接给定开头，补充调查人数“two hundred students”，并点明排名前三的活动“going shopping, reading books and watching movies”，清晰引出调查结果。
2. 分述活动：
针对占比最高的“going shopping”，用“Most of the students”描述参与情况，阐述其好处：和朋友闲逛、品尝美食。
对于“reading books”，用“Some of the students”说明，点明好处：从书中获得愉悦。
针对“watching movies”，用“A few of them”描述，说明好处：让人欢笑、放松。
3. 总结升华：用“In short”总结这些娱乐活动的整体益处，如交友、提升心情，使文章主题更突出。
【答案】
One possible version:
The survey result on Top 3 fun activities in my school
We did a survey on the fun activities in my school. We asked two hundred students. The
result shows that the top 3 fun activities are going shopping, reading books and watching
movies.
Most of the students enjoy going shopping. It's fun for them to hang out with friends
and taste delicious food. Some of the students love reading books. They think they can enjoy
the moment of joy from books. A few of them are interested in watching movies at the
weekend. They think watching movies makes them laugh and relaxed.
In short, having fun is a good way to make friends and it brings friends closer. Having
fun can also make us happier and keep lifting our spirits.
【知识点】
1. 英文调查报告写作
2. 图表类英语作文
3. 日常活动英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求和图表信息，内容要点完整，逻辑层次清晰。从介绍调查结果到分述活动益处，再到总结升华，行文流畅自然，语言表达符合初中生的英语水平，适当的发挥让文章内容更充实，很好地完成了书面表达任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
