Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
假设你是玫瑰花园学校(Rose Garden School)的九年级学生李华,英国姊妹学校校长Mrs Miller带领学生来你校访问,你被选为学生代表上台发言。请你用英语撰写一篇欢迎词,欢迎Mrs Miller和同学们的同时,介绍你校的校园特色文化或活动,说明接待期间你所负责的具体工作、能给予的帮助,并送上你和同学们的祝福。
注意:1.欢迎词中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息;
2.不少于80词。
假设你是玫瑰花园学校(Rose Garden School)的九年级学生李华,英国姊妹学校校长Mrs Miller带领学生来你校访问,你被选为学生代表上台发言。请你用英语撰写一篇欢迎词,欢迎Mrs Miller和同学们的同时,介绍你校的校园特色文化或活动,说明接待期间你所负责的具体工作、能给予的帮助,并送上你和同学们的祝福。
注意:1.欢迎词中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息;
2.不少于80词。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mrs Miller and friends from our sister school,
Welcome to Rose Garden School! I'm Li Hua, a student from Grade 9. I'm really happy to see you here. Our school has many special things. We have a big garden with lots of beautiful flowers. Every spring, we hold a flower-showing activity. All students bring their favourite flowers to share. During your visit, I'll be your guide. I'll show you around our school and introduce our classrooms and libraries to you. If you have any questions, just ask me. I'll try my best to help you.
I hope that you'll have a great time here. And all my classmates and I wish you a wonderful stay.
Dear Mrs Miller and friends from our sister school,
Welcome to Rose Garden School! I'm Li Hua, a student from Grade 9. I'm really happy to see you here. Our school has many special things. We have a big garden with lots of beautiful flowers. Every spring, we hold a flower-showing activity. All students bring their favourite flowers to share. During your visit, I'll be your guide. I'll show you around our school and introduce our classrooms and libraries to you. If you have any questions, just ask me. I'll try my best to help you.
I hope that you'll have a great time here. And all my classmates and I wish you a wonderful stay.
解析
【分析】首先明确文体为英语欢迎词,需围绕题目要求的核心要点展开:1.礼貌问候并欢迎来访,点明自身学生代表身份;2.介绍校园特色文化/活动;3.说明自己负责的接待工作及可提供的帮助;4.送上祝福。同时要注意不能出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息,词数不少于80词,语言需符合学生身份,礼貌得体。
【解析】按照“问候欢迎→校园特色介绍→接待工作与帮助→祝福”的逻辑结构组织内容:开头用礼貌用语问候来访人员,点明身份;接着介绍学校特色景观与活动;然后说明自己将担任向导,承诺提供帮助;最后表达祝福,确保内容完整、符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mrs Miller and friends from our sister school,
Welcome to Rose Garden School! I'm Li Hua, a student from Grade 9. I'm really happy to see you here. Our school has many special things. We have a big garden with lots of beautiful flowers. Every spring, we hold a flower-showing activity. All students bring their favourite flowers to share. During your visit, I'll be your guide. I'll show you around our school and introduce our classrooms and libraries to you. If you have any questions, just ask me. I'll try my best to help you.
I hope that you'll have a great time here. And all my classmates and I wish you a wonderful stay.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,欢迎词,校园介绍
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,要点齐全,涵盖了欢迎问候、校园特色介绍、接待工作说明、帮助承诺及祝福等内容,语言流畅自然,符合学生代表的身份,是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照“问候欢迎→校园特色介绍→接待工作与帮助→祝福”的逻辑结构组织内容:开头用礼貌用语问候来访人员,点明身份;接着介绍学校特色景观与活动;然后说明自己将担任向导,承诺提供帮助;最后表达祝福,确保内容完整、符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mrs Miller and friends from our sister school,
Welcome to Rose Garden School! I'm Li Hua, a student from Grade 9. I'm really happy to see you here. Our school has many special things. We have a big garden with lots of beautiful flowers. Every spring, we hold a flower-showing activity. All students bring their favourite flowers to share. During your visit, I'll be your guide. I'll show you around our school and introduce our classrooms and libraries to you. If you have any questions, just ask me. I'll try my best to help you.
I hope that you'll have a great time here. And all my classmates and I wish you a wonderful stay.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,欢迎词,校园介绍
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,要点齐全,涵盖了欢迎问候、校园特色介绍、接待工作说明、帮助承诺及祝福等内容,语言流畅自然,符合学生代表的身份,是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
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