七、书面表达
陪伴家人,你会幸福;笑对人生,你会幸福;好友相聚,你会幸福;努力奋斗,你会幸福;酣畅淋漓地运动,你会幸福;享用一顿美食,你会幸福;亲近自然,你会幸福;帮助他人,你会幸福……英语校报正在开展以“如何获得幸福”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你以“How to Be Happy”为题,用英文写一篇短文投稿。

要求:1. 短文词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in their daily life.
陪伴家人,你会幸福;笑对人生,你会幸福;好友相聚,你会幸福;努力奋斗,你会幸福;酣畅淋漓地运动,你会幸福;享用一顿美食,你会幸福;亲近自然,你会幸福;帮助他人,你会幸福……英语校报正在开展以“如何获得幸福”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请你以“How to Be Happy”为题,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
要求:1. 短文词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in their daily life.
As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. First, love your family. Spend time with them, like having dinners together or chatting. These things can bring warmth. Second, stay positive. When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot. Third, help others. Give a hand to those in need, such as volunteering, which makes you feel useful. Also, enjoy sports. Running or playing ball games makes you release stress and feel energetic.
By doing these, you will fill your life with happiness.
答案
One possible version:
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in their daily life.
As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. First, love your family. Spend time with them, like having dinners together or chatting. These things can bring warmth. Second, stay positive. When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot. Third, help others. Give a hand to those in need, such as volunteering, which makes you feel useful. Also, enjoy sports. Running or playing ball games makes you release stress and feel energetic.
By doing these, you will fill your life with happiness.
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in their daily life.
As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. First, love your family. Spend time with them, like having dinners together or chatting. These things can bring warmth. Second, stay positive. When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot. Third, help others. Give a hand to those in need, such as volunteering, which makes you feel useful. Also, enjoy sports. Running or playing ball games makes you release stress and feel energetic.
By doing these, you will fill your life with happiness.
解析
【分析】本题是英语话题书面表达,主题为“How to Be Happy”,要求结合提示要点(爱家人、保持积极、帮助他人等),词数80左右,开头已给出,需补充内容使行文连贯。解题思路:1. 承接开头引出获得幸福的方法;2. 围绕提示的几个方面展开,每个方面添加简单细节(如陪家人吃饭、微笑面对问题等);3. 最后总结呼应主题,确保语言通顺、词数符合要求。
【解析】本题需按书面表达规范完成:1. 承接开头后说明有多种获得幸福的方法;2. 分点阐述:①爱家人,通过陪伴(如共进晚餐、聊天)带来温暖;②保持积极,面对问题时用微笑和乐观心态应对;③帮助他人,通过志愿等行为让自己有价值;④补充享受运动(如跑步、打球)释放压力;3. 结尾总结,呼应主题,确保词数约80,无真实信息,行文连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in their daily life.
As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. First, love your family. Spend time with them, like having dinners together or chatting. These things can bring warmth. Second, stay positive. When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot. Third, help others. Give a hand to those in need, such as volunteering, which makes you feel useful. Also, enjoy sports. Running or playing ball games makes you release stress and feel energetic.
By doing these, you will fill your life with happiness.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】本题为英语话题类书面表达题,围绕“如何获得幸福”展开,考查学生围绕主题组织语言、补充细节、使行文连贯的能力,符合初中英语写作的常见考查形式。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】本题需按书面表达规范完成:1. 承接开头后说明有多种获得幸福的方法;2. 分点阐述:①爱家人,通过陪伴(如共进晚餐、聊天)带来温暖;②保持积极,面对问题时用微笑和乐观心态应对;③帮助他人,通过志愿等行为让自己有价值;④补充享受运动(如跑步、打球)释放压力;3. 结尾总结,呼应主题,确保词数约80,无真实信息,行文连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in their daily life.
As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. First, love your family. Spend time with them, like having dinners together or chatting. These things can bring warmth. Second, stay positive. When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot. Third, help others. Give a hand to those in need, such as volunteering, which makes you feel useful. Also, enjoy sports. Running or playing ball games makes you release stress and feel energetic.
By doing these, you will fill your life with happiness.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】本题为英语话题类书面表达题,围绕“如何获得幸福”展开,考查学生围绕主题组织语言、补充细节、使行文连贯的能力,符合初中英语写作的常见考查形式。
【难度系数】0.5
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