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七、句子翻译(每小题2分,共10分)
71.扬州队的球员们足够强大,能赢得江苏省城市足球联赛。
72.帮助这些贫困的孩子们实现她们的梦想是有必要的。
73. Kevin已经在家乡做志愿者工作许久了。
74.如果你有需要,我们不介意为你提供更多信息。
75.我认为周围有更多的树木,我们的城市会更加美丽。
71.扬州队的球员们足够强大,能赢得江苏省城市足球联赛。
The players of Yangzhou Team are strong enough to win the Jiangsu Football City League.
72.帮助这些贫困的孩子们实现她们的梦想是有必要的。
It is necessary to help these poor children (to) achieve/realize their dreams/make their dreams come true.
73. Kevin已经在家乡做志愿者工作许久了。
Kevin has been in his hometown to work as a volunteer for a long time.
74.如果你有需要,我们不介意为你提供更多信息。
If you need(it), we don't mind providing more information for you.
75.我认为周围有更多的树木,我们的城市会更加美丽。
I think our city will look/be nicer/more beautiful with more trees around.
答案
七、句子翻译
71. The players of Yangzhou Team are strong enough to win the Jiangsu Football City League.
72. It is necessary to help these poor children (to) achieve/realize their dreams/make their dreams come true.
73. Kevin has been in his hometown to work as a volunteer for a long time.
74. If you need(it), we don't mind providing more information for you.
75. I think our city will look/be nicer/more beautiful with more trees around.
71. The players of Yangzhou Team are strong enough to win the Jiangsu Football City League.
72. It is necessary to help these poor children (to) achieve/realize their dreams/make their dreams come true.
73. Kevin has been in his hometown to work as a volunteer for a long time.
74. If you need(it), we don't mind providing more information for you.
75. I think our city will look/be nicer/more beautiful with more trees around.
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英题目时，首先要先梳理中文句子的语义逻辑，匹配对应的英语常用句型，再拆分句子成分逐一翻译：
1. 遇到“足够…能做某事”的表述，优先想到adj.+enough to do的固定结构，同时注意专有名词的首字母大写；
2. 遇到“做某事是…的”这类表述，优先考虑it作形式主语的It is + adj. + to do sth句型，避免句子头重脚轻；
3. 看到“已经…许久了”的时间提示，要判断使用现在完成时，体现动作从过去持续到现在的状态；
4. 遇到“如果”引导的假设表述，要使用条件状语从句，注意匹配对应的动词固定搭配，比如mind后接动名词、provide的双宾语搭配；
5. 遇到表伴随的“有…的情况下”，可以用with的复合结构简化表达，让句子更符合英语表达习惯。翻译完成后要检查语法是否正确，有没有遗漏语义。
【解析】
71. 本句使用“主语+be+形容词+enough to do”的核心结构：主语“扬州队的球员们”译为The players of Yangzhou Team，“足够强大”对应are strong enough，“赢得江苏省城市足球联赛”译为win the Jiangsu Football City League，专有名词实词首字母大写即可。
72. 本句使用it作形式主语的经典句型It is + 形容词 + to do sth，真正的主语是后面的动作：“有必要的”是necessary，“帮助贫困孩子实现梦想”可译为help these poor children (to) realize their dreams，也可表达为help these poor children make their dreams come true，均符合语义。
73. 本句动作从过去持续到现在且时长很久，使用现在完成时：主语Kevin，“在家乡做志愿者工作许久”对应表达为has been in his hometown to work as a volunteer for a long time，时间状语for a long time放在句末体现动作的持续性。
74. 本句是if引导的条件状语从句：从句“如果你有需要”译为If you need(it)，主句“不介意为你提供更多信息”使用固定搭配mind doing sth和provide sth for sb，译为we don't mind providing more information for you。
75. 本句是I think引导的宾语从句，用with伴随结构表“周围有更多树木”的前提：主句用一般现在时I think，从句用一般将来时体现“将会更加美丽”的语义，伴随状语with more trees around插入从句中，符合表达逻辑。
【答案】
71. The players of Yangzhou Team are strong enough to win the Jiangsu Football City League.
72. It is necessary to help these poor children (to) achieve/realize their dreams/make their dreams come true.
73. Kevin has been in his hometown to work as a volunteer for a long time.
74. If you need(it), we don't mind providing more information for you.
75. I think our city will look/be nicer/more beautiful with more trees around.
【知识点】
汉译英常用句型，动词固定搭配，时态辨析
【点评】
本题覆盖了初中英语阶段的高频核心考点，涉及enough结构、形式主语、现在完成时、条件状语从句、with伴随状语等多个核心知识点，没有偏难怪的表达，答题时只要牢记常用句型和固定搭配，避免逐字硬译，同时注意专有名词大写，就能拿到不错的分数，同一语义也允许符合语法的多种正确译法。
【难度系数】
0.6
做这类汉译英题目时，首先要先梳理中文句子的语义逻辑，匹配对应的英语常用句型，再拆分句子成分逐一翻译：
1. 遇到“足够…能做某事”的表述，优先想到adj.+enough to do的固定结构，同时注意专有名词的首字母大写；
2. 遇到“做某事是…的”这类表述，优先考虑it作形式主语的It is + adj. + to do sth句型，避免句子头重脚轻；
3. 看到“已经…许久了”的时间提示，要判断使用现在完成时，体现动作从过去持续到现在的状态；
4. 遇到“如果”引导的假设表述，要使用条件状语从句，注意匹配对应的动词固定搭配，比如mind后接动名词、provide的双宾语搭配；
5. 遇到表伴随的“有…的情况下”，可以用with的复合结构简化表达，让句子更符合英语表达习惯。翻译完成后要检查语法是否正确，有没有遗漏语义。
【解析】
71. 本句使用“主语+be+形容词+enough to do”的核心结构：主语“扬州队的球员们”译为The players of Yangzhou Team，“足够强大”对应are strong enough，“赢得江苏省城市足球联赛”译为win the Jiangsu Football City League，专有名词实词首字母大写即可。
72. 本句使用it作形式主语的经典句型It is + 形容词 + to do sth，真正的主语是后面的动作：“有必要的”是necessary，“帮助贫困孩子实现梦想”可译为help these poor children (to) realize their dreams，也可表达为help these poor children make their dreams come true，均符合语义。
73. 本句动作从过去持续到现在且时长很久，使用现在完成时：主语Kevin，“在家乡做志愿者工作许久”对应表达为has been in his hometown to work as a volunteer for a long time，时间状语for a long time放在句末体现动作的持续性。
74. 本句是if引导的条件状语从句：从句“如果你有需要”译为If you need(it)，主句“不介意为你提供更多信息”使用固定搭配mind doing sth和provide sth for sb，译为we don't mind providing more information for you。
75. 本句是I think引导的宾语从句，用with伴随结构表“周围有更多树木”的前提：主句用一般现在时I think，从句用一般将来时体现“将会更加美丽”的语义，伴随状语with more trees around插入从句中，符合表达逻辑。
【答案】
71. The players of Yangzhou Team are strong enough to win the Jiangsu Football City League.
72. It is necessary to help these poor children (to) achieve/realize their dreams/make their dreams come true.
73. Kevin has been in his hometown to work as a volunteer for a long time.
74. If you need(it), we don't mind providing more information for you.
75. I think our city will look/be nicer/more beautiful with more trees around.
【知识点】
汉译英常用句型，动词固定搭配，时态辨析
【点评】
本题覆盖了初中英语阶段的高频核心考点，涉及enough结构、形式主语、现在完成时、条件状语从句、with伴随状语等多个核心知识点，没有偏难怪的表达，答题时只要牢记常用句型和固定搭配，避免逐字硬译，同时注意专有名词大写，就能拿到不错的分数，同一语义也允许符合语法的多种正确译法。
【难度系数】
0.6
八、书面表达(共20分)
假如你是张磊,暑假即将来临,你的英国网友Jack发信息问你如何安排你的暑假。请以How to make the summer holiday meaningful为话题,可以围绕以下三个问题展开,阐述你的暑假安排:
1. How to relax yourself?
2. How to improve yourself?
3. What can you do to help others?
注意:
1. 必须包括所给提示的相关信息,并适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右;
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Jack,
I'm happy to share my plan for the coming summer holiday.
How about your plan? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Lei
假如你是张磊,暑假即将来临,你的英国网友Jack发信息问你如何安排你的暑假。请以How to make the summer holiday meaningful为话题,可以围绕以下三个问题展开,阐述你的暑假安排:
1. How to relax yourself?
2. How to improve yourself?
3. What can you do to help others?
注意:
1. 必须包括所给提示的相关信息,并适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右;
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Jack,
I'm happy to share my plan for the coming summer holiday.
How about your plan? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Lei
答案
八、书面表达
【审题指导】
本文是一篇电子回信,要向朋友介绍自己的暑假安排,因此用第一人称,时态为一般将来时。介绍自己的暑假安排时,要以题目要求中的三个问题为导向,层层递进地展开介绍。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 分享暑假计划
第二步 具体从放松自己、提升自己和帮助他人三个方面阐述暑假计划
第三步 期待对方的暑假计划
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I'm happy to share my plan for the coming summer holiday.
First of all, it's necessary for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. This summer holiday, I am going to the Great Wall, one of the most famous wonders in the world. And I'll show you my photos on WeChat.
Second, I will go on reading some classic novels, like The Little Prince and Little Women. I'm sure I will lose myself in them. Good books not only help me learn about the culture but also open up a whole new world.
Third, there is no doubt that we can do something to help others. I will visit the Old People's Home and do some cleaning. In a word, I'll plan my time properly to have a meaningful summer holiday.
How about your plan? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Lei
【审题指导】
本文是一篇电子回信,要向朋友介绍自己的暑假安排,因此用第一人称,时态为一般将来时。介绍自己的暑假安排时,要以题目要求中的三个问题为导向,层层递进地展开介绍。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 分享暑假计划
第二步 具体从放松自己、提升自己和帮助他人三个方面阐述暑假计划
第三步 期待对方的暑假计划
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I'm happy to share my plan for the coming summer holiday.
First of all, it's necessary for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. This summer holiday, I am going to the Great Wall, one of the most famous wonders in the world. And I'll show you my photos on WeChat.
Second, I will go on reading some classic novels, like The Little Prince and Little Women. I'm sure I will lose myself in them. Good books not only help me learn about the culture but also open up a whole new world.
Third, there is no doubt that we can do something to help others. I will visit the Old People's Home and do some cleaning. In a word, I'll plan my time properly to have a meaningful summer holiday.
How about your plan? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Lei
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题：确定文体是写给英国笔友的回信，主题是阐述如何度过有意义的暑假，人称统一用第一人称，描述未来计划的内容要使用一般将来时。接下来要明确必须覆盖的三个核心要求：第一点写自我放松的具体方式，第二点写自我提升的具体安排，第三点写帮助他人的实际行动，用合适的衔接词把三个部分串联起来，适当补充小细节让内容更饱满，控制总词数在100左右，注意不能出现真实的姓名、校名、地名，最后衔接题干给出的结尾问句即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：本文是书信类应用文，交流对象是熟悉的网友，语气要自然亲切，全程以第一人称叙述，所有计划类内容统一用一般将来时。
2. 谋篇布局：
① 第一部分对应第一个要点“如何放松”：设计出游亲近自然的安排，比如游览长城，补充后续和网友在微信分享照片的小细节，贴合两人网友的身份设定。
② 第二部分对应第二个要点“如何提升自己”：选择阅读经典名著的安排，补充说明读书既能了解文化又能开拓视野的好处，让内容更充实。
③ 第三部分对应第三个要点“如何帮助他人”：选择去敬老院做清洁的公益活动，最后收尾总结说明自己会合理规划时间，度过充实有意义的暑假，自然衔接后文询问对方计划的内容。
3. 用First of all、Second、Third这类衔接词串联三个部分，逻辑清晰，还可以适当使用it's necessary for sb to do、there is no doubt that等加分句型提升作文档次。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm happy to share my plan for the coming summer holiday.
First of all, it's necessary for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. This summer holiday, I am going to the Great Wall, one of the most famous wonders in the world. And I'll show you my photos on WeChat.
Second, I will go on reading some classic novels, like The Little Prince and Little Women. I'm sure I will lose myself in them. Good books not only help me learn about the culture but also open up a whole new world.
Third, there is no doubt that we can do something to help others. I will visit the Old People's Home and do some cleaning. In a word, I'll plan my time properly to have a meaningful summer holiday.
How about your plan? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Lei
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时
2. 书信类写作
3. 提纲作文谋篇
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的三个核心写作要点，逻辑层次清晰，衔接过渡自然，补充的细节内容贴合网友交流的语境，使用了多个高分句型，语言表达地道，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实信息，完全符合本题的评分标准，是一篇合格的优秀参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题：确定文体是写给英国笔友的回信，主题是阐述如何度过有意义的暑假，人称统一用第一人称，描述未来计划的内容要使用一般将来时。接下来要明确必须覆盖的三个核心要求：第一点写自我放松的具体方式，第二点写自我提升的具体安排，第三点写帮助他人的实际行动，用合适的衔接词把三个部分串联起来，适当补充小细节让内容更饱满，控制总词数在100左右，注意不能出现真实的姓名、校名、地名，最后衔接题干给出的结尾问句即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：本文是书信类应用文，交流对象是熟悉的网友，语气要自然亲切，全程以第一人称叙述，所有计划类内容统一用一般将来时。
2. 谋篇布局：
① 第一部分对应第一个要点“如何放松”：设计出游亲近自然的安排，比如游览长城，补充后续和网友在微信分享照片的小细节，贴合两人网友的身份设定。
② 第二部分对应第二个要点“如何提升自己”：选择阅读经典名著的安排，补充说明读书既能了解文化又能开拓视野的好处，让内容更充实。
③ 第三部分对应第三个要点“如何帮助他人”：选择去敬老院做清洁的公益活动，最后收尾总结说明自己会合理规划时间，度过充实有意义的暑假，自然衔接后文询问对方计划的内容。
3. 用First of all、Second、Third这类衔接词串联三个部分，逻辑清晰，还可以适当使用it's necessary for sb to do、there is no doubt that等加分句型提升作文档次。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm happy to share my plan for the coming summer holiday.
First of all, it's necessary for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. This summer holiday, I am going to the Great Wall, one of the most famous wonders in the world. And I'll show you my photos on WeChat.
Second, I will go on reading some classic novels, like The Little Prince and Little Women. I'm sure I will lose myself in them. Good books not only help me learn about the culture but also open up a whole new world.
Third, there is no doubt that we can do something to help others. I will visit the Old People's Home and do some cleaning. In a word, I'll plan my time properly to have a meaningful summer holiday.
How about your plan? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Lei
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时
2. 书信类写作
3. 提纲作文谋篇
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的三个核心写作要点，逻辑层次清晰，衔接过渡自然，补充的细节内容贴合网友交流的语境，使用了多个高分句型，语言表达地道，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实信息，完全符合本题的评分标准，是一篇合格的优秀参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
