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五、书面表达。
25. 假如你叫李华,下学期你的英国朋友 Dave 将作为交换生来中国学习交流,他写信向你询问中国的风俗习惯,以便更好地适应中国的学习和生活。请你根据以下提示,给 Dave 写一封回信。
25. 假如你叫李华,下学期你的英国朋友 Dave 将作为交换生来中国学习交流,他写信向你询问中国的风俗习惯,以便更好地适应中国的学习和生活。请你根据以下提示,给 Dave 写一封回信。
Dear Dave,
I'm so glad to hear that you'll come to
China next term. To help you adapt more
easily,I'd like to share some common Chinese
customs with you.
First and foremost, when we meet
someone for the first time,it's polite to shake
hands. Then, if you are invited to a Chinese
home,it's thoughtful to bring a small gift,such
as fruit,tea,or milk. Also,it's important to be
on time, because keeping others waiting is
impolite. Besides, at dinner table, it's
respectful to let older people start eating first.
During dinner,you should hold the bowl with
your hand and avoid sticking your chopsticks
upright in your bowl of rice,because it means
something unlucky.
Don't worry too much. Chinese people
are generally warm and understanding toward
foreigners. If you have any more questions,
feel free to ask. I'm looking forward to seeing
you soon!
I'm so glad to hear that you'll come to
China next term. To help you adapt more
easily,I'd like to share some common Chinese
customs with you.
First and foremost, when we meet
someone for the first time,it's polite to shake
hands. Then, if you are invited to a Chinese
home,it's thoughtful to bring a small gift,such
as fruit,tea,or milk. Also,it's important to be
on time, because keeping others waiting is
impolite. Besides, at dinner table, it's
respectful to let older people start eating first.
During dinner,you should hold the bowl with
your hand and avoid sticking your chopsticks
upright in your bowl of rice,because it means
something unlucky.
Don't worry too much. Chinese people
are generally warm and understanding toward
foreigners. If you have any more questions,
feel free to ask. I'm looking forward to seeing
you soon!
答案
五、25. Dear Dave,
I'm so glad to hear that you'll come to
China next term. To help you adapt more
easily,I'd like to share some common Chinese
customs with you.
First and foremost, when we meet
someone for the first time,it's polite to shake
hands. Then, if you are invited to a Chinese
home,it's thoughtful to bring a small gift,such
as fruit,tea,or milk. Also,it's important to be
on time, because keeping others waiting is
impolite. Besides, at dinner table, it's
respectful to let older people start eating first.
During dinner,you should hold the bowl with
your hand and avoid sticking your chopsticks
upright in your bowl of rice,because it means
something unlucky.
Don't worry too much. Chinese people
are generally warm and understanding toward
foreigners. If you have any more questions,
feel free to ask. I'm looking forward to seeing
you soon!
I'm so glad to hear that you'll come to
China next term. To help you adapt more
easily,I'd like to share some common Chinese
customs with you.
First and foremost, when we meet
someone for the first time,it's polite to shake
hands. Then, if you are invited to a Chinese
home,it's thoughtful to bring a small gift,such
as fruit,tea,or milk. Also,it's important to be
on time, because keeping others waiting is
impolite. Besides, at dinner table, it's
respectful to let older people start eating first.
During dinner,you should hold the bowl with
your hand and avoid sticking your chopsticks
upright in your bowl of rice,because it means
something unlucky.
Don't worry too much. Chinese people
are generally warm and understanding toward
foreigners. If you have any more questions,
feel free to ask. I'm looking forward to seeing
you soon!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇给外国友人介绍中国习俗的书信写作，解题时首先要明确书信的基本格式，先梳理清楚题干给出的三个核心写作维度：见面礼仪、登门拜访礼仪、餐桌礼仪。首先开篇要先回应对方的来信，表达得知对方要来中国的喜悦，点明写信目的是分享相关习俗帮他更好适应生活。接下来按照三个模块依次展开内容：先写初次见面的礼仪，对应提示里的握手习俗；再写拜访他人家庭的要求，除了提示的带礼物，还可以补充合适的礼物类型、守时等符合中国习俗的细节；最后写餐桌礼仪，除了提示的长辈先动筷，补充其他符合常识的正确餐桌习俗，让内容更充实。最后收尾部分要语气亲切，符合朋友交流的场景，安慰对方不用过度紧张，表达欢迎和期待见面的心情，用合适的逻辑连接词串联内容，保证行文流畅自然。
【解析】
1. 确定文体、人称与时态：本文属于应用文书信，以第一人称写作，整体使用一般现在时来介绍客观存在的风俗习惯，语气要友好亲切，符合好友交流的语境。
2. 搭建三段式行文结构：
第一段：开篇问候，说明收到对方来信得知他即将来中国做交换生的消息，点明自己写信是为了分享常见的中国习俗，帮助他更快适应本地生活。
第二段：分点逐一介绍习俗：①见面场景：第一次和他人见面时，礼貌的做法是握手问好；②登门做客场景：如果受邀去别人家拜访，记得带上小礼物，比如水果、茶叶、牛奶都很合适，同时要守时，让主人等待是很不礼貌的行为；③餐桌礼仪场景：就餐时要等年长的长辈先动筷才符合礼仪，吃饭时最好用手端住碗，不要把筷子竖直插在米饭里，这个行为在中国文化里有不吉利的含义。
第三段：收尾安慰对方不用过度担心，中国人对外国友人普遍很友善包容，欢迎他后续有任何问题随时询问，最后表达期待和他见面的心情。
3. 调整语句衔接，使用first and foremost, then, besides等过渡词让逻辑更清晰，规避语法错误和中式英语表达，完成全文写作。
【答案】
Dear Dave,
I'm so glad to hear that you'll come to China next term. To help you adapt more easily,I'd like to share some common Chinese customs with you.
First and foremost, when we meet someone for the first time,it's polite to shake hands. Then, if you are invited to a Chinese home,it's thoughtful to bring a small gift,such as fruit,tea,or milk. Also,it's important to be on time, because keeping others waiting is impolite. Besides, at dinner table, it's respectful to let older people start eating first. During dinner,you should hold the bowl with your hand and avoid sticking your chopsticks upright in your bowl of rice,because it means something unlucky.
Don't worry too much. Chinese people are generally warm and understanding toward foreigners. If you have any more questions,feel free to ask. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon!
【知识点】
英语书信写作，中国文化习俗，书面表达逻辑
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文书信写作，既考察学生对英语书信格式、基础句式的掌握能力，也引导学生主动了解、对外传播中国本土传统习俗，写作时只要覆盖全部提示要点，补充的相关习俗符合真实的中国文化常识，行文逻辑通顺、语气贴合好友交流的场景，就能拿到不错的分数，注意要避免出现不符合文化事实的错误表述，不要堆砌生硬的复杂句式，保证表达自然流畅即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇给外国友人介绍中国习俗的书信写作，解题时首先要明确书信的基本格式，先梳理清楚题干给出的三个核心写作维度：见面礼仪、登门拜访礼仪、餐桌礼仪。首先开篇要先回应对方的来信，表达得知对方要来中国的喜悦，点明写信目的是分享相关习俗帮他更好适应生活。接下来按照三个模块依次展开内容：先写初次见面的礼仪，对应提示里的握手习俗；再写拜访他人家庭的要求，除了提示的带礼物，还可以补充合适的礼物类型、守时等符合中国习俗的细节；最后写餐桌礼仪，除了提示的长辈先动筷，补充其他符合常识的正确餐桌习俗，让内容更充实。最后收尾部分要语气亲切，符合朋友交流的场景，安慰对方不用过度紧张，表达欢迎和期待见面的心情，用合适的逻辑连接词串联内容，保证行文流畅自然。
【解析】
1. 确定文体、人称与时态：本文属于应用文书信，以第一人称写作，整体使用一般现在时来介绍客观存在的风俗习惯，语气要友好亲切，符合好友交流的语境。
2. 搭建三段式行文结构：
第一段：开篇问候，说明收到对方来信得知他即将来中国做交换生的消息，点明自己写信是为了分享常见的中国习俗，帮助他更快适应本地生活。
第二段：分点逐一介绍习俗：①见面场景：第一次和他人见面时，礼貌的做法是握手问好；②登门做客场景：如果受邀去别人家拜访，记得带上小礼物，比如水果、茶叶、牛奶都很合适，同时要守时，让主人等待是很不礼貌的行为；③餐桌礼仪场景：就餐时要等年长的长辈先动筷才符合礼仪，吃饭时最好用手端住碗，不要把筷子竖直插在米饭里，这个行为在中国文化里有不吉利的含义。
第三段：收尾安慰对方不用过度担心，中国人对外国友人普遍很友善包容，欢迎他后续有任何问题随时询问，最后表达期待和他见面的心情。
3. 调整语句衔接，使用first and foremost, then, besides等过渡词让逻辑更清晰，规避语法错误和中式英语表达，完成全文写作。
【答案】
Dear Dave,
I'm so glad to hear that you'll come to China next term. To help you adapt more easily,I'd like to share some common Chinese customs with you.
First and foremost, when we meet someone for the first time,it's polite to shake hands. Then, if you are invited to a Chinese home,it's thoughtful to bring a small gift,such as fruit,tea,or milk. Also,it's important to be on time, because keeping others waiting is impolite. Besides, at dinner table, it's respectful to let older people start eating first. During dinner,you should hold the bowl with your hand and avoid sticking your chopsticks upright in your bowl of rice,because it means something unlucky.
Don't worry too much. Chinese people are generally warm and understanding toward foreigners. If you have any more questions,feel free to ask. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon!
【知识点】
英语书信写作，中国文化习俗，书面表达逻辑
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文书信写作，既考察学生对英语书信格式、基础句式的掌握能力，也引导学生主动了解、对外传播中国本土传统习俗，写作时只要覆盖全部提示要点，补充的相关习俗符合真实的中国文化常识，行文逻辑通顺、语气贴合好友交流的场景，就能拿到不错的分数，注意要避免出现不符合文化事实的错误表述，不要堆砌生硬的复杂句式，保证表达自然流畅即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
