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五、书面表达
假如你是林涛,你的笔友Sam在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾,现在他来信,请你给他一些关于怎样与他人相处的建议。请根据下面提示,用英文给他写一封回信。
1.学会倾听；
2.学会沟通；
3.有困难向老师父母求助；
……
要求:
1.短文内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥；
2.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:respect 尊重
Dear Sam,
How's it going? I hope my following advice will help you to solve your problems.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
假如你是林涛,你的笔友Sam在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾,现在他来信,请你给他一些关于怎样与他人相处的建议。请根据下面提示,用英文给他写一封回信。
1.学会倾听；
2.学会沟通；
3.有困难向老师父母求助；
……
要求:
1.短文内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥；
2.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:respect 尊重
Dear Sam,
How's it going? I hope my following advice will help you to solve your problems.
First, you should learn to be a good listener. I'm important to keep quiet when others are talking with you. Just listen carefully, then you can share your opinions. Second, you should be ready to help each other. Helping others will improve the relationships with your friends. Third, when you have any problems or difficulties, please turn to you teachers or parents for help. They are sure to give you helpful advice. Last but not the least, be friendly and smile to those around you. A happy smile will make you popular with all the classmates.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
答案
Dear Sam,
How's it going? I hope my following advice will help you to solve your problems.
First, you should learn to be a good listener. I'm important to keep quiet when others are talking with you. Just listen carefully, then you can share your opinions. Second, you should be ready to help each other. Helping others will improve the relationships with your friends. Third, when you have any problems or difficulties, please turn to you teachers or parents for help. They are sure to give you helpful advice. Last but not the least, be friendly and smile to those around you. A happy smile will make you popular with all the classmates.
Hope you will deal with your problems soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
How's it going? I hope my following advice will help you to solve your problems.
First, you should learn to be a good listener. I'm important to keep quiet when others are talking with you. Just listen carefully, then you can share your opinions. Second, you should be ready to help each other. Helping others will improve the relationships with your friends. Third, when you have any problems or difficulties, please turn to you teachers or parents for help. They are sure to give you helpful advice. Last but not the least, be friendly and smile to those around you. A happy smile will make you popular with all the classmates.
Hope you will deal with your problems soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以林涛身份给笔友Sam写回信，针对其与同学的矛盾提人际相处建议，需包含“学会倾听、学会沟通、向师长求助”三个给定要点，适当拓展，词数80左右，开头结尾已固定。解题思路：1. 承接开头后，用清晰的连接词（First/Second/Third等）分点阐述建议；2. 每个要点补充具体做法（如倾听时保持安静、互相帮助改善关系）；3. 结尾补充祝福，符合书信格式，控制词数达标。
【解析】
先承接开头句，分点展开内容：①学会倾听：告知Sam与他人交谈时保持安静，认真倾听后再表达观点；②学会沟通：强调互相帮助能改善同学间的关系；③向师长求助：遇到困难可找老师或父母，他们会提供有用建议；④适当拓展：补充微笑待人，让自己受同学欢迎。最后添加祝福句，确保词数符合要求，用词准确，符合英语书信表达习惯。
【答案】
Dear Sam,
How's it going? I hope my following advice will help you to solve your problems.
First, you should learn to be a good listener. It's important to keep quiet when others are talking with you. Just listen carefully, then you can share your opinions. Second, you should be ready to help each other. Helping others will improve the relationships with your friends. Third, when you have any problems or difficulties, please turn to your teachers or parents for help. They are sure to give you helpful advice. Last but not the least, be friendly and smile to those around you. A happy smile will make you popular with all the classmates.
Hope you will deal with your problems soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类表达、日常交际用语
【点评】
这封回信紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有给定要点并适当拓展，结构清晰（用连接词分点），语言简洁流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的规范，能有效为Sam提供人际相处的实用建议。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：以林涛身份给笔友Sam写回信，针对其与同学的矛盾提人际相处建议，需包含“学会倾听、学会沟通、向师长求助”三个给定要点，适当拓展，词数80左右，开头结尾已固定。解题思路：1. 承接开头后，用清晰的连接词（First/Second/Third等）分点阐述建议；2. 每个要点补充具体做法（如倾听时保持安静、互相帮助改善关系）；3. 结尾补充祝福，符合书信格式，控制词数达标。
【解析】
先承接开头句，分点展开内容：①学会倾听：告知Sam与他人交谈时保持安静，认真倾听后再表达观点；②学会沟通：强调互相帮助能改善同学间的关系；③向师长求助：遇到困难可找老师或父母，他们会提供有用建议；④适当拓展：补充微笑待人，让自己受同学欢迎。最后添加祝福句，确保词数符合要求，用词准确，符合英语书信表达习惯。
【答案】
Dear Sam,
How's it going? I hope my following advice will help you to solve your problems.
First, you should learn to be a good listener. It's important to keep quiet when others are talking with you. Just listen carefully, then you can share your opinions. Second, you should be ready to help each other. Helping others will improve the relationships with your friends. Third, when you have any problems or difficulties, please turn to your teachers or parents for help. They are sure to give you helpful advice. Last but not the least, be friendly and smile to those around you. A happy smile will make you popular with all the classmates.
Hope you will deal with your problems soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类表达、日常交际用语
【点评】
这封回信紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有给定要点并适当拓展，结构清晰（用连接词分点），语言简洁流畅，符合初中英语书面表达的规范，能有效为Sam提供人际相处的实用建议。
【难度系数】
0.6
