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你校 Group Caring for Animals 正在招募新成员,请你以“Love Animals”为主题写一篇参选的演讲稿。80~100词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。提示:
Good morning, everyone! Today I will give a talk about loving animals.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
审题指导: 1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
你校 Group Caring for Animals 正在招募新成员,请你以“Love Animals”为主题写一篇参选的演讲稿。80~100词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。提示:
Good morning, everyone! Today I will give a talk about loving animals.
略
略
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
审题指导: 1.体裁:应用文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架:
优秀范文:
答案
I'm in Grade 8. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need. I want to join the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature and I want to do something for it. Next, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now, because people cut down trees and destroy nature.
In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“Love Animals”为主题写参选演讲稿，需用一般现在时、第一人称，字数80-100词，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，说明自身身份（八年级学生）及对动物的热爱，引出参选意愿；2. 分点阐述加入动物关爱小组的原因；3. 简要说明动物面临的生存现状；4. 点明动物与人类的关系，强调保护动物的责任，确保内容紧扣主题、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，依次展开内容：先介绍自身情况与参选意愿，再说明加入小组的原因，接着提及动物生存现状，最后阐述保护动物的意义，保证语言简洁、时态正确、字数达标。具体内容为：I'm in Grade 8. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need. I want to join the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature and I want to do something for it. Next, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now, because people cut down trees and destroy nature. In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
【答案】
I'm in Grade 8. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need. I want to join the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature and I want to do something for it. Next, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now, because people cut down trees and destroy nature. In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、动物保护主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“Love Animals”主题，结构清晰，符合演讲稿格式要求，语言简洁流畅，时态正确，字数达标，准确表达了参选意愿及保护动物的理念，适合作为参选演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“Love Animals”为主题写参选演讲稿，需用一般现在时、第一人称，字数80-100词，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，说明自身身份（八年级学生）及对动物的热爱，引出参选意愿；2. 分点阐述加入动物关爱小组的原因；3. 简要说明动物面临的生存现状；4. 点明动物与人类的关系，强调保护动物的责任，确保内容紧扣主题、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求，依次展开内容：先介绍自身情况与参选意愿，再说明加入小组的原因，接着提及动物生存现状，最后阐述保护动物的意义，保证语言简洁、时态正确、字数达标。具体内容为：I'm in Grade 8. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need. I want to join the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature and I want to do something for it. Next, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now, because people cut down trees and destroy nature. In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
【答案】
I'm in Grade 8. I am an animal lover and love to help people and animals in need. I want to join the group for some reasons. Firstly, I love nature and I want to do something for it. Next, I hope that I can learn more about animals to protect them. Some animals are in a dangerous situation now, because people cut down trees and destroy nature. In my opinion, animals and humans are both parts of nature. Animals are our friends. We have the duty to protect them.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、动物保护主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣“Love Animals”主题，结构清晰，符合演讲稿格式要求，语言简洁流畅，时态正确，字数达标，准确表达了参选意愿及保护动物的理念，适合作为参选演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.6
