六、书面表达共1题,计20分
假如你是凯特Kate,你的英国笔友汤姆Tom给你发来一封电子邮件,询问你十年后的人生规划。请你根据以下要点,用英文给他写一封回信。
1. 你十年后选择从事的职业及理由;
2. 你十年后选择定居的城市及理由;
3. 你十年后会坚持的兴趣爱好至少列举两项。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2. 语句连贯,词数80个左右;
3. 作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you about my future.
I believe my life will be wonderful in ten years.
Yours,
Kate
假如你是凯特Kate,你的英国笔友汤姆Tom给你发来一封电子邮件,询问你十年后的人生规划。请你根据以下要点,用英文给他写一封回信。
1. 你十年后选择从事的职业及理由;
2. 你十年后选择定居的城市及理由;
3. 你十年后会坚持的兴趣爱好至少列举两项。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2. 语句连贯,词数80个左右;
3. 作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you about my future.
I believe my life will be wonderful in ten years.
Yours,
Kate
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.
Now let me tell you about my future.
First, I think I will be a reporter in ten
years, because being a reporter is my
dream. As a reporter, I will visit many
different places and meet lots of
interesting people. Second, I'll live in
Shanghai, because Shanghai is a
modern city and I can live a
comfortable life there. As for my
hobbies, I'll take dancing lessons to
keep fit in my free time. And I'll do
some voluntary work to help people in
need.
I believe my life will be wonderful
in ten years.
Yours,
Kate
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.
Now let me tell you about my future.
First, I think I will be a reporter in ten
years, because being a reporter is my
dream. As a reporter, I will visit many
different places and meet lots of
interesting people. Second, I'll live in
Shanghai, because Shanghai is a
modern city and I can live a
comfortable life there. As for my
hobbies, I'll take dancing lessons to
keep fit in my free time. And I'll do
some voluntary work to help people in
need.
I believe my life will be wonderful
in ten years.
Yours,
Kate
解析
【分析】
本题要求以凯特的身份给笔友汤姆写回信,介绍十年后的人生规划,需涵盖三个核心要点:职业及理由、定居城市及理由、两项兴趣爱好;开头和结尾已给出,需补充中间内容,需使用一般将来时,语句连贯,词数控制在80左右,不得出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 职业选择:确定从事记者职业,理由是这是个人梦想,作为记者能探访不同地方、结识有趣的人;
2. 定居城市:选择上海,理由是上海是现代化城市,能过上舒适的生活;
3. 兴趣爱好:列举两项,分别是跳舞(用于保持健康)、志愿工作(帮助有需要的人);
用First、Second、As for等连接词串联内容,确保语句连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.
Now let me tell you about my future.
First, I think I will be a reporter in ten years, because being a reporter is my dream. As a reporter, I will visit many different places and meet lots of interesting people. Second, I'll live in Shanghai, because Shanghai is a modern city and I can live a comfortable life there. As for my hobbies, I'll take dancing lessons to keep fit in my free time. And I'll do some voluntary work to help people in need.
I believe my life will be wonderful in ten years.
Yours,
Kate
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般将来时运用、未来计划表达
【点评】
本题为常规书信类书面表达题,给定明确写作要点,降低了写作难度,考查学生对未来规划的英文组织与表达能力,适合巩固基础写作技能。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以凯特的身份给笔友汤姆写回信,介绍十年后的人生规划,需涵盖三个核心要点:职业及理由、定居城市及理由、两项兴趣爱好;开头和结尾已给出,需补充中间内容,需使用一般将来时,语句连贯,词数控制在80左右,不得出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 职业选择:确定从事记者职业,理由是这是个人梦想,作为记者能探访不同地方、结识有趣的人;
2. 定居城市:选择上海,理由是上海是现代化城市,能过上舒适的生活;
3. 兴趣爱好:列举两项,分别是跳舞(用于保持健康)、志愿工作(帮助有需要的人);
用First、Second、As for等连接词串联内容,确保语句连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail.
Now let me tell you about my future.
First, I think I will be a reporter in ten years, because being a reporter is my dream. As a reporter, I will visit many different places and meet lots of interesting people. Second, I'll live in Shanghai, because Shanghai is a modern city and I can live a comfortable life there. As for my hobbies, I'll take dancing lessons to keep fit in my free time. And I'll do some voluntary work to help people in need.
I believe my life will be wonderful in ten years.
Yours,
Kate
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般将来时运用、未来计划表达
【点评】
本题为常规书信类书面表达题,给定明确写作要点,降低了写作难度,考查学生对未来规划的英文组织与表达能力,适合巩固基础写作技能。
【难度系数】
0.6
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