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【写作要求】
假设你是李明，你的英国笔友 Jack 想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的同学陈东介绍给他，希望他们成为朋友。内容包括：
年龄与外表：13 岁，高大健壮
兴趣与爱好：喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐，最喜欢的科目是英语
性格与为人：乐于助人，容易相处
注意：
（1）词数 70 左右。
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（3）邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
（4）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【思路分析】
1. 人称：第一人称和第三人称。
2. 时态：一般现在时。
3. 构思
① 开头说明写邮件的目的是介绍同学。
② 中间描述同学的年龄、外表、兴趣爱好、性格为人。
③ 结尾表达希望对方能喜欢这个朋友。
【写作步骤】
1. 如何写好开篇
直接说明写邮件目的，如：
I write this email to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
2. 如何写好中间
① 描述年龄与外表：
He is thirteen years old.
He is very tall and strong.
He has black hair and big eyes.
He looks very handsome.
② 描述兴趣与爱好：
He likes sports. He often plays football after school.
He also likes reading and listening to music.
He spends his weekends reading books and listening to his favourite songs.
English is his favourite subject.
③ 描述性格与为人：
He is very helpful.
When I have problems, he always helps me.
He is kind to everyone.
He is easy to get along with. Everyone likes him.
3. 如何写好结尾
表明希望对方能喜欢这个朋友，如：
I hope you will like him.
I think you will find him a great friend.
【范文借鉴】
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.（开头说明写邮件的目的是介绍同学）
He is thirteen years old. He is very tall and strong. He likes sports. He also likes reading and listening to music. English is his favourite subject. He is very helpful. He is easy to get along with. Everyone likes him.（中间描述同学的年龄、外表、兴趣爱好、性格为人）
I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes!（结尾表达希望对方能喜欢这个朋友）
Yours,
Li Ming
【写作要求】
假设你是李明，你的英国笔友 Jack 想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的同学陈东介绍给他，希望他们成为朋友。内容包括：
年龄与外表：13 岁，高大健壮
兴趣与爱好：喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐，最喜欢的科目是英语
性格与为人：乐于助人，容易相处
注意：
（1）词数 70 左右。
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（3）邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
（4）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【思路分析】
1. 人称：第一人称和第三人称。
2. 时态：一般现在时。
3. 构思
① 开头说明写邮件的目的是介绍同学。
② 中间描述同学的年龄、外表、兴趣爱好、性格为人。
③ 结尾表达希望对方能喜欢这个朋友。
【写作步骤】
1. 如何写好开篇
直接说明写邮件目的，如：
I write this email to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
2. 如何写好中间
① 描述年龄与外表：
He is thirteen years old.
He is very tall and strong.
He has black hair and big eyes.
He looks very handsome.
② 描述兴趣与爱好：
He likes sports. He often plays football after school.
He also likes reading and listening to music.
He spends his weekends reading books and listening to his favourite songs.
English is his favourite subject.
③ 描述性格与为人：
He is very helpful.
When I have problems, he always helps me.
He is kind to everyone.
He is easy to get along with. Everyone likes him.
3. 如何写好结尾
表明希望对方能喜欢这个朋友，如：
I hope you will like him.
I think you will find him a great friend.
【范文借鉴】
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.（开头说明写邮件的目的是介绍同学）
He is thirteen years old. He is very tall and strong. He likes sports. He also likes reading and listening to music. English is his favourite subject. He is very helpful. He is easy to get along with. Everyone likes him.（中间描述同学的年龄、外表、兴趣爱好、性格为人）
I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes!（结尾表达希望对方能喜欢这个朋友）
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
He is 13 years old, and he is tall and strong. He likes all kinds of sports, and he also enjoys reading and listening to music in his free time. His favourite subject is English and he does very well in it. He is always ready to help others when people around him have problems. He is easy to get along with, so all his classmates like him very much. I think you two can share a lot of interests and become good friends soon.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李明的身份给英国笔友Jack写一封介绍同学陈东的英文邮件，需涵盖年龄外表、兴趣爱好、性格为人三个核心要点，词数控制在70左右，时态统一用一般现在时，人称以第三人称描述陈东、第一人称完成写信。解题思路为：先承接给定的邮件开头，依次介绍陈东的基本信息、兴趣爱好、性格特点，最后表达希望两人成为朋友的期待，适当添加细节让行文连贯，严格遵循邮件格式要求。
【解析】
写作时，首先承接开头句，介绍陈东的年龄与外表（13岁，高大健壮）；接着说明其兴趣爱好（喜欢各类运动、阅读、听音乐，最喜欢英语）；再描述性格（乐于助人、易相处）；最后表达希望Jack和陈东成为朋友的愿望。注意用词准确，时态统一为一般现在时，控制词数，避免出现真实人名与校名。
【答案】
He is 13 years old, and he is tall and strong. He likes all kinds of sports, and he also enjoys reading and listening to music in his free time. His favourite subject is English and he does very well in it. He is always ready to help others when people around him have problems. He is easy to get along with, so all his classmates like him very much. I think you two can share a lot of interests and become good friends soon.
【知识点】
英文邮件写作、一般现在时、人物描述
【点评】
本篇作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，语句通顺连贯，用词恰当，符合英文邮件的写作规范，是一篇优秀的人物介绍类写作范文，能帮助学生掌握人物描述方法与英文邮件写作技巧。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李明的身份给英国笔友Jack写一封介绍同学陈东的英文邮件，需涵盖年龄外表、兴趣爱好、性格为人三个核心要点，词数控制在70左右，时态统一用一般现在时，人称以第三人称描述陈东、第一人称完成写信。解题思路为：先承接给定的邮件开头，依次介绍陈东的基本信息、兴趣爱好、性格特点，最后表达希望两人成为朋友的期待，适当添加细节让行文连贯，严格遵循邮件格式要求。
【解析】
写作时，首先承接开头句，介绍陈东的年龄与外表（13岁，高大健壮）；接着说明其兴趣爱好（喜欢各类运动、阅读、听音乐，最喜欢英语）；再描述性格（乐于助人、易相处）；最后表达希望Jack和陈东成为朋友的愿望。注意用词准确，时态统一为一般现在时，控制词数，避免出现真实人名与校名。
【答案】
He is 13 years old, and he is tall and strong. He likes all kinds of sports, and he also enjoys reading and listening to music in his free time. His favourite subject is English and he does very well in it. He is always ready to help others when people around him have problems. He is easy to get along with, so all his classmates like him very much. I think you two can share a lot of interests and become good friends soon.
【知识点】
英文邮件写作、一般现在时、人物描述
【点评】
本篇作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，语句通顺连贯，用词恰当，符合英文邮件的写作规范，是一篇优秀的人物介绍类写作范文，能帮助学生掌握人物描述方法与英文邮件写作技巧。
【难度系数】
0.6
