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假如你是李华。请给你加拿大的笔友 Eric 写一封80词左右的邮件，介绍你和你的朋友的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下：
参考词汇：
志愿者活动：volunteer activity 街区：neighbourhood 打扫街道：clean the street做家务：do housework 讲故事：tell stories 帮助他人：help others Dear Eric，
How's it going? ___
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华。请给你加拿大的笔友 Eric 写一封80词左右的邮件，介绍你和你的朋友的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下：
参考词汇：
志愿者活动：volunteer activity 街区：neighbourhood 打扫街道：clean the street做家务：do housework 讲故事：tell stories 帮助他人：help others Dear Eric，
How's it going? ___
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Eric,
How's it going? You want to know what I've done these days. Now let me tell you.
I'd like to help others. Last Sunday, my friends and I did some volunteer activities in the neighbourhood near our school. In the morning, we helped to clean up the street. And then we went to the old people's home and helped the elderly do housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the kids in the children's home. That day, I was busy but very happy and excited. I got such a strong feeling of satisfaction.
I think helping others can bring happiness not only for others but also for ourselves. Sometimes small actions can make a big difference to the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
How's it going? You want to know what I've done these days. Now let me tell you.
I'd like to help others. Last Sunday, my friends and I did some volunteer activities in the neighbourhood near our school. In the morning, we helped to clean up the street. And then we went to the old people's home and helped the elderly do housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the kids in the children's home. That day, I was busy but very happy and excited. I got such a strong feeling of satisfaction.
I think helping others can bring happiness not only for others but also for ourselves. Sometimes small actions can make a big difference to the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【解析】
这是一篇介绍志愿者活动的邮件写作，可按照如下思路完成：
1. 开篇承接问候，引出本次要介绍的志愿者活动主题；
2. 明确交代活动时间（上周日）、地点（学校附近的街区）；
3. 按时间顺序依次描述活动内容：上午打扫街道、帮老人做家务，下午给小朋友讲故事；
4. 最后抒发活动感受，点明帮助他人的意义，符合80词左右的词数要求，覆盖全部要点。
【答案】
Dear Eric,
How's it going? You want to know what I've done these days. Now let me tell you.
I'd like to help others. Last Sunday, my friends and I did some volunteer activities in the neighbourhood near our school. In the morning, we helped to clean up the street. And then we went to the old people's home and helped the elderly do housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the kids in the children's home. That day, I was busy but very happy and excited. I got such a strong feeling of satisfaction.
I think helping others can bring happiness not only for others but also for ourselves. Sometimes small actions can make a big difference to the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
志愿者话题表达
要点式作文书写
【点评】
本题是提纲类邮件写作，要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照时间顺序整合给定的提示信息，正确使用相关参考词汇，保证语句通顺、词数达标即可完成，难度适中，能够锻炼学生的叙事类英文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇介绍志愿者活动的邮件写作，可按照如下思路完成：
1. 开篇承接问候，引出本次要介绍的志愿者活动主题；
2. 明确交代活动时间（上周日）、地点（学校附近的街区）；
3. 按时间顺序依次描述活动内容：上午打扫街道、帮老人做家务，下午给小朋友讲故事；
4. 最后抒发活动感受，点明帮助他人的意义，符合80词左右的词数要求，覆盖全部要点。
【答案】
Dear Eric,
How's it going? You want to know what I've done these days. Now let me tell you.
I'd like to help others. Last Sunday, my friends and I did some volunteer activities in the neighbourhood near our school. In the morning, we helped to clean up the street. And then we went to the old people's home and helped the elderly do housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the kids in the children's home. That day, I was busy but very happy and excited. I got such a strong feeling of satisfaction.
I think helping others can bring happiness not only for others but also for ourselves. Sometimes small actions can make a big difference to the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
志愿者话题表达
要点式作文书写
【点评】
本题是提纲类邮件写作，要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照时间顺序整合给定的提示信息，正确使用相关参考词汇，保证语句通顺、词数达标即可完成，难度适中，能够锻炼学生的叙事类英文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
