书面表达
请你担任“旅游推荐官”,参考下面思维导图中的信息,写一篇短文,向人们推荐一个旅行的好去处。
要求:
·条理清楚,语句通顺;
·标点正确,书写规范;
·内容不少于5句话。

You can travel to
总分5分。我的得分:

我的总分: Excellent 33-40 OK 25-32 Review again 0-24
请你担任“旅游推荐官”,参考下面思维导图中的信息,写一篇短文,向人们推荐一个旅行的好去处。
要求:
·条理清楚,语句通顺;
·标点正确,书写规范;
·内容不少于5句话。
You can travel to
总分5分。我的得分:
我的总分: Excellent 33-40 OK 25-32 Review again 0-24
答案
参考范文:
You can travel to Beijing, the capital of China.
It's very easy to get around the city by subway or shared bike.
There are many famous must-see places here, like the Great Wall and the Palace Museum.
You can take lots of photos, visit different museums and buy lovely traditional gifts during your trip.
If you love sports, you can go hiking in the beautiful Fragrant Hills on sunny days.
The most famous local food is Beijing roast duck, it tastes really delicious.
You will surely have a wonderful time if you come to visit Beijing.
You can travel to Beijing, the capital of China.
It's very easy to get around the city by subway or shared bike.
There are many famous must-see places here, like the Great Wall and the Palace Museum.
You can take lots of photos, visit different museums and buy lovely traditional gifts during your trip.
If you love sports, you can go hiking in the beautiful Fragrant Hills on sunny days.
The most famous local food is Beijing roast duck, it tastes really delicious.
You will surely have a wonderful time if you come to visit Beijing.
解析
【分析】首先确定推荐的旅行地点,选择旅游资源丰富的地点(如北京);接着围绕旅游的核心要素(交通、景点、活动、美食等)组织内容,确保条理清晰;再用通顺的英语句子表达,满足不少于5句话的要求,注意标点正确、书写规范。
【解析】先点明推荐的地点及地位,再介绍当地便利的交通,接着列举著名景点、可参与的活动,再提及特色美食,最后总结旅行体验,形成完整的推荐短文。
【答案】You can travel to Beijing, the capital of China. It's very easy to get around the city by subway or shared bike. There are many famous must-see places here, like the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. You can take lots of photos, visit different museums and buy lovely traditional gifts during your trip. If you love sports, you can go hiking in the beautiful Fragrant Hills on sunny days. The most famous local food is Beijing roast duck, it tastes really delicious. You will surely have a wonderful time if you come to visit Beijing.
【知识点】英语书面表达、旅游话题写作
【点评】该范文围绕北京展开推荐,从交通、景点、活动、美食等多方面介绍,条理清晰,语句通顺,符合题目要求,能有效吸引读者前往旅行。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】先点明推荐的地点及地位,再介绍当地便利的交通,接着列举著名景点、可参与的活动,再提及特色美食,最后总结旅行体验,形成完整的推荐短文。
【答案】You can travel to Beijing, the capital of China. It's very easy to get around the city by subway or shared bike. There are many famous must-see places here, like the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. You can take lots of photos, visit different museums and buy lovely traditional gifts during your trip. If you love sports, you can go hiking in the beautiful Fragrant Hills on sunny days. The most famous local food is Beijing roast duck, it tastes really delicious. You will surely have a wonderful time if you come to visit Beijing.
【知识点】英语书面表达、旅游话题写作
【点评】该范文围绕北京展开推荐,从交通、景点、活动、美食等多方面介绍,条理清晰,语句通顺,符合题目要求,能有效吸引读者前往旅行。
【难度系数】0.5
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