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当我们沉醉于自己的业余活动，全心投入时，我们是幸福和喜悦的，人生也会一点点发生改变。业余活动是天生的力量、无与伦比的马达，可以滋养一个生命，使人精神富有。请以“My free-time activity”为话题，围绕以下要点，写一篇短文，在学校的英语广播站和全校同学们分享你的故事。
要点：
1. What is your favourite free-time activity?
2. How long have you been doing this activity?
3. How does the activity help you grow better?
4. ...
注意：
1. 短文需要包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数 60～100（开头已经写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear friends,
Welcome to the English Channel of Sunshine School! Today we'll talk about activities ______ .
当我们沉醉于自己的业余活动，全心投入时，我们是幸福和喜悦的，人生也会一点点发生改变。业余活动是天生的力量、无与伦比的马达，可以滋养一个生命，使人精神富有。请以“My free-time activity”为话题，围绕以下要点，写一篇短文，在学校的英语广播站和全校同学们分享你的故事。
要点：
1. What is your favourite free-time activity?
2. How long have you been doing this activity?
3. How does the activity help you grow better?
4. ...
注意：
1. 短文需要包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数 60～100（开头已经写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear friends,
Welcome to the English Channel of Sunshine School! Today we'll talk about activities ______ .
答案
Dear friends,
Welcome to the English Channel of Sunshine School! Today we'll talk about activities in our free time. My favourite free-time activity is reading. I have been keeping this habit for three years. Every evening, I spend half an hour reading novels or magazines. Reading helps me a lot. It opens up my eyes to the outside world and teaches me many useful things that I can't learn from textbooks. Also, it improves my English reading and writing skills. When I feel stressed, reading makes me calm down. I really enjoy the time I spend reading. I hope you can also find your favourite free-time activity and enjoy it!
Welcome to the English Channel of Sunshine School! Today we'll talk about activities in our free time. My favourite free-time activity is reading. I have been keeping this habit for three years. Every evening, I spend half an hour reading novels or magazines. Reading helps me a lot. It opens up my eyes to the outside world and teaches me many useful things that I can't learn from textbooks. Also, it improves my English reading and writing skills. When I feel stressed, reading makes me calm down. I really enjoy the time I spend reading. I hope you can also find your favourite free-time activity and enjoy it!
解析
本文围绕“My free-time activity”话题展开，先点明最喜欢的业余活动为阅读，接着说明坚持该活动的时长，再从拓宽视野、提升英语能力、调节情绪等方面阐述活动对自身成长的帮助，最后呼吁同学们找到自己喜爱的业余活动，内容贴合要点，语言符合八年级英语水平，满足词数要求。
写作佳句
1. 我八岁的时候开始了这项活动。
I started this activity when ___ ___ ___.
2. 我发现调颜色、创作新画很有趣。
I find ___ ___ ___ colours and create new pictures.
3. 当我的画让家人们感到惊喜时，我真的很开心！
___ ___ ___ ___ ___ when my paintings surprise my family!
4. 我喜欢画画，因为绘画让我可以表达自己的情感。
I like to do it because painting ___ ___ ___
5. 当我画山或者花的时候，我会感到内心平静。
When I draw mountains or flowers, I ___ ___.
1. 我八岁的时候开始了这项活动。
I started this activity when ___ ___ ___.
2. 我发现调颜色、创作新画很有趣。
I find ___ ___ ___ colours and create new pictures.
3. 当我的画让家人们感到惊喜时，我真的很开心！
___ ___ ___ ___ ___ when my paintings surprise my family!
4. 我喜欢画画，因为绘画让我可以表达自己的情感。
I like to do it because painting ___ ___ ___
5. 当我画山或者花的时候，我会感到内心平静。
When I draw mountains or flowers, I ___ ___.
答案
1. I was eight
2. it fun to mix
3. It makes me really happy
4. lets me express my feelings
5. feel peaceful
2. it fun to mix
3. It makes me really happy
4. lets me express my feelings
5. feel peaceful
解析
【分析】本题为英语补全句子题，需结合语法结构、固定句型及短语完成填空。解题思路：1. 第1题根据when引导的时间状语从句时态一致原则，补全“我八岁”的表达；2. 第2题运用“find + it + adj + to do sth”的固定句型，it作形式宾语；3. 第3题用it作形式主语，对应“让我真的开心”的表达；4. 第4题结合“let sb do sth”的固定搭配及主谓一致规则填空；5. 第5题填写“感到内心平静”的固定短语。
【解析】1. 第1题：when引导时间状语从句，主句为一般过去时，从句需用一般过去时，“我八岁”译为I was eight，故填I was eight。2. 第2题：固定句型“find + it + adj + to do sth”中，it作形式宾语，真正宾语是不定式，“调颜色”是mix colours，故填it fun to mix。3. 第3题：it作形式主语，真正主语为when引导的从句，“让我真的开心”译为makes me really happy，故填It makes me really happy。4. 第4题：固定搭配let sb do sth，主语painting是第三人称单数，谓语用lets，“表达自己的情感”是express my feelings，故填lets me express my feelings。5. 第5题：“感到内心平静”的固定短语为feel peaceful，故填feel peaceful。
【答案】1. I was eight；2. it fun to mix；3. It makes me really happy；4. lets me express my feelings；5. feel peaceful
【知识点】时间状语从句、固定句型、固定搭配
【点评】本题考查基础英语语法与常用表达，题型常见，难度较低，需学生掌握基础句型和短语即可完成。
【难度系数】0.8
【解析】1. 第1题：when引导时间状语从句，主句为一般过去时，从句需用一般过去时，“我八岁”译为I was eight，故填I was eight。2. 第2题：固定句型“find + it + adj + to do sth”中，it作形式宾语，真正宾语是不定式，“调颜色”是mix colours，故填it fun to mix。3. 第3题：it作形式主语，真正主语为when引导的从句，“让我真的开心”译为makes me really happy，故填It makes me really happy。4. 第4题：固定搭配let sb do sth，主语painting是第三人称单数，谓语用lets，“表达自己的情感”是express my feelings，故填lets me express my feelings。5. 第5题：“感到内心平静”的固定短语为feel peaceful，故填feel peaceful。
【答案】1. I was eight；2. it fun to mix；3. It makes me really happy；4. lets me express my feelings；5. feel peaceful
【知识点】时间状语从句、固定句型、固定搭配
【点评】本题考查基础英语语法与常用表达，题型常见，难度较低，需学生掌握基础句型和短语即可完成。
【难度系数】0.8
