写作指导
假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“健康饮食”的演讲活动,请根据表中的内容,用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍你是如何做到健康饮食的。

要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 所有提示须全部用上,并适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
4. 60 词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello,everyone. My name is Li Hua. I am very happy to make a speech about healthy diet today.
写作佳句
1. 我早餐吃鸡蛋、面包和牛奶。
I have eggs,bread and milk .
2. 我不喝咖啡,因为它对我的健康有害。
I don't drink coffee because it .
3. 我认为它们对我的健康有益。
I think they my health.
4. 我不会吃太多肉。
I will not eat meat.
5. 我认为我的饮食习惯非常健康。
I think my eating habits are .
思路导引
1. 人称:第人称
2. 时态:
3. 体裁:
4. 列提纲

假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“健康饮食”的演讲活动,请根据表中的内容,用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍你是如何做到健康饮食的。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 所有提示须全部用上,并适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
4. 60 词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello,everyone. My name is Li Hua. I am very happy to make a speech about healthy diet today.
写作佳句
1. 我早餐吃鸡蛋、面包和牛奶。
I have eggs,bread and milk .
2. 我不喝咖啡,因为它对我的健康有害。
I don't drink coffee because it .
3. 我认为它们对我的健康有益。
I think they my health.
4. 我不会吃太多肉。
I will not eat meat.
5. 我认为我的饮食习惯非常健康。
I think my eating habits are .
思路导引
1. 人称:第人称
2. 时态:
3. 体裁:
4. 列提纲
答案
【写作佳句】
1. for breakfast 2. is bad for my health 3. are good for 4. too much 5. very healthy
【思路导引】
1. 一 2. 一般现在时 3. 演讲稿
写作范例
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I am very happy to make a speech about healthy diet today. I have eggs,bread and milk for breakfast. I don't drink coffee because it is bad for my health. For lunch I have rice,chicken,vegetables and so on. I think they are good for my health. I never eat hamburgers. I have noodles,vegetables and fruit for dinner. I will not eat too much meat. I think my eating habits are very healthy.
1. for breakfast 2. is bad for my health 3. are good for 4. too much 5. very healthy
【思路导引】
1. 一 2. 一般现在时 3. 演讲稿
写作范例
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I am very happy to make a speech about healthy diet today. I have eggs,bread and milk for breakfast. I don't drink coffee because it is bad for my health. For lunch I have rice,chicken,vegetables and so on. I think they are good for my health. I never eat hamburgers. I have noodles,vegetables and fruit for dinner. I will not eat too much meat. I think my eating habits are very healthy.
解析
【解析】
1. 写作佳句填空需结合语境,运用固定短语和句式完成,如“for breakfast”“be bad for”“be good for”等;
2. 思路导引需明确演讲稿写作的第一人称视角、一般现在时的时态要求及演讲稿的体裁特点;
3. 演讲稿写作需涵盖三餐健康饮食的具体内容,结合提示信息适当发挥,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】
【写作佳句】
1. for breakfast
2. is bad for my health
3. are good for
4. too much
5. very healthy
【思路导引】
1. 一
2. 一般现在时
3. 演讲稿
演讲稿参考范文:
Hello,everyone. My name is Li Hua. I am very happy to make a speech about healthy diet today. I have eggs,bread and milk for breakfast. I don't drink coffee because it is bad for my health. For lunch I have rice,chicken,vegetables and so on. I think they are good for my health. I never eat hamburgers. I have noodles,vegetables and fruit for dinner. I will not eat too much meat. I think my eating habits are very healthy.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配;一般现在时;演讲稿写作
【点评】
本题以“健康饮食”为主题,考查英语应用文写作及固定句式、短语的运用,内容贴近学生日常生活,既能提升语言运用能力,又能引导学生树立健康饮食观念。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 写作佳句填空需结合语境,运用固定短语和句式完成,如“for breakfast”“be bad for”“be good for”等;
2. 思路导引需明确演讲稿写作的第一人称视角、一般现在时的时态要求及演讲稿的体裁特点;
3. 演讲稿写作需涵盖三餐健康饮食的具体内容,结合提示信息适当发挥,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】
【写作佳句】
1. for breakfast
2. is bad for my health
3. are good for
4. too much
5. very healthy
【思路导引】
1. 一
2. 一般现在时
3. 演讲稿
演讲稿参考范文:
Hello,everyone. My name is Li Hua. I am very happy to make a speech about healthy diet today. I have eggs,bread and milk for breakfast. I don't drink coffee because it is bad for my health. For lunch I have rice,chicken,vegetables and so on. I think they are good for my health. I never eat hamburgers. I have noodles,vegetables and fruit for dinner. I will not eat too much meat. I think my eating habits are very healthy.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配;一般现在时;演讲稿写作
【点评】
本题以“健康饮食”为主题,考查英语应用文写作及固定句式、短语的运用,内容贴近学生日常生活,既能提升语言运用能力,又能引导学生树立健康饮食观念。
【难度系数】
0.6
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