典例研析
多姿多彩的课程安排,是我们美好的学校生活不可或缺的一部分。在你的心中,一定存在着最喜欢的科目安排课程表。请以“My School Weekly Timetable”为题写一篇短文,介绍喜欢的科目的课程安排。

续表

写作要求:
1. 介绍学校一天共几节课、分别是什么科目、上课时间、学科意义等,可适当发挥;
2. 恰当使用连词;
3. 内容充实,语言通顺,意思连贯,表达清晰,书写规范,词数不少于60词。
思路点拨
Step 1: 仔细审题,明确写作思路
1. 体裁:说明文
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主
多姿多彩的课程安排,是我们美好的学校生活不可或缺的一部分。在你的心中,一定存在着最喜欢的科目安排课程表。请以“My School Weekly Timetable”为题写一篇短文,介绍喜欢的科目的课程安排。
续表
写作要求:
1. 介绍学校一天共几节课、分别是什么科目、上课时间、学科意义等,可适当发挥;
2. 恰当使用连词;
3. 内容充实,语言通顺,意思连贯,表达清晰,书写规范,词数不少于60词。
思路点拨
Step 1: 仔细审题,明确写作思路
1. 体裁:说明文
2. 人称:以第一人称为主
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主
答案
My School Weekly Timetable
This is my school weekly timetable. We have 6 classes every day, and we have a long lunch break after the first 3 morning classes.
My favourite subject is PE. We have PE on Monday afternoon and Wednesday morning. It can help me keep healthy and relax after hours of study. We also have History on Monday, Geography on Tuesday, Chinese on Tuesday and Thursday, Music on Thursday, Maths and Biology on Friday. I love Music too, because it is great fun to sing different beautiful songs in class.
I think my timetable is very wonderful, and I always have a good time at school every week.
This is my school weekly timetable. We have 6 classes every day, and we have a long lunch break after the first 3 morning classes.
My favourite subject is PE. We have PE on Monday afternoon and Wednesday morning. It can help me keep healthy and relax after hours of study. We also have History on Monday, Geography on Tuesday, Chinese on Tuesday and Thursday, Music on Thursday, Maths and Biology on Friday. I love Music too, because it is great fun to sing different beautiful songs in class.
I think my timetable is very wonderful, and I always have a good time at school every week.
解析
【分析】
首先审题确定体裁为说明文,人称用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主;接着明确写作内容:先介绍学校每日课程总数、课程安排的基本情况,再选取喜欢的科目,说明其上课时间和学科意义,最后总结感受,同时要恰当使用连词保证语句连贯,满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明主题,介绍学校每周课程表,说明每日有6节课,上午前三节课后有长午休;
2. 介绍喜欢的科目:PE的上课时间(周一下午、周三上午),阐述其帮助保持健康、放松的意义;再介绍音乐的上课时间(周四),说明其有趣的特点;
3. 结尾总结,表达对课程表的喜爱和在学校的愉快感受,使用and、because等连词衔接内容,确保语句通顺,词数达标。
【答案】
My School Weekly Timetable
This is my school weekly timetable. We have 6 classes every day, and we have a long lunch break after the first 3 morning classes.
My favourite subject is PE. We have PE on Monday afternoon and Wednesday morning. It can help me keep healthy and relax after hours of study. We also have History on Monday, Geography on Tuesday, Chinese on Tuesday and Thursday, Music on Thursday, Maths and Biology on Friday. I love Music too, because it is great fun to sing different beautiful songs in class.
I think my timetable is very wonderful, and I always have a good time at school every week.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、连词运用
【点评】
本题以学生熟悉的校园课程表为话题,考查英语说明文写作能力,贴近学生生活,易于学生组织内容,能有效检验学生的英语表达和逻辑连贯能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先审题确定体裁为说明文,人称用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主;接着明确写作内容:先介绍学校每日课程总数、课程安排的基本情况,再选取喜欢的科目,说明其上课时间和学科意义,最后总结感受,同时要恰当使用连词保证语句连贯,满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明主题,介绍学校每周课程表,说明每日有6节课,上午前三节课后有长午休;
2. 介绍喜欢的科目:PE的上课时间(周一下午、周三上午),阐述其帮助保持健康、放松的意义;再介绍音乐的上课时间(周四),说明其有趣的特点;
3. 结尾总结,表达对课程表的喜爱和在学校的愉快感受,使用and、because等连词衔接内容,确保语句通顺,词数达标。
【答案】
My School Weekly Timetable
This is my school weekly timetable. We have 6 classes every day, and we have a long lunch break after the first 3 morning classes.
My favourite subject is PE. We have PE on Monday afternoon and Wednesday morning. It can help me keep healthy and relax after hours of study. We also have History on Monday, Geography on Tuesday, Chinese on Tuesday and Thursday, Music on Thursday, Maths and Biology on Friday. I love Music too, because it is great fun to sing different beautiful songs in class.
I think my timetable is very wonderful, and I always have a good time at school every week.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、连词运用
【点评】
本题以学生熟悉的校园课程表为话题,考查英语说明文写作能力,贴近学生生活,易于学生组织内容,能有效检验学生的英语表达和逻辑连贯能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
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