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八、书面表达
假设你是李华，请你根据写作提示，以
书信的形式向你的外国笔友汤米描述家乡近几年的变化（基础设施/环境/生活方式等）。
写作提示：
1. What were the roads/transportation/... like in the past?
2. What changes have taken place now?
3. What are your feelings about the changes?
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，词数约80个，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的学生姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Tommy,
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years, making our lives more convenient and comfortable.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
假设你是李华，请你根据写作提示，以
书信的形式向你的外国笔友汤米描述家乡近几年的变化（基础设施/环境/生活方式等）。
写作提示：
1. What were the roads/transportation/... like in the past?
2. What changes have taken place now?
3. What are your feelings about the changes?
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，词数约80个，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的学生姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Tommy,
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years, making our lives more convenient and comfortable.
In the past, our roads were dirty and full of holes. People had to ride bicycles carefully to avoid falling down. There were no traffic lights, so accidents happened sometimes. Most families didn't own cars.
Nowadays, wide and smooth roads connect every village. Bright streetlights and clear traffic signs make night driving safe. Many families buy cars since the new highways can reach the city in 30 minutes. Electric buses and shared bikes are popular green choices.
I believe these changes show China's development. I feel so happy to enjoy the modern life. Hope you will come and have a look one day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Tommy,
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years, making our lives more convenient and comfortable.
In the past, our roads were dirty and full of holes. People had to ride bicycles carefully to avoid falling down. There were no traffic lights, so accidents happened sometimes. Most families didn't own cars.
Nowadays, wide and smooth roads connect every village. Bright streetlights and clear traffic signs make night driving safe. Many families buy cars since the new highways can reach the city in 30 minutes. Electric buses and shared bikes are popular green choices.
I believe these changes show China's development. I feel so happy to enjoy the modern life. Hope you will come and have a look one day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years, making our lives more convenient and comfortable.
In the past, our roads were dirty and full of holes. People had to ride bicycles carefully to avoid falling down. There were no traffic lights, so accidents happened sometimes. Most families didn't own cars.
Nowadays, wide and smooth roads connect every village. Bright streetlights and clear traffic signs make night driving safe. Many families buy cars since the new highways can reach the city in 30 minutes. Electric buses and shared bikes are popular green choices.
I believe these changes show China's development. I feel so happy to enjoy the modern life. Hope you will come and have a look one day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语书信类书面表达，需以李华的身份向外国笔友汤米介绍家乡近年的变化，核心要求是覆盖三个提示点：过去的道路/交通状况、现在的变化、个人感受。解题思路：①遵循书信格式（开头、结尾固定）；②按提示顺序展开内容：先描述过去道路坑洼、无交通设施、家庭少车的状况，再写现在道路拓宽、交通设施完善、出行方式多样的变化，最后表达对变化的感受；③控制词数约80，确保行文连贯、语言通顺，无真实信息。
【解析】写作步骤：1.承接开头，用简洁语言描述过去的交通状况：道路坑洼、无红绿灯、多数家庭无车；2.接着写现在的变化：道路变宽、有完善的交通设施、私家车、公交、共享单车等绿色出行方式普及；3.最后表达对家乡变化的认可与喜悦，并邀请笔友来访；4.检查是否覆盖所有提示点，调整语言确保通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear Tommy,
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years, making our lives more convenient and comfortable.
In the past, our roads were dirty and full of holes. People had to ride bicycles carefully to avoid falling down. There were no traffic lights, so accidents happened sometimes. Most families didn't own cars.
Nowadays, wide and smooth roads connect every village. Bright streetlights and clear traffic signs make night driving safe. Many families buy cars since the new highways can reach the city in 30 minutes. Electric buses and shared bikes are popular green choices.
I believe these changes show China's development. I feel so happy to enjoy the modern life. Hope you will come and have a look one day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣写作提示，完整覆盖所有要求的要点，书信格式规范，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的要求，适当发挥且词数达标，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1.承接开头，用简洁语言描述过去的交通状况：道路坑洼、无红绿灯、多数家庭无车；2.接着写现在的变化：道路变宽、有完善的交通设施、私家车、公交、共享单车等绿色出行方式普及；3.最后表达对家乡变化的认可与喜悦，并邀请笔友来访；4.检查是否覆盖所有提示点，调整语言确保通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear Tommy,
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years, making our lives more convenient and comfortable.
In the past, our roads were dirty and full of holes. People had to ride bicycles carefully to avoid falling down. There were no traffic lights, so accidents happened sometimes. Most families didn't own cars.
Nowadays, wide and smooth roads connect every village. Bright streetlights and clear traffic signs make night driving safe. Many families buy cars since the new highways can reach the city in 30 minutes. Electric buses and shared bikes are popular green choices.
I believe these changes show China's development. I feel so happy to enjoy the modern life. Hope you will come and have a look one day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题类书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣写作提示，完整覆盖所有要求的要点，书信格式规范，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的要求，适当发挥且词数达标，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
