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七、书面表达（15 分）
假如你是李华，最近你做了一项关于闲暇时间活动的小调查，下表是你的调查结果。请根据以下表格内容和要求，写一篇英文文章介绍你的调查结果。
要求：1. 语句通顺、语法正确、语篇连贯，包含表格中所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 90 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I asked my friends about their free time activities. Here are the results.
假如你是李华，最近你做了一项关于闲暇时间活动的小调查，下表是你的调查结果。请根据以下表格内容和要求，写一篇英文文章介绍你的调查结果。
要求：1. 语句通顺、语法正确、语篇连贯，包含表格中所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 90 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I asked my friends about their free time activities. Here are the results.
One possible version:
I asked my friends about their free time activities. Here are the results.
My friends enjoy different kinds of activities. Li Yu likes music. She thinks music is relaxing. She plays the violin three times a week. Betty loves sports. It's great fun for her to play sports. Her favorite sport is volleyball. She plays volleyball twice a week. Mike reads English magazines every day. He enjoys reading books very much. He thinks he can learn a lot of things from books.
As for me, I like cooking very much. I often help my mother cook meals on weekends or holidays. I think doing some housework can not only exercise myself but also help our parents.
I asked my friends about their free time activities. Here are the results.
My friends enjoy different kinds of activities. Li Yu likes music. She thinks music is relaxing. She plays the violin three times a week. Betty loves sports. It's great fun for her to play sports. Her favorite sport is volleyball. She plays volleyball twice a week. Mike reads English magazines every day. He enjoys reading books very much. He thinks he can learn a lot of things from books.
As for me, I like cooking very much. I often help my mother cook meals on weekends or holidays. I think doing some housework can not only exercise myself but also help our parents.
答案
One possible version:
I asked my friends about their free time activities. Here are the results.
My friends enjoy different kinds of activities. Li Yu likes music. She thinks music is relaxing. She plays the violin three times a week. Betty loves sports. It's great fun for her to play sports. Her favorite sport is volleyball. She plays volleyball twice a week. Mike reads English magazines every day. He enjoys reading books very much. He thinks he can learn a lot of things from books.
As for me, I like cooking very much. I often help my mother cook meals on weekends or holidays. I think doing some housework can not only exercise myself but also help our parents.
I asked my friends about their free time activities. Here are the results.
My friends enjoy different kinds of activities. Li Yu likes music. She thinks music is relaxing. She plays the violin three times a week. Betty loves sports. It's great fun for her to play sports. Her favorite sport is volleyball. She plays volleyball twice a week. Mike reads English magazines every day. He enjoys reading books very much. He thinks he can learn a lot of things from books.
As for me, I like cooking very much. I often help my mother cook meals on weekends or holidays. I think doing some housework can not only exercise myself but also help our parents.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确核心任务：以李华的身份，基于表格信息撰写介绍课余活动调查结果的短文。第一步先梳理所有必须覆盖的要点：①Li Yu的活动是拉小提琴，频率为一周三次；②Betty的活动是打排球，频率为一周两次；③Mike的活动是读英文杂志，频率为每天；④补充自己的课余活动和对应频率。接下来搭建写作逻辑：先承接题目给出的开头，总述大家的课余活动各不相同，再逐个介绍三位朋友的情况，每个部分除了表格基础信息，补充1句符合人物行为逻辑的小细节让内容更饱满，最后介绍自己的相关情况，全程注意使用正确的一般现在时，保证第三人称单数动词变形准确，频率短语使用规范，控制总词数在90左右，就能写出符合要求的短文。
【解析】
写作可按照以下三步完成：
1. 承接给定开头，用总起句说明不同的人有不同的课余爱好，自然引出下文的分述内容；
2. 依次介绍三位受访者的信息：
① 介绍Li Yu：说明她喜爱音乐，觉得音乐很放松，对应写出她每周拉三次小提琴，完整覆盖表格信息；
② 介绍Betty：说明她热爱运动，最喜欢的运动是排球，对应写出她每周打两次排球；
③ 介绍Mike：说明他非常喜爱阅读，对应写出他每天都读英文杂志，补充他认为能从书籍中学到很多内容的细节；
3. 最后补充自身的课余活动和对应频率，加上合理的个人感受，完成全文，保证所有要点无遗漏，语篇衔接自然，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I asked my friends about their free time activities. Here are the results.
My friends enjoy different kinds of activities. Li Yu likes music. She thinks music is relaxing. She plays the violin three times a week. Betty loves sports. It's great fun for her to play sports. Her favorite sport is volleyball. She plays volleyball twice a week. Mike reads English magazines every day. He enjoys reading books very much. He thinks he can learn a lot of things from books.
As for me, I like cooking very much. I often help my mother cook meals on weekends or holidays. I think doing some housework can not only exercise myself but also help our parents.
【知识点】
一般现在时，频率表达，信息类写作
【点评】
本题属于基础的信息说明类书面表达，所有核心要点都已经在表格中明确给出，学生只需要准确提取对应人物的活动、频率信息，适当补充符合逻辑的细节让语篇更连贯，注意第三人称单数谓语的正确形式，不要遗漏要点，就可以顺利完成写作，能够有效考察学生的基础英文表达和信息整合能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先要明确核心任务：以李华的身份，基于表格信息撰写介绍课余活动调查结果的短文。第一步先梳理所有必须覆盖的要点：①Li Yu的活动是拉小提琴，频率为一周三次；②Betty的活动是打排球，频率为一周两次；③Mike的活动是读英文杂志，频率为每天；④补充自己的课余活动和对应频率。接下来搭建写作逻辑：先承接题目给出的开头，总述大家的课余活动各不相同，再逐个介绍三位朋友的情况，每个部分除了表格基础信息，补充1句符合人物行为逻辑的小细节让内容更饱满，最后介绍自己的相关情况，全程注意使用正确的一般现在时，保证第三人称单数动词变形准确，频率短语使用规范，控制总词数在90左右，就能写出符合要求的短文。
【解析】
写作可按照以下三步完成：
1. 承接给定开头，用总起句说明不同的人有不同的课余爱好，自然引出下文的分述内容；
2. 依次介绍三位受访者的信息：
① 介绍Li Yu：说明她喜爱音乐，觉得音乐很放松，对应写出她每周拉三次小提琴，完整覆盖表格信息；
② 介绍Betty：说明她热爱运动，最喜欢的运动是排球，对应写出她每周打两次排球；
③ 介绍Mike：说明他非常喜爱阅读，对应写出他每天都读英文杂志，补充他认为能从书籍中学到很多内容的细节；
3. 最后补充自身的课余活动和对应频率，加上合理的个人感受，完成全文，保证所有要点无遗漏，语篇衔接自然，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I asked my friends about their free time activities. Here are the results.
My friends enjoy different kinds of activities. Li Yu likes music. She thinks music is relaxing. She plays the violin three times a week. Betty loves sports. It's great fun for her to play sports. Her favorite sport is volleyball. She plays volleyball twice a week. Mike reads English magazines every day. He enjoys reading books very much. He thinks he can learn a lot of things from books.
As for me, I like cooking very much. I often help my mother cook meals on weekends or holidays. I think doing some housework can not only exercise myself but also help our parents.
【知识点】
一般现在时，频率表达，信息类写作
【点评】
本题属于基础的信息说明类书面表达，所有核心要点都已经在表格中明确给出，学生只需要准确提取对应人物的活动、频率信息，适当补充符合逻辑的细节让语篇更连贯，注意第三人称单数谓语的正确形式，不要遗漏要点，就可以顺利完成写作，能够有效考察学生的基础英文表达和信息整合能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
