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第3步 典例分析
假设你是李华，开学初老师在劳动实践课上布置了一项作业，内容是选择栽培一种植物，观察并记录它（们）的生长变化。请你结合图示，用英语给英国笔友 Henry 写一封邮件，分享此次劳动实践的经历和感受。词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hi Henry,
How's it going? I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labour homework with you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题思路】
1. 体裁：应用文。
2. 主题：介绍自己栽培某种植物的经历和感受。
3. 人称：以第一人称为主。
4. 时态：以一般过去时为主。
假设你是李华，开学初老师在劳动实践课上布置了一项作业，内容是选择栽培一种植物，观察并记录它（们）的生长变化。请你结合图示，用英语给英国笔友 Henry 写一封邮件，分享此次劳动实践的经历和感受。词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hi Henry,
How's it going? I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labour homework with you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题思路】
1. 体裁：应用文。
2. 主题：介绍自己栽培某种植物的经历和感受。
3. 人称：以第一人称为主。
4. 时态：以一般过去时为主。
答案
This term, my teacher asked me to grow a plant and record its changes. I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny. I put the seed in a nice container and carefully recorded its changes. Each day, I watered and looked after Sunny with care. It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger. When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. And the beautiful shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it.
The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature. I believe as long as you try it, you'll develop a great interest in gardening and know about nature better.
The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature. I believe as long as you try it, you'll develop a great interest in gardening and know about nature better.
解析
这是一篇应用文邮件写作，写作需围绕劳动实践课的种植作业展开。要以第一人称、一般过去时为主进行创作，内容需涵盖作业任务、种植过程（选种、照料、记录）以及种植感受。写作可参照给定提纲，先点明作业主题，再具体介绍所种植物的培育过程，最后表达此次实践带来的收获，注意控制词数，语言简洁自然。
第4步 实战演练
[新考法·图文提示]红星中学校刊编辑部即将开展一次以“环境保护，从我做起”为主题的英语作文比赛。假如你是李华，请根据图示信息写一篇参赛作文。
要求：1. 须包括以下四个方面，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数 80 左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Take action to protect the environment
The earth is our only home but now it is in danger.
[新考法·图文提示]红星中学校刊编辑部即将开展一次以“环境保护，从我做起”为主题的英语作文比赛。假如你是李华，请根据图示信息写一篇参赛作文。
要求：1. 须包括以下四个方面，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数 80 左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Take action to protect the environment
The earth is our only home but now it is in danger.
I think that we should do something right now.
First, ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars to reduce air pollution and save energy. It's a good idea that we turn off the lights when we leave a room. Next, we should also recycle and separate our waste carefully. Above all, remember to plant more trees to make our world greener. If we all do these things, we can protect the earth. Let's start today! Then I believe the earth will become a better place for everyone.
First, ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars to reduce air pollution and save energy. It's a good idea that we turn off the lights when we leave a room. Next, we should also recycle and separate our waste carefully. Above all, remember to plant more trees to make our world greener. If we all do these things, we can protect the earth. Let's start today! Then I believe the earth will become a better place for everyone.
答案
【实战演练】
Take action to protect the environment
The earth is our only home but now it is in danger. I think that we should do something right now.
First, ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars to reduce air pollution and save energy. It's a good idea that we turn off the lights when we leave a room. Next, we should also recycle and separate our waste carefully. Above all, remember to plant more trees to make our world greener. If we all do these things, we can protect the earth. Let's start today! Then I believe the earth will become a better place for everyone.
Take action to protect the environment
The earth is our only home but now it is in danger. I think that we should do something right now.
First, ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars to reduce air pollution and save energy. It's a good idea that we turn off the lights when we leave a room. Next, we should also recycle and separate our waste carefully. Above all, remember to plant more trees to make our world greener. If we all do these things, we can protect the earth. Let's start today! Then I believe the earth will become a better place for everyone.
解析
【分析】
本题是环保主题的英语应用文写作，需结合图示信息完成。首先明确图示的四个核心环保行动：减少开车（选择骑车/步行）、随手关灯、垃圾分类回收、植树。写作时要承接已给开头，分点阐述这些行动，语言简洁连贯，符合词数要求，最后发出环保呼吁。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开头，点明要立即采取环保行动；
2. 对应图示元素分述环保措施：① 用骑车/步行代替开车，减少污染、节约能源；② 离开房间时关灯，节约用电；③ 分类回收垃圾，实现资源循环；④ 多植树，让世界更绿色；
3. 总结呼吁，说明共同行动能保护地球，展望美好未来，确保行文连贯、词数达标。
【答案】
Take action to protect the environment
The earth is our only home but now it is in danger. I think that we should do something right now.
First, ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars to reduce air pollution and save energy. It's a good idea that we turn off the lights when we leave a room. Next, we should also recycle and separate our waste carefully. Above all, remember to plant more trees to make our world greener. If we all do these things, we can protect the earth. Let's start today! Then I believe the earth will become a better place for everyone.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环保主题表达、图文转换写作
【点评】
本题结合图示考查环保主题的英语写作，要求紧扣图示信息，结构清晰，语言简洁，既考查学生的语言运用能力，又渗透环保意识，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是环保主题的英语应用文写作，需结合图示信息完成。首先明确图示的四个核心环保行动：减少开车（选择骑车/步行）、随手关灯、垃圾分类回收、植树。写作时要承接已给开头，分点阐述这些行动，语言简洁连贯，符合词数要求，最后发出环保呼吁。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开头，点明要立即采取环保行动；
2. 对应图示元素分述环保措施：① 用骑车/步行代替开车，减少污染、节约能源；② 离开房间时关灯，节约用电；③ 分类回收垃圾，实现资源循环；④ 多植树，让世界更绿色；
3. 总结呼吁，说明共同行动能保护地球，展望美好未来，确保行文连贯、词数达标。
【答案】
Take action to protect the environment
The earth is our only home but now it is in danger. I think that we should do something right now.
First, ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars to reduce air pollution and save energy. It's a good idea that we turn off the lights when we leave a room. Next, we should also recycle and separate our waste carefully. Above all, remember to plant more trees to make our world greener. If we all do these things, we can protect the earth. Let's start today! Then I believe the earth will become a better place for everyone.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环保主题表达、图文转换写作
【点评】
本题结合图示考查环保主题的英语写作，要求紧扣图示信息，结构清晰，语言简洁，既考查学生的语言运用能力，又渗透环保意识，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
