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Ⅳ. [2024·湖南]书面表达。
英语课上,老师要求以“Sports make us better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,将代表小组在全班发言,请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿,内容包括:
(1)介绍你们各自喜欢的运动；
(2)谈谈运动对你们的影响。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(2)写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua from Group One.
That’s all. Thank you.
英语课上,老师要求以“Sports make us better”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,将代表小组在全班发言,请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿,内容包括:
(1)介绍你们各自喜欢的运动；
(2)谈谈运动对你们的影响。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息；
(2)写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua from Group One.
That’s all. Thank you.
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone, I'm Li Hua from Group One.
Today, I'd like to share with you the sports that we enjoy and the impacts they have on us. Cindy's favourite sport is volleyball. She often plays it with her friends. It not only helps her stay active but also improves her teamwork skills. Frank likes bike riding best. It makes him feel free and allows him to explore the outdoors. It also builds his endurance. As for me, I love swimming. It makes my body stronger and helps me relax after a busy day.
In conclusion, sports keep us healthy, boost our confidence, and help us develop important life skills.
That's all. Thank you.
Hello, everyone, I'm Li Hua from Group One.
Today, I'd like to share with you the sports that we enjoy and the impacts they have on us. Cindy's favourite sport is volleyball. She often plays it with her friends. It not only helps her stay active but also improves her teamwork skills. Frank likes bike riding best. It makes him feel free and allows him to explore the outdoors. It also builds his endurance. As for me, I love swimming. It makes my body stronger and helps me relax after a busy day.
In conclusion, sports keep us healthy, boost our confidence, and help us develop important life skills.
That's all. Thank you.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份写一篇发言稿，围绕“Sports make us better”话题，需完成两个核心内容：一是介绍组内三人喜欢的运动（结合插图信息：Cindy喜爱排球，Frank喜爱骑自行车）；二是谈谈运动对各自的影响。同时要注意题目要求：词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。写作时需补充自己的运动项目，组织语言要连贯，符合发言稿的语气，覆盖所有要点即可。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头引出分享内容；接着分别介绍Cindy的排球运动（常和朋友一起玩，影响是保持活力、提升团队合作能力）、Frank的骑行运动（带来自由感、可探索户外、锻炼耐力）；再介绍自己喜爱的游泳运动（增强体质、缓解压力）；最后总结运动对健康、自信及生活技能的益处，呼应话题。注意用词准确，语句通顺，控制在合适的词数范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone, I'm Li Hua from Group One.
Today, I'd like to share with you the sports that we enjoy and the impacts they have on us. Cindy's favourite sport is volleyball. She often plays it with her friends. It not only helps her stay active but also improves her teamwork skills. Frank likes bike riding best. It makes him feel free and allows him to explore the outdoors. It also builds his endurance. As for me, I love swimming. It makes my body stronger and helps me relax after a busy day.
In conclusion, sports keep us healthy, boost our confidence, and help us develop important life skills.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；话题写作；发言稿写作
【点评】
范文紧扣话题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结合插图信息合理补充内容，语言流畅自然，符合发言稿的语境，准确表达了运动对人的积极影响，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作任务：以李华的身份写一篇发言稿，围绕“Sports make us better”话题，需完成两个核心内容：一是介绍组内三人喜欢的运动（结合插图信息：Cindy喜爱排球，Frank喜爱骑自行车）；二是谈谈运动对各自的影响。同时要注意题目要求：词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。写作时需补充自己的运动项目，组织语言要连贯，符合发言稿的语气，覆盖所有要点即可。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头引出分享内容；接着分别介绍Cindy的排球运动（常和朋友一起玩，影响是保持活力、提升团队合作能力）、Frank的骑行运动（带来自由感、可探索户外、锻炼耐力）；再介绍自己喜爱的游泳运动（增强体质、缓解压力）；最后总结运动对健康、自信及生活技能的益处，呼应话题。注意用词准确，语句通顺，控制在合适的词数范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone, I'm Li Hua from Group One.
Today, I'd like to share with you the sports that we enjoy and the impacts they have on us. Cindy's favourite sport is volleyball. She often plays it with her friends. It not only helps her stay active but also improves her teamwork skills. Frank likes bike riding best. It makes him feel free and allows him to explore the outdoors. It also builds his endurance. As for me, I love swimming. It makes my body stronger and helps me relax after a busy day.
In conclusion, sports keep us healthy, boost our confidence, and help us develop important life skills.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；话题写作；发言稿写作
【点评】
范文紧扣话题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结合插图信息合理补充内容，语言流畅自然，符合发言稿的语境，准确表达了运动对人的积极影响，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
