十五、提升题 学校正在开展“我的校园生活”主题征文活动。请你根据下面的提示,以“My School Life”为题写一篇短文,介绍你的校园生活。
写作提示:1. What do you have for lunch at school?
2. Who is your best friend? What do you do together?
3. What is your goal? What are you going to do?
4. What do you think school life will be like in the future?
要求:条理清楚,语句准确;书写规范、美观;不少于5句话。
My School Life
写作提示:1. What do you have for lunch at school?
2. Who is your best friend? What do you do together?
3. What is your goal? What are you going to do?
4. What do you think school life will be like in the future?
要求:条理清楚,语句准确;书写规范、美观;不少于5句话。
My School Life
答案
My School Life
My school life is very wonderful. I usually have rice, beef and fresh vegetables for lunch at school, the food tastes great.
My best friend at school is Daming. We often play football on the playground and do our homework together after class.
My goal is to make great progress in my maths study. I am going to listen to the teacher carefully in class and do more practice after school.
I think the school life in the future will be much more interesting. We can have more outdoor activities and learn with the help of fun teaching machines.
I enjoy my school life a lot.
My school life is very wonderful. I usually have rice, beef and fresh vegetables for lunch at school, the food tastes great.
My best friend at school is Daming. We often play football on the playground and do our homework together after class.
My goal is to make great progress in my maths study. I am going to listen to the teacher carefully in class and do more practice after school.
I think the school life in the future will be much more interesting. We can have more outdoor activities and learn with the help of fun teaching machines.
I enjoy my school life a lot.
解析
【分析】首先审题,明确主题为“My School Life”,需覆盖4个写作提示点,且不少于5句话。写作思路为:1. 开篇总述校园生活的整体感受;2. 依次回应提示:说明在校午餐内容、介绍最好的朋友及共同活动、阐述学习目标与计划、展望未来校园生活;3. 结尾总结表达对校园生活的喜爱,确保语句通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】按照写作要求,依次完成各要点:开篇点明校园生活精彩;说明午餐为米饭、牛肉和新鲜蔬菜;介绍好友大明,共同踢足球、做作业;目标是数学进步,计划认真听课多练习;展望未来校园生活更有趣,有更多户外活动和趣味教学机器;结尾表达喜爱。
【答案】My School Life
My school life is very wonderful. I usually have rice, beef and fresh vegetables for lunch at school, the food tastes great.
My best friend at school is Daming. We often play football on the playground and do our homework together after class.
My goal is to make great progress in my maths study. I am going to listen to the teacher carefully in class and do more practice after school.
I think the school life in the future will be much more interesting. We can have more outdoor activities and learn with the help of fun teaching machines.
I enjoy my school life a lot.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点覆盖、语句连贯
【点评】本文紧扣主题,全面覆盖所有写作提示,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言准确流畅,符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作要求,依次完成各要点:开篇点明校园生活精彩;说明午餐为米饭、牛肉和新鲜蔬菜;介绍好友大明,共同踢足球、做作业;目标是数学进步,计划认真听课多练习;展望未来校园生活更有趣,有更多户外活动和趣味教学机器;结尾表达喜爱。
【答案】My School Life
My school life is very wonderful. I usually have rice, beef and fresh vegetables for lunch at school, the food tastes great.
My best friend at school is Daming. We often play football on the playground and do our homework together after class.
My goal is to make great progress in my maths study. I am going to listen to the teacher carefully in class and do more practice after school.
I think the school life in the future will be much more interesting. We can have more outdoor activities and learn with the help of fun teaching machines.
I enjoy my school life a lot.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点覆盖、语句连贯
【点评】本文紧扣主题,全面覆盖所有写作提示,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言准确流畅,符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
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