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假如你是 John，你校试行在课间播放音乐。你班同学对此进行了讨论，看法不一。大多数同学赞同，而部分同学反对。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，给你们的校长写一封信，介绍大家的观点，同时谈谈自己的看法。
赞同者反对者
1.音乐给同学们带来快乐。
1.课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果。
原因2.使大脑得到放松。2.图有时上课还沉浸在课间音乐中，对上课有影响。
3.能提高下一节课的学习效率。
你的观点自拟1—————2个观点
【要求】
1.词数90左右。信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2.完整表达表格中的提示内容，句式规范，字迹工整。
3.可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇:学习效率 study efficiency;预期的 expected;沉浸在………中 be lost in……………
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break.
Yours sincerely,
John
赞同者反对者
1.音乐给同学们带来快乐。
1.课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果。
原因2.使大脑得到放松。2.图有时上课还沉浸在课间音乐中，对上课有影响。
3.能提高下一节课的学习效率。
你的观点自拟1—————2个观点
【要求】
1.词数90左右。信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2.完整表达表格中的提示内容，句式规范，字迹工整。
3.可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇:学习效率 study efficiency;预期的 expected;沉浸在………中 be lost in……………
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break.
Yours sincerely,
John
答案
One possible version
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封给校长的建议信，需介绍班级对课间播放音乐的不同观点并表达个人看法。解题思路：1. 衔接题目给定的开头，说明班级针对课间音乐播放展开了讨论；2. 分两部分阐述赞同者的三个理由（对应表格中带来快乐、放松大脑、提高学习效率）；3. 阐述反对者的两个理由（对应表格中时间短无预期效果、影响上课）；4. 表达个人观点，确保内容完整、条理清晰，符合书信格式与词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头补充：承接给定开头，说明全班学生都发表了意见；
2. 赞同者观点：多数同学赞同课间播放音乐，理由为音乐带来快乐、帮助放松、提高学习效率；
3. 反对者观点：部分同学反对，理由为课间时间短无法达到预期效果、上课会沉浸在音乐中影响学习；
4. 个人观点：认为需要安静而非音乐的噪音，不喜欢课间播放音乐；
5. 结尾按要求保留，确保句式规范、内容连贯，使用参考词汇，词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
【知识点】
英语书信写作，观点表达，理由阐述
【点评】
该作文严格遵循题目要求，完整呈现了赞同者与反对者的观点及理由，清晰表达了个人看法，句式规范、内容连贯，符合书信格式，词数达标，适当发挥了个人观点，是一篇符合要求的应用文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一封给校长的建议信，需介绍班级对课间播放音乐的不同观点并表达个人看法。解题思路：1. 衔接题目给定的开头，说明班级针对课间音乐播放展开了讨论；2. 分两部分阐述赞同者的三个理由（对应表格中带来快乐、放松大脑、提高学习效率）；3. 阐述反对者的两个理由（对应表格中时间短无预期效果、影响上课）；4. 表达个人观点，确保内容完整、条理清晰，符合书信格式与词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头补充：承接给定开头，说明全班学生都发表了意见；
2. 赞同者观点：多数同学赞同课间播放音乐，理由为音乐带来快乐、帮助放松、提高学习效率；
3. 反对者观点：部分同学反对，理由为课间时间短无法达到预期效果、上课会沉浸在音乐中影响学习；
4. 个人观点：认为需要安静而非音乐的噪音，不喜欢课间播放音乐；
5. 结尾按要求保留，确保句式规范、内容连贯，使用参考词汇，词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
【知识点】
英语书信写作，观点表达，理由阐述
【点评】
该作文严格遵循题目要求，完整呈现了赞同者与反对者的观点及理由，清晰表达了个人看法，句式规范、内容连贯，符合书信格式，词数达标，适当发挥了个人观点，是一篇符合要求的应用文。
【难度系数】
0.5
