我国的传统节日源远流长,越来越多的外国人开始热衷于了解中国的传统节日。假设你是李华,你校英语俱乐部正在开展关于中国传统节日的线上国际交流活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英文写一篇短文,介绍一个你最喜欢的中国的传统节日。

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数60左右。
【巧列提纲】(以下
部分仅供参考,希望同学们可以多动脑筋、发散思维)

【实战演练】
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数60左右。
【巧列提纲】(以下
【实战演练】
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)
答案
One possible version:
As for me, I like the Spring Festival best. It begins on the first day of the first lunar month. We always do a lot of things to celebrate it.
A few days before the festival, we usually do some cleaning to sweep away bad luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, the whole family gets together. We have a big dinner and enjoy the TV programmes. And as children, we can get lucky money during the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is a chance for family reunions. For me, it's a good time to have a break from my busy studies.
As for me, I like the Spring Festival best. It begins on the first day of the first lunar month. We always do a lot of things to celebrate it.
A few days before the festival, we usually do some cleaning to sweep away bad luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, the whole family gets together. We have a big dinner and enjoy the TV programmes. And as children, we can get lucky money during the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is a chance for family reunions. For me, it's a good time to have a break from my busy studies.
解析
【分析】本题是英语写作题,要求介绍最喜欢的中国传统节日,解题思路:首先选择大众熟悉的春节作为介绍对象;接着按“点明节日→描述庆祝活动→说明节日意义”的结构行文;语言需简洁连贯,控制词数在60左右,不能出现真实信息,适当拓展细节即可。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开头点明最喜欢的传统节日是春节,说明其时间为农历正月初一;2. 中间分述庆祝活动:节前打扫除霉运,除夕全家团聚吃年夜饭、看节目,孩子可获得压岁钱;3. 结尾总结春节是家庭团聚的机会,能让人从繁忙学业中放松,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
As for me, I like the Spring Festival best. It begins on the first day of the first lunar month. We always do a lot of things to celebrate it.
A few days before the festival, we usually do some cleaning to sweep away bad luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, the whole family gets together. We have a big dinner and enjoy the TV programmes. And as children, we can get lucky money during the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is a chance for family reunions. For me, it's a good time to have a break from my busy studies.
【知识点】英文应用文写作,中国传统节日表达
【点评】本题考查学生用英语介绍中国传统文化的能力,要求结构清晰、内容贴合主题,既锻炼语言表达能力,又渗透文化意识,是常见的基础英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开头点明最喜欢的传统节日是春节,说明其时间为农历正月初一;2. 中间分述庆祝活动:节前打扫除霉运,除夕全家团聚吃年夜饭、看节目,孩子可获得压岁钱;3. 结尾总结春节是家庭团聚的机会,能让人从繁忙学业中放松,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
As for me, I like the Spring Festival best. It begins on the first day of the first lunar month. We always do a lot of things to celebrate it.
A few days before the festival, we usually do some cleaning to sweep away bad luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, the whole family gets together. We have a big dinner and enjoy the TV programmes. And as children, we can get lucky money during the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is a chance for family reunions. For me, it's a good time to have a break from my busy studies.
【知识点】英文应用文写作,中国传统节日表达
【点评】本题考查学生用英语介绍中国传统文化的能力,要求结构清晰、内容贴合主题,既锻炼语言表达能力,又渗透文化意识,是常见的基础英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
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