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五、书面表达。
音乐不仅能够给人们带来好的享受，还能在一定程度上疏解压力。假如你是Mike，你校校报正在征集有关音乐的文稿，请你以“My favourite music”为题，根据以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，向校报投稿。
注意:1. 词数90左右;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
My favourite music
音乐不仅能够给人们带来好的享受，还能在一定程度上疏解压力。假如你是Mike，你校校报正在征集有关音乐的文稿，请你以“My favourite music”为题，根据以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，向校报投稿。
注意:1. 词数90左右;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
My favourite music
I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody.
Last month, I felt very nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of light music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam! I enjoy light music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence.
Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul. Listening to light music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life.
In a word, music is an important part of my life. It brings me enjoyment and helps me deal with stress.
I will always love music!
答案
One possible version:
My favourite music
I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody.
Last month, I felt very nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of light music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam! I enjoy light music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence. Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul. Listening to light music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life.
In a word, music is an important part of my life. It brings me enjoyment and helps me deal with stress. I will always love music!
My favourite music
I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody.
Last month, I felt very nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of light music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam! I enjoy light music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence. Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul. Listening to light music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life.
In a word, music is an important part of my life. It brings me enjoyment and helps me deal with stress. I will always love music!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“My favourite music”，需紧扣表格提示的轻音乐类型、考试前听音乐放松的亲身经历、喜欢的原因（旋律优美、建立自信、净化心灵）、个人收获（带来愉悦）展开。写作思路：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的音乐类型；2. 叙述亲身经历体现音乐的作用；3. 说明喜欢轻音乐的原因；4. 总结音乐对自身的意义，确保语句通顺、符合词数要求，适当发挥。
【解析】
按照写作思路依次组织内容：
1. 开篇点题：I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody.
2. 叙述亲身经历：Last month, I felt very nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of light music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam!
3. 说明喜欢的原因：I enjoy light music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence. Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul.
4. 补充收获并总结：Listening to light music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life. In a word, music is an important part of my life. It brings me enjoyment and helps me deal with stress. I will always love music!
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite music
I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody.
Last month, I felt very nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of light music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam! I enjoy light music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence. Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul. Listening to light music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life.
In a word, music is an important part of my life. It brings me enjoyment and helps me deal with stress. I will always love music!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结合自身经历展开，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合词数要求，准确表达了对轻音乐的喜爱及音乐的积极影响，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作主题为“My favourite music”，需紧扣表格提示的轻音乐类型、考试前听音乐放松的亲身经历、喜欢的原因（旋律优美、建立自信、净化心灵）、个人收获（带来愉悦）展开。写作思路：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的音乐类型；2. 叙述亲身经历体现音乐的作用；3. 说明喜欢轻音乐的原因；4. 总结音乐对自身的意义，确保语句通顺、符合词数要求，适当发挥。
【解析】
按照写作思路依次组织内容：
1. 开篇点题：I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody.
2. 叙述亲身经历：Last month, I felt very nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of light music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam!
3. 说明喜欢的原因：I enjoy light music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence. Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul.
4. 补充收获并总结：Listening to light music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life. In a word, music is an important part of my life. It brings me enjoyment and helps me deal with stress. I will always love music!
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite music
I like light music best because of its beautiful and gentle melody.
Last month, I felt very nervous before a big exam. When I listened to a piece of light music, I slowly became relaxed and calm. Finally, I did really well in that exam! I enjoy light music for two reasons. Firstly, it helps build up my confidence. Secondly, it can deeply purify my soul. Listening to light music not only makes me happy but also teaches me to cherish and love life.
In a word, music is an important part of my life. It brings me enjoyment and helps me deal with stress. I will always love music!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结合自身经历展开，结构清晰，语言通顺，符合词数要求，准确表达了对轻音乐的喜爱及音乐的积极影响，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
