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第七课时 单元写作
一、单元主题
本单元以“The secrets of happiness”为话题，涉及“人与社会”和“人与自我”的主题。通过讨论学习“什么是幸福”“怎么获得幸福”等让学生懂得幸福的真谛，从而使学生养成良好的学习与生活习惯，树立正确的“三观”，珍惜当前幸福的生活；懂得感恩，懂得为他人服务，懂得提高自身的素质，从而为创建和谐社会而努力。
二、词句积累
1. 关于幸福生活的短语
lead a happy life;过着幸福的生活
happy moments;幸福的片刻
the meaning of happiness;幸福的含义
a life full of happiness;充满幸福的生活
the secrets of happiness;幸福的秘诀
the key to happiness;幸福的关键
2. 关于快乐的活动的短语
have holidays;度假
play games with friends;与朋友一起玩游戏
have parties;举行聚会
get presents;收到礼物
have a family trip;家庭出游
3. 关于幸福的句子
◇Love can change us, move us and can give us a life full of happiness.
爱能改变我们，感动我们，还能给予我们充满幸福的生活。
◇Money can't buy happiness. 金钱买不到幸福。
◇Helping others is helping yourself. 帮助他人就是帮助自己。
◇Gratitude for what you have cultivates contentment.
对所拥有的事物心怀感激能够培养出满足感。
◇Inner peace and acceptance sustain lasting happiness.
内心的平静与接纳能够维持持久的幸福。
◇Happiness consists in activity. 幸福在于活动。
◇Meaningful relationships provide enduring support and joy.
有意义的人际关系能给予我们持久的支持与快乐。
三、谋篇布局
1. 开头句
(1)I'm happy to be with my family/friends. 我很高兴能和家人/朋友们在一起。
(2)True happiness begins with physical and mental well-being. 真正的幸福始于身心健康。
2. 主体典型句
(1)Happiness grows when experiencing with others. 与他人共同经历时，幸福感会不断增强。
(2)Helping others can make me feel happy. 帮助他人能让我感到快乐。
3. 结尾句
(1)I'm busy and tired，but I'm very happy. 我很忙也很累，但我很开心。
(2)We should learn to think positively and find the bright side of life.
我们应该学会积极思考，去发现生活中的美好一面。
(3)Thank you for your advice. It helps me find happiness.
感谢您的建议，它帮我找到了快乐。
四、读写迁移
阅读下面短文，完成句子。
What is happiness? To me, 1.
五、写作任务
假如你是李华，你校正在举办以“幸福的秘诀”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你以“Love Makes Me Happy”为题，根据以下提示内容和要求，写一篇短文参赛。
提示内容：1. 描述你感受幸福的经历；2. 分享你的感受。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；2. 词数80左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere in our life.
·思维构架
|步骤|构思|列提纲|
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
|1|开篇点题|Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere in our life.|
|2|介绍具体的经历|I still remember the days...
At that moment...
After hearing her words...|
|3|表达感受|In fact，love is around us...|
·自我创作
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere in our life.
一、单元主题
本单元以“The secrets of happiness”为话题，涉及“人与社会”和“人与自我”的主题。通过讨论学习“什么是幸福”“怎么获得幸福”等让学生懂得幸福的真谛，从而使学生养成良好的学习与生活习惯，树立正确的“三观”，珍惜当前幸福的生活；懂得感恩，懂得为他人服务，懂得提高自身的素质，从而为创建和谐社会而努力。
二、词句积累
1. 关于幸福生活的短语
lead a happy life;过着幸福的生活
happy moments;幸福的片刻
the meaning of happiness;幸福的含义
a life full of happiness;充满幸福的生活
the secrets of happiness;幸福的秘诀
the key to happiness;幸福的关键
2. 关于快乐的活动的短语
have holidays;度假
play games with friends;与朋友一起玩游戏
have parties;举行聚会
get presents;收到礼物
have a family trip;家庭出游
3. 关于幸福的句子
◇Love can change us, move us and can give us a life full of happiness.
爱能改变我们，感动我们，还能给予我们充满幸福的生活。
◇Money can't buy happiness. 金钱买不到幸福。
◇Helping others is helping yourself. 帮助他人就是帮助自己。
◇Gratitude for what you have cultivates contentment.
对所拥有的事物心怀感激能够培养出满足感。
◇Inner peace and acceptance sustain lasting happiness.
内心的平静与接纳能够维持持久的幸福。
◇Happiness consists in activity. 幸福在于活动。
◇Meaningful relationships provide enduring support and joy.
有意义的人际关系能给予我们持久的支持与快乐。
三、谋篇布局
1. 开头句
(1)I'm happy to be with my family/friends. 我很高兴能和家人/朋友们在一起。
(2)True happiness begins with physical and mental well-being. 真正的幸福始于身心健康。
2. 主体典型句
(1)Happiness grows when experiencing with others. 与他人共同经历时，幸福感会不断增强。
(2)Helping others can make me feel happy. 帮助他人能让我感到快乐。
3. 结尾句
(1)I'm busy and tired，but I'm very happy. 我很忙也很累，但我很开心。
(2)We should learn to think positively and find the bright side of life.
我们应该学会积极思考，去发现生活中的美好一面。
(3)Thank you for your advice. It helps me find happiness.
感谢您的建议，它帮我找到了快乐。
四、读写迁移
阅读下面短文，完成句子。
What is happiness? To me, 1.
happiness is not only about wealth or health
(幸福并不仅仅关乎财富或健康); it's about the little things that bring a smile to our faces and warmth to our hearts. It's the love of family and friends，the laughter shared over good times，and the peace found in quiet moments. Happiness is also about achieving dreams，2. solving problems
(解决问题)，and feeling a sense of accomplishment. It's about being true to ourselves，living in the present，and finding joy in the simple pleasures of life. All in all，3 happiness is a personal journey
(幸福是一段个人的旅程)，and it's up to each of us to discover what 4. brings us health, wealth, friends, love and success
(给我们带来了健康、财富、朋友、爱情和成功).五、写作任务
假如你是李华，你校正在举办以“幸福的秘诀”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你以“Love Makes Me Happy”为题，根据以下提示内容和要求，写一篇短文参赛。
提示内容：1. 描述你感受幸福的经历；2. 分享你的感受。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；2. 词数80左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere in our life.
·思维构架
|步骤|构思|列提纲|
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
|1|开篇点题|Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere in our life.|
|2|介绍具体的经历|I still remember the days...
At that moment...
After hearing her words...|
|3|表达感受|In fact，love is around us...|
·自我创作
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere in our life.
I still remember the days I spent in hospital. I was waiting for an operation on my leg alone in a cold room. I was so worried and lonely that I sank into sadness. At that moment, a nurse appeared. She said warmly to me, "You were, you are and you will be the bravest girl!" After hearing her words, my tears couldn't stop rolling down. A sense of happiness filled my heart. It was the power of love.
In fact, love is around us, maybe in actions, maybe in silence, but it is always there.
In fact, love is around us, maybe in actions, maybe in silence, but it is always there.
When I was ill last winter, my parents took turns staying up late, bringing me soup and medicine. Their tireless care made me feel so cherished that I got better quickly. Seeing their relieved smiles, I understood this was the true joy.
Not only family love lifts me up, but also the kindness around me at school shines brightly. A difficult maths problem once made me feel worried until a classmate patiently explained it step by step. The simple act of support filled my heart with warmth.
Love, therefore, is the quiet key unlocking lasting happiness.
Not only family love lifts me up, but also the kindness around me at school shines brightly. A difficult maths problem once made me feel worried until a classmate patiently explained it step by step. The simple act of support filled my heart with warmth.
Love, therefore, is the quiet key unlocking lasting happiness.
答案
四、1. happiness is not only about wealth or health
2. solving problems 3. happiness is a personal journey
4. brings us health, wealth, friends, love and success
五、标准提分版：
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the
unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere
in our life.
I still remember the days I spent in hospital. I was waiting
for an operation on my leg alone in a cold room. I was so worried
and lonely that I sank into sadness. At that moment, a nurse
appeared. She said warmly to me, "You were, you are and you
will be the bravest girl!" After hearing her words, my tears
couldn't stop rolling down. A sense of happiness filled my heart.
It was the power of love.
In fact, love is around us, maybe in actions, maybe in
silence, but it is always there.
进阶优化版：
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the
unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere
in our life.
When I was ill last winter, my parents took turns staying up
late, bringing me soup and medicine. Their tireless care made me
feel so cherished that I got better quickly. Seeing their relieved
smiles, I understood this was the true joy.
Not only family love lifts me up, but also the kindness
around me at school shines brightly. A difficult maths problem
once made me feel worried until a classmate patiently explained it
step by step. The simple act of support filled my heart with
warmth.
Love, therefore, is the quiet key unlocking lasting
happiness.
2. solving problems 3. happiness is a personal journey
4. brings us health, wealth, friends, love and success
五、标准提分版：
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the
unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere
in our life.
I still remember the days I spent in hospital. I was waiting
for an operation on my leg alone in a cold room. I was so worried
and lonely that I sank into sadness. At that moment, a nurse
appeared. She said warmly to me, "You were, you are and you
will be the bravest girl!" After hearing her words, my tears
couldn't stop rolling down. A sense of happiness filled my heart.
It was the power of love.
In fact, love is around us, maybe in actions, maybe in
silence, but it is always there.
进阶优化版：
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the
unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere
in our life.
When I was ill last winter, my parents took turns staying up
late, bringing me soup and medicine. Their tireless care made me
feel so cherished that I got better quickly. Seeing their relieved
smiles, I understood this was the true joy.
Not only family love lifts me up, but also the kindness
around me at school shines brightly. A difficult maths problem
once made me feel worried until a classmate patiently explained it
step by step. The simple act of support filled my heart with
warmth.
Love, therefore, is the quiet key unlocking lasting
happiness.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“Love Makes Me Happy”为题参赛，需结合给定提纲（开篇点题、具体经历、表达感受）完成短文。解题思路：1. 开篇直接使用已给的点题句，紧扣“爱无处不在”的主题；2. 中间选取具体的亲身经历（如他人的关爱事件），运用给定的句式展开，体现“爱带来幸福”；3. 结尾升华主题，表达对爱的感悟，结合积累的相关词句，确保内容贴合要求，词数达标，不出现真实信息。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开篇：使用题目已给出的句子，直接点题，引出“爱无处不在”的核心观点；2. 主体：选取住院时护士鼓励的经历，按照“回忆经历→当时的状态→护士的举动→自己的感受”的顺序展开，运用给定句式，体现爱带来的温暖与幸福；3. 结尾：总结感悟，点明爱围绕在身边，升华主题，符合征文要求。
【答案】
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere in our life.
I still remember the days I spent in hospital. I was waiting for an operation on my leg alone in a cold room. I was so worried and lonely that I sank into sadness. At that moment, a nurse appeared. She said warmly to me, "You were, you are and you will be the bravest girl!" After hearing her words, my tears couldn't stop rolling down. A sense of happiness filled my heart. It was the power of love.
In fact, love is around us, maybe in actions, maybe in silence, but it is always there.
【知识点】英语话题写作、单元写作、英语句式运用
【点评】本题紧扣单元主题“幸福的秘诀”，以“爱带来幸福”为核心，提供清晰的写作提纲和词句积累，既考查英语表达能力，又引导学生体会生活中的爱与幸福，结构明确，降低写作难度，符合参赛征文要求。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开篇：使用题目已给出的句子，直接点题，引出“爱无处不在”的核心观点；2. 主体：选取住院时护士鼓励的经历，按照“回忆经历→当时的状态→护士的举动→自己的感受”的顺序展开，运用给定句式，体现爱带来的温暖与幸福；3. 结尾：总结感悟，点明爱围绕在身边，升华主题，符合征文要求。
【答案】
Love Makes Me Happy
Life without love is like plants without sunshine. It's the unforgettable experience that made me realise love is everywhere in our life.
I still remember the days I spent in hospital. I was waiting for an operation on my leg alone in a cold room. I was so worried and lonely that I sank into sadness. At that moment, a nurse appeared. She said warmly to me, "You were, you are and you will be the bravest girl!" After hearing her words, my tears couldn't stop rolling down. A sense of happiness filled my heart. It was the power of love.
In fact, love is around us, maybe in actions, maybe in silence, but it is always there.
【知识点】英语话题写作、单元写作、英语句式运用
【点评】本题紧扣单元主题“幸福的秘诀”，以“爱带来幸福”为核心，提供清晰的写作提纲和词句积累，既考查英语表达能力，又引导学生体会生活中的爱与幸福，结构明确，降低写作难度，符合参赛征文要求。
【难度系数】0.3
