实战演练
假如你是刘华，你的笔友John想了解你家乡的天气情况以及不同季节你做的活动。请你根据下表中的提示，给他写一封邮件。

要求：
1.包含表格中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.词数80左右。
Dear John,
How is it going? My hometown is Qingdao. It lies in Shandong, China.







What's the weather like in your hometown? Can you tell me?
Yours,
Liu Hua

【高分范文】
Dear John,
How is it going? My hometown is Qingdao. It
lies in Shandong, China. In spring, the weather is
warm and windy. I like to go hiking and have a picnic
with my family. In summer, it's sunny and it's very
hot. So playing beach volleyball and boating are fun.
Autumn brings cool weather and colourful leaves. It's
great for biking. In winter, it's very cold and sometimes it
is snowy. I enjoy hot pot and ice skating. When it
snows, I also like to build snowmen with my friends.
We have a good time.
What's the weather like in your hometown? Can
you tell me?
Yours,
Liu Hua

【分析】
这是一封给笔友的英文邮件写作题，需结合表格中季节、对应天气、活动的信息完成内容。解题思路：先承接开头介绍家乡青岛，再按春、夏、秋、冬的顺序，依次对应表格里的天气描述和活动内容，适当补充细节让语句通顺，最后询问对方家乡情况，确保覆盖所有表格信息，符合书信格式和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，按季节顺序展开：spring对应温暖多风的天气，搭配野餐活动；summer对应晴朗炎热的天气，搭配沙滩排球、划船活动；autumn对应凉爽的天气，搭配骑行活动；winter对应寒冷多雪的天气，搭配堆雪人的活动。
2. 适当补充细节让语句自然，控制词数在80左右，最后以询问对方情况收尾，符合邮件的交流逻辑。
【答案】
Dear John,
How is it going? My hometown is Qingdao. It lies in Shandong, China. In spring, the weather is warm and windy. I like to go hiking and have a picnic with my family. In summer, it's sunny and it's very hot. So playing beach volleyball and boating are fun. Autumn brings cool weather and colourful leaves. It's great for biking. In winter, it's very cold and sometimes it is snowy. I enjoy hot pot and ice skating. When it snows, I also like to build snowmen with my friends. We have a good time.
What's the weather like in your hometown? Can you tell me?
Yours,
Liu Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作；季节天气与活动表达；英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文完整覆盖表格所有信息，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合邮件格式要求，适当发挥细节，词数达标，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5