九、书面表达(根据横线后的写作素材提示补全句子)。(每小题4分,共20分)
假设你是李华,埃里克是刚来中国的留学生,他很想学好中文,但总觉得太难。发音、书写、语法对他来说都是极大的挑战。请你帮他制定一个学习中文的计划,并用英语给他写一封邮件。
参考词汇: common 常见的; Chinese character 汉字; make progress 取得进步; stick to 坚持
Dear Eric,
I know it isn't easy for you to learn Chinese. 1.
2.
Don't give up. 5.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,埃里克是刚来中国的留学生,他很想学好中文,但总觉得太难。发音、书写、语法对他来说都是极大的挑战。请你帮他制定一个学习中文的计划,并用英语给他写一封邮件。
参考词汇: common 常见的; Chinese character 汉字; make progress 取得进步; stick to 坚持
Dear Eric,
I know it isn't easy for you to learn Chinese. 1.
Here's a study plan for you
(这是给你的学习计划).2.
First of all, to improve your pronunciation, you can listen to the Chinese radio every day
(首先,为了改善你的发音,你可以每天听中文广播). Attending a Chinese corner is also a good way to practice speaking Chinese. 3. Second, I suggest you learn five common Chinese characters daily and try making sentences with them
(其次,我建议你每天学习五个常见的汉字,并试着用它们造句). Third, to master grammar, you can do grammar exercises and make grammar cards. 4. Besides, watching Chinese movies is also helpful
(此外,看中国电影也很有帮助).Don't give up. 5.
I believe you will make great progress if you stick to the plan
(我相信如果你坚持这个计划,你会取得很大的进步).Yours,
Li Hua
答案
1. Here's a study plan for you 2. First of all, to improve your pronunciation, you can listen to the Chinese radio every day 3. Second, I suggest you learn five common Chinese characters daily and try making sentences with them 4. Besides, watching Chinese movies is also helpful 5. I believe you will make great progress if you stick to the plan
解析
【分析】
这道题是情境化的汉译英补句题,解题时首先要逐句对应中文提示的所有信息点,不能漏译核心内容;其次要结合邮件的口语化正式度选择合适的常用表达,同时要主动用上题干给出的参考词汇,还要兼顾英语语法规则:比如不定式作目的状语、if条件句的主将从现规则、动名词作主语的主谓一致要求,最后核对每个句子的逻辑和表达是否符合英语常用习惯,避免中式英语。
【解析】
1. 对应提示“这是给你的学习计划”,用常用的Here be倒装句型,核心名词study plan表示学习计划,用介词for引出对象you,组合得到句子:Here's a study plan for you。
2. 对应提示“首先,为了改善你的发音,你可以每天听中文广播”,用固定短语First of all表示“首先”,用不定式to improve your pronunciation作目的状语,后续顺译主句动作和时间状语,得到句子:First of all, to improve your pronunciation, you can listen to the Chinese radio every day。
3. 对应提示“其次,我建议你每天学习五个常见的汉字,并试着用它们造句”,用Second表示“其次”,suggest后接省略should的虚拟语气结构,注意Chinese character用复数形式,串联两个并列动作,得到句子:Second, I suggest you learn five common Chinese characters daily and try making sentences with them。
4. 对应提示“此外,看中国电影也很有帮助”,用Besides表示“此外”,将动作watch Chinese movies变为动名词结构作句子主语,符合主谓一致要求,得到句子:Besides, watching Chinese movies is also helpful。
5. 对应提示“我相信如果你坚持这个计划,你会取得很大的进步”,主句用I believe引导宾语从句,从句内嵌套if引导的条件状语从句,遵循“主将从现”的时态规则,同时用上参考词汇make progress和stick to,得到句子:I believe you will make great progress if you stick to the plan。
【答案】
1. Here's a study plan for you
2. First of all, to improve your pronunciation, you can listen to the Chinese radio every day
3. Second, I suggest you learn five common Chinese characters daily and try making sentences with them
4. Besides, watching Chinese movies is also helpful
5. I believe you will make great progress if you stick to the plan
【知识点】
汉译英,条件状语从句,动名词作主语
【点评】
本题结合给留学生提中文学习建议的真实情境,既考察学生基础的汉译英表达能力,也考察了常用短语、基础语法规则的运用,同时引导学生积累学习计划类话题的常用表达,整体侧重基础应用,只要信息点不遗漏、语法不出错就能拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题是情境化的汉译英补句题,解题时首先要逐句对应中文提示的所有信息点,不能漏译核心内容;其次要结合邮件的口语化正式度选择合适的常用表达,同时要主动用上题干给出的参考词汇,还要兼顾英语语法规则:比如不定式作目的状语、if条件句的主将从现规则、动名词作主语的主谓一致要求,最后核对每个句子的逻辑和表达是否符合英语常用习惯,避免中式英语。
【解析】
1. 对应提示“这是给你的学习计划”,用常用的Here be倒装句型,核心名词study plan表示学习计划,用介词for引出对象you,组合得到句子:Here's a study plan for you。
2. 对应提示“首先,为了改善你的发音,你可以每天听中文广播”,用固定短语First of all表示“首先”,用不定式to improve your pronunciation作目的状语,后续顺译主句动作和时间状语,得到句子:First of all, to improve your pronunciation, you can listen to the Chinese radio every day。
3. 对应提示“其次,我建议你每天学习五个常见的汉字,并试着用它们造句”,用Second表示“其次”,suggest后接省略should的虚拟语气结构,注意Chinese character用复数形式,串联两个并列动作,得到句子:Second, I suggest you learn five common Chinese characters daily and try making sentences with them。
4. 对应提示“此外,看中国电影也很有帮助”,用Besides表示“此外”,将动作watch Chinese movies变为动名词结构作句子主语,符合主谓一致要求,得到句子:Besides, watching Chinese movies is also helpful。
5. 对应提示“我相信如果你坚持这个计划,你会取得很大的进步”,主句用I believe引导宾语从句,从句内嵌套if引导的条件状语从句,遵循“主将从现”的时态规则,同时用上参考词汇make progress和stick to,得到句子:I believe you will make great progress if you stick to the plan。
【答案】
1. Here's a study plan for you
2. First of all, to improve your pronunciation, you can listen to the Chinese radio every day
3. Second, I suggest you learn five common Chinese characters daily and try making sentences with them
4. Besides, watching Chinese movies is also helpful
5. I believe you will make great progress if you stick to the plan
【知识点】
汉译英,条件状语从句,动名词作主语
【点评】
本题结合给留学生提中文学习建议的真实情境,既考察学生基础的汉译英表达能力,也考察了常用短语、基础语法规则的运用,同时引导学生积累学习计划类话题的常用表达,整体侧重基础应用,只要信息点不遗漏、语法不出错就能拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
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