七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
你校网站英语专栏正在开展以“A Special Gift”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示,从礼物名称、谁送给你的、它为什么特别等方面写一篇英语短文,介绍这件对你而言意义特别的礼物。
What is the gift?
Who gave it to you?
Why is it special?
Write something more about the topic.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题已给出的词不计入总词数)。
A Special Gift
你校网站英语专栏正在开展以“A Special Gift”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示,从礼物名称、谁送给你的、它为什么特别等方面写一篇英语短文,介绍这件对你而言意义特别的礼物。
What is the gift?
Who gave it to you?
Why is it special?
Write something more about the topic.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题已给出的词不计入总词数)。
A Special Gift
答案
[参考范文]
A Special Gift
Among all my gifts, the most special one is the book called The Little Prince from my best friend, Li Mei. She gave it to me on my 14th birthday last year. It is a nice story about growth and friendship. She wrote a short message on the first page and drew small stars beside the warm sentences. When I read it, I can feel her care. It is special because it holds our true friendship. This book is not just a gift, but a precious treasure. It tells me the best gifts are not expensive, but full of love.
A Special Gift
Among all my gifts, the most special one is the book called The Little Prince from my best friend, Li Mei. She gave it to me on my 14th birthday last year. It is a nice story about growth and friendship. She wrote a short message on the first page and drew small stars beside the warm sentences. When I read it, I can feel her care. It is special because it holds our true friendship. This book is not just a gift, but a precious treasure. It tells me the best gifts are not expensive, but full of love.
解析
【分析】
写这篇英语征文需遵循以下思路:首先紧扣主题“A Special Gift”,明确写作必须覆盖三个核心要点:礼物名称、赠送者、特别原因;其次选择贴近学生生活的礼物(如书籍),补充细节增强真实性(如赠送时间、礼物上的特殊标记);最后组织语言,用流畅的英语表达,控制词数在100左右,注意不透露个人真实信息,传递积极情感。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 审题:确定主题为“特别的礼物”,明确需包含的三个要点;2. 选材:选取有意义的礼物(如《小王子》),确定赠送者(好友);3. 补充细节:添加赠送时间、礼物上的留言等内容,突出特别之处;4. 组织语言:用简单易懂的英语句子连贯表达,确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
A Special Gift
Among all my gifts, the most special one is the book called The Little Prince from my best friend, Li Mei. She gave it to me on my 14th birthday last year. It is a nice story about growth and friendship. She wrote a short message on the first page and drew small stars beside the warm sentences. When I read it, I can feel her care. It is special because it holds our true friendship. This book is not just a gift, but a precious treasure. It tells me the best gifts are not expensive, but full of love.
【知识点】
英语书面表达,英语主题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣征文要求,完整覆盖所有提示要点,通过具体细节(好友的留言、星星图案)生动展现了礼物的特殊性,情感真挚,语言流畅自然,传递了“礼物的价值在于爱而非价格”的积极主题,符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
写这篇英语征文需遵循以下思路:首先紧扣主题“A Special Gift”,明确写作必须覆盖三个核心要点:礼物名称、赠送者、特别原因;其次选择贴近学生生活的礼物(如书籍),补充细节增强真实性(如赠送时间、礼物上的特殊标记);最后组织语言,用流畅的英语表达,控制词数在100左右,注意不透露个人真实信息,传递积极情感。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 审题:确定主题为“特别的礼物”,明确需包含的三个要点;2. 选材:选取有意义的礼物(如《小王子》),确定赠送者(好友);3. 补充细节:添加赠送时间、礼物上的留言等内容,突出特别之处;4. 组织语言:用简单易懂的英语句子连贯表达,确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
A Special Gift
Among all my gifts, the most special one is the book called The Little Prince from my best friend, Li Mei. She gave it to me on my 14th birthday last year. It is a nice story about growth and friendship. She wrote a short message on the first page and drew small stars beside the warm sentences. When I read it, I can feel her care. It is special because it holds our true friendship. This book is not just a gift, but a precious treasure. It tells me the best gifts are not expensive, but full of love.
【知识点】
英语书面表达,英语主题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣征文要求,完整覆盖所有提示要点,通过具体细节(好友的留言、星星图案)生动展现了礼物的特殊性,情感真挚,语言流畅自然,传递了“礼物的价值在于爱而非价格”的积极主题,符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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