2026年阳光学业评价八年级英语下册沪教版第9页答案
四、构建关联
Please share one of your voluntary experiences or plans. Who did / will you
help? What was / is the problem? And how did / will you help?
Last month, I helped an old lady in our building. It seemed difficult for her to carry heavy things. I helped take her shopping bags home and watered her plants. She offered me some fruit and we ate it together. It made me happy!

答案

Last month, I helped an old lady in our building. It seemed difficult for her to carry
heavy things. I helped take her shopping bags home and watered her plants. She offered me some
fruit and we ate it together. It made me happy!

解析

【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题,要求围绕“志愿经历或计划”展开,需明确三个核心要素:帮助的对象、存在的问题、帮助的方式。解题思路为:先选取贴近生活的具体志愿经历(如帮助邻居老人),再用一般过去时清晰叙述,逐一对应题目要求的要点,最后补充细节与感受,确保语句通顺、符合英语表达逻辑。
【解析】
1. 确定主题与时态:选取帮助邻居老人的真实经历,使用一般过去时叙述。
2. 点明核心要素:
帮助对象:an old lady in our building;
问题:difficult to carry heavy things;
帮助方式:helped take shopping bags home and water plants;
3. 补充细节与感受,使内容完整连贯。
【答案】
Last month, I helped an old lady in our building. It seemed difficult for her to carry heavy things. I helped take her shopping bags home and watered her plants. She offered me some fruit and we ate it together. It made me happy!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时运用、话题类写作
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活实际,考查基础话题写作能力,要求覆盖指定信息点,时态与语句通顺即可完成,难度适中,能有效检验学生的英语表达基础。
【难度系数】
0.7