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二、书面表达
请以“A Relaxing Hobby”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一个让你感到放松的爱好，你通常什么时候做这件事，以及它如何帮助你缓解压力。
要求：
1.词数不少于80；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
请以“A Relaxing Hobby”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一个让你感到放松的爱好，你通常什么时候做这件事，以及它如何帮助你缓解压力。
要求：
1.词数不少于80；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
答案
A Relaxing Hobby
Many hobbies can bring us pleasure, and growing small potted plants is the most relaxing hobby for me.
I usually look after my little potted plants after I finish my homework every evening. On weekends, I will spend more time moving them to the balcony to enjoy the warm sunshine. I have over ten small potted plants at home, and most of them are cute succulents. When I water them and watch their new little leaves come out day by day, all my tiredness from long time study goes away.
When I feel stressed from my schoolwork or coming exams, looking at these lovely green plants can always calm me down. This hobby helps me get rid of all the upset feelings quickly, and then I can go on with my study with a clear and happy mind.
Many hobbies can bring us pleasure, and growing small potted plants is the most relaxing hobby for me.
I usually look after my little potted plants after I finish my homework every evening. On weekends, I will spend more time moving them to the balcony to enjoy the warm sunshine. I have over ten small potted plants at home, and most of them are cute succulents. When I water them and watch their new little leaves come out day by day, all my tiredness from long time study goes away.
When I feel stressed from my schoolwork or coming exams, looking at these lovely green plants can always calm me down. This hobby helps me get rid of all the upset feelings quickly, and then I can go on with my study with a clear and happy mind.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需以“A Relaxing Hobby”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，包含“放松的爱好是什么、何时做该爱好、如何缓解压力”三个核心内容。解题思路：第一步，选择贴近学生生活、易展开的爱好（如养小盆栽）；第二步，搭建三段式结构：开头点题引出爱好，中间叙述做爱好的时间与具体场景，结尾说明该爱好缓解压力的作用；第三步，注意语言流畅，避免真实姓名、校名，确保词数达标。
【解析】按照写作结构依次完成：1. 开头点题，点明养小盆栽是自己最放松的爱好；2. 中间段说明做爱好的时间（每晚写完作业后、周末）及具体细节（养多肉、放阳台晒太阳）；3. 结尾段阐述该爱好缓解压力的作用（学习疲惫、考试压力时，看绿植平复心情，消除烦躁，助力后续学习），确保语言流畅，符合要求。
【答案】A Relaxing Hobby
Many hobbies can bring us pleasure, and growing small potted plants is the most relaxing hobby for me.
I usually look after my little potted plants after I finish my homework every evening. On weekends, I will spend more time moving them to the balcony to enjoy the warm sunshine. I have over ten small potted plants at home, and most of them are cute succulents. When I water them and watch their new little leaves come out day by day, all my tiredness from long time study goes away.
When I feel stressed from my schoolwork or coming exams, looking at these lovely green plants can always calm me down. This hobby helps me get rid of all the upset feelings quickly, and then I can go on with my study with a clear and happy mind.
【知识点】英语话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，内容具体，完整覆盖题目要求的三个要点，语言流畅自然，符合书面表达的各项规范要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作结构依次完成：1. 开头点题，点明养小盆栽是自己最放松的爱好；2. 中间段说明做爱好的时间（每晚写完作业后、周末）及具体细节（养多肉、放阳台晒太阳）；3. 结尾段阐述该爱好缓解压力的作用（学习疲惫、考试压力时，看绿植平复心情，消除烦躁，助力后续学习），确保语言流畅，符合要求。
【答案】A Relaxing Hobby
Many hobbies can bring us pleasure, and growing small potted plants is the most relaxing hobby for me.
I usually look after my little potted plants after I finish my homework every evening. On weekends, I will spend more time moving them to the balcony to enjoy the warm sunshine. I have over ten small potted plants at home, and most of them are cute succulents. When I water them and watch their new little leaves come out day by day, all my tiredness from long time study goes away.
When I feel stressed from my schoolwork or coming exams, looking at these lovely green plants can always calm me down. This hobby helps me get rid of all the upset feelings quickly, and then I can go on with my study with a clear and happy mind.
【知识点】英语话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，内容具体，完整覆盖题目要求的三个要点，语言流畅自然，符合书面表达的各项规范要求。
【难度系数】0.6
