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九、书面表达
自然恰似一场有声的音乐会——森林化作绿色钢琴，净化每一丝空气；河流成为银色琴弦，滋养无数生命；海洋则是蔚蓝舞台，跃动着氧气泡泡，还有鱼群似舞者蹁跹。根据下方的要点提示，以“The Wonderful Natural World”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 自然价值：树木→空气净化器；海洋→鱼群家园＋氧气工厂；
2. 人类威胁：砍伐森林→电锯毁绿琴；塑料入海→垃圾毁家园；
3. 保护行动：种树还林，净滩减塑。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 表达清楚，语言通顺，书写规范；
3. 词数90左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things.
自然恰似一场有声的音乐会——森林化作绿色钢琴，净化每一丝空气；河流成为银色琴弦，滋养无数生命；海洋则是蔚蓝舞台，跃动着氧气泡泡，还有鱼群似舞者蹁跹。根据下方的要点提示，以“The Wonderful Natural World”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 自然价值：树木→空气净化器；海洋→鱼群家园＋氧气工厂；
2. 人类威胁：砍伐森林→电锯毁绿琴；塑料入海→垃圾毁家园；
3. 保护行动：种树还林，净滩减塑。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 表达清楚，语言通顺，书写规范；
3. 词数90左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things.
答案
One possible version:
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things. Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.
However, human beings are posing threats to nature. People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.
To protect nature, we should take action. We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use. It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things. Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.
However, human beings are posing threats to nature. People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.
To protect nature, we should take action. We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use. It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“The Wonderful Natural World”为题续写短文，需涵盖“自然价值、人类威胁、保护行动”三个要点，词数90左右，开头已给出，不得出现真实姓名和校名。解题思路：1. 承接开头，先写自然价值，对应树木（空气净化器）、海洋（鱼群家园+氧气工厂）的功能；2. 转折过渡到人类对自然的威胁，对应砍树、塑料入海的危害；3. 提出具体保护行动，对应种树、净滩减塑，最后升华主题，强调保护自然的责任，确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 自然价值部分：用“Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh.”体现树木作为空气净化器的作用；用“The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.”体现海洋的两个价值，衔接自然。2. 人类威胁部分：用“However, human beings are posing threats to nature.”过渡，再写“People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.”对应两个人类破坏行为。3. 保护行动部分：用“To protect nature, we should take action.”过渡，写“We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use.”对应两个保护措施，最后用“It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.”升华主题，符合所有要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things. Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.
However, human beings are posing threats to nature. People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.
To protect nature, we should take action. We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use. It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环境保护主题写作
【点评】
本题为要点式英语书面表达，紧扣环保主题，要求学生根据提示要点组织语言，结构清晰，考察学生的英语语言运用能力和环保意识，是初中英语常见的写作题型，难度适中，能有效提升学生的综合语言能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求：以“The Wonderful Natural World”为题续写短文，需涵盖“自然价值、人类威胁、保护行动”三个要点，词数90左右，开头已给出，不得出现真实姓名和校名。解题思路：1. 承接开头，先写自然价值，对应树木（空气净化器）、海洋（鱼群家园+氧气工厂）的功能；2. 转折过渡到人类对自然的威胁，对应砍树、塑料入海的危害；3. 提出具体保护行动，对应种树、净滩减塑，最后升华主题，强调保护自然的责任，确保语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 自然价值部分：用“Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh.”体现树木作为空气净化器的作用；用“The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.”体现海洋的两个价值，衔接自然。2. 人类威胁部分：用“However, human beings are posing threats to nature.”过渡，再写“People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.”对应两个人类破坏行为。3. 保护行动部分：用“To protect nature, we should take action.”过渡，写“We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use.”对应两个保护措施，最后用“It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.”升华主题，符合所有要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Wonderful Natural World
Nature is everywhere around us. It gives life to all things. Trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, making the air fresh. The ocean is not only a home for fish but also an oxygen factory, producing a large amount of oxygen.
However, human beings are posing threats to nature. People cut down too many trees, causing forests to become smaller. Plastic waste flowing into the sea is destroying the living environment of sea life.
To protect nature, we should take action. We can plant trees to make our air clean. We can also clean up beaches and reduce plastic use. It's everyone's duty to keep our wonderful natural world alive and beautiful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环境保护主题写作
【点评】
本题为要点式英语书面表达，紧扣环保主题，要求学生根据提示要点组织语言，结构清晰，考察学生的英语语言运用能力和环保意识，是初中英语常见的写作题型，难度适中，能有效提升学生的综合语言能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
