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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
假如你是Mary,去英国做交换生已有一年。请你根据下面的思维导图给你的朋友Jenny写信介绍这一年你的成长变化,以及你的梦想和对未来的希望。
要求:1.语言准确得体,要点全面,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名;
3.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
How's everything going? I've been studying in England for one year. Let me tell you something about my life here.
How about your life? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Mary
假如你是Mary,去英国做交换生已有一年。请你根据下面的思维导图给你的朋友Jenny写信介绍这一年你的成长变化,以及你的梦想和对未来的希望。
要求:1.语言准确得体,要点全面,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实人名和校名;
3.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
How's everything going? I've been studying in England for one year. Let me tell you something about my life here.
How about your life? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Mary
答案
Dear Jenny,
How's everything going? I've been studying in England for one year. Let me tell you something about my life here.
I've changed a lot! Now I swim 2 or 3 times a week to stay healthy. I've also become friendlier and more outgoing, making friends with people from different cultures.
In my free time, I enjoy watching talk shows—they're fantastic! Comedies are funny and help me relax. My dream is to be a teacher when I grow up, so I'm going to study harder. In 30 years, I'll live in a quiet town and travel in my free time.
How about your life? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Mary
How's everything going? I've been studying in England for one year. Let me tell you something about my life here.
I've changed a lot! Now I swim 2 or 3 times a week to stay healthy. I've also become friendlier and more outgoing, making friends with people from different cultures.
In my free time, I enjoy watching talk shows—they're fantastic! Comedies are funny and help me relax. My dream is to be a teacher when I grow up, so I'm going to study harder. In 30 years, I'll live in a quiet town and travel in my free time.
How about your life? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Mary
解析
【分析】本题是英语书信写作题，要求以Mary的身份给朋友Jenny写信，需结合思维导图的5个核心要点：①现在的运动：每周游泳2-3次；②性格变化：更友好外向，结交不同的人；③爱好：喜欢脱口秀（觉得很棒）、喜剧（觉得有趣）；④梦想：长大后想当老师，要努力学习；⑤未来30年的计划：住在安静的小镇，空闲时旅行。解题思路是先确定每个要点的英语表达，再根据语境选用合适的时态（体现现在情况用一般现在时，体现未来计划用一般将来时，体现变化用现在完成时），串联成通顺短文，注意书信格式，词数控制在80左右，适当发挥，确保语言准确得体，不出现真实人名校名。
【解析】先点明自身变化，介绍现在的运动：说明每周游泳2-3次保持健康；接着讲性格变化：说明变得更友好外向，结交了不同文化背景的朋友；然后说爱好：空闲时看脱口秀（觉得很棒）、喜剧（有趣且能放松）；再讲梦想：长大后想当老师，因此要努力学习；最后讲30年后的计划：住在安静小镇，空闲时旅行，最后连接结尾形成完整信件。
【答案】Dear Jenny,
How's everything going? I've been studying in England for one year. Let me tell you something about my life here.
I've changed a lot! Now I swim 2 or 3 times a week to stay healthy. I've also become friendlier and more outgoing, making friends with people from different cultures.
In my free time, I enjoy watching talk shows—they're fantastic! Comedies are funny and help me relax. My dream is to be a teacher when I grow up, so I'm going to study harder. In 30 years, I'll live in a quiet town and travel in my free time.
How about your life? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Mary
【知识点】英语书面表达、时态运用
【点评】本题以思维导图为提示，考查学生的英语书信写作能力，要求涵盖指定要点，语言准确得体，难度适中，适合学生练习基础写作。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】先点明自身变化，介绍现在的运动：说明每周游泳2-3次保持健康；接着讲性格变化：说明变得更友好外向，结交了不同文化背景的朋友；然后说爱好：空闲时看脱口秀（觉得很棒）、喜剧（有趣且能放松）；再讲梦想：长大后想当老师，因此要努力学习；最后讲30年后的计划：住在安静小镇，空闲时旅行，最后连接结尾形成完整信件。
【答案】Dear Jenny,
How's everything going? I've been studying in England for one year. Let me tell you something about my life here.
I've changed a lot! Now I swim 2 or 3 times a week to stay healthy. I've also become friendlier and more outgoing, making friends with people from different cultures.
In my free time, I enjoy watching talk shows—they're fantastic! Comedies are funny and help me relax. My dream is to be a teacher when I grow up, so I'm going to study harder. In 30 years, I'll live in a quiet town and travel in my free time.
How about your life? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Mary
【知识点】英语书面表达、时态运用
【点评】本题以思维导图为提示，考查学生的英语书信写作能力，要求涵盖指定要点，语言准确得体，难度适中，适合学生练习基础写作。
【难度系数】0.5
