七、XII. 书面表达。
我们都在成长,与过去的自己相比,你在性格、爱好和能力等很多方面可能都发生了变化。请以“My Changes”为题写话,不少于5句话。请使用正确的过去时和现在时,清晰对比“过去(then)”与“现在(now)”。
My Changes
I have changed a lot. ___
我们都在成长,与过去的自己相比,你在性格、爱好和能力等很多方面可能都发生了变化。请以“My Changes”为题写话,不少于5句话。请使用正确的过去时和现在时,清晰对比“过去(then)”与“现在(now)”。
My Changes
I have changed a lot. ___
答案
参考范文:
My Changes
I have changed a lot. Before, I was a shy girl. Now, I am active. I liked
drawing at home before. But now, I love playing badminton with my friends. I
couldn't ride a bike two years ago, but now I can ride it very well. I like my
changes.
My Changes
I have changed a lot. Before, I was a shy girl. Now, I am active. I liked
drawing at home before. But now, I love playing badminton with my friends. I
couldn't ride a bike two years ago, but now I can ride it very well. I like my
changes.
解析
【分析】
首先,我们要紧扣“My Changes”主题,围绕题目指定的性格、爱好、能力等方向展开过去与现在的对比。第一步,利用题目给出的开篇句“I have changed a lot.”引出全文;第二步,选取2-3个具体维度构建对比内容,注意时态区分:描述过去的状态、爱好、能力用一般过去时(如was、liked、couldn't),描述现在的情况用一般现在时(如am、love、can);第三步,结尾添加对变化的认可,让内容更完整,同时满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:用题目给出的“I have changed a lot.”直接点明核心,引出下文的变化描述。
2. 性格对比:“Before, I was a shy girl. Now, I am active.” 用一般过去时was体现过去害羞的性格,一般现在时am展现现在活泼的状态,清晰完成性格变化的对比。
3. 爱好对比:“I liked drawing at home before. But now, I love playing badminton with my friends.” 用liked(like的过去式)描述过去的居家爱好,love(一般现在时)描述现在的户外社交爱好,通过but转折强化变化差异。
4. 能力对比:“I couldn't ride a bike two years ago, but now I can ride it very well.” 用couldn't(can的过去否定形式)和can(一般现在时)对比过去与现在的骑车能力,凸显成长。
5. 结尾总结:“I like my changes.” 表达对自身变化的认可,使文章结构完整,情感饱满。
【答案】
My Changes
I have changed a lot. Before, I was a shy girl. Now, I am active. I liked drawing at home before. But now, I love playing badminton with my friends. I couldn't ride a bike two years ago, but now I can ride it very well. I like my changes.
【知识点】
1. 一般过去时与现在时对比运用
2. 个人成长类写作
3. 情态动词时态变化
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣主题,从性格、爱好、能力三个维度清晰展现成长变化,时态运用准确规范,过去时与现在时区分明确,语句通顺自然,结构完整,完全符合题目要求的字数和内容标准,是一篇极具参考性的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先,我们要紧扣“My Changes”主题,围绕题目指定的性格、爱好、能力等方向展开过去与现在的对比。第一步,利用题目给出的开篇句“I have changed a lot.”引出全文;第二步,选取2-3个具体维度构建对比内容,注意时态区分:描述过去的状态、爱好、能力用一般过去时(如was、liked、couldn't),描述现在的情况用一般现在时(如am、love、can);第三步,结尾添加对变化的认可,让内容更完整,同时满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:用题目给出的“I have changed a lot.”直接点明核心,引出下文的变化描述。
2. 性格对比:“Before, I was a shy girl. Now, I am active.” 用一般过去时was体现过去害羞的性格,一般现在时am展现现在活泼的状态,清晰完成性格变化的对比。
3. 爱好对比:“I liked drawing at home before. But now, I love playing badminton with my friends.” 用liked(like的过去式)描述过去的居家爱好,love(一般现在时)描述现在的户外社交爱好,通过but转折强化变化差异。
4. 能力对比:“I couldn't ride a bike two years ago, but now I can ride it very well.” 用couldn't(can的过去否定形式)和can(一般现在时)对比过去与现在的骑车能力,凸显成长。
5. 结尾总结:“I like my changes.” 表达对自身变化的认可,使文章结构完整,情感饱满。
【答案】
My Changes
I have changed a lot. Before, I was a shy girl. Now, I am active. I liked drawing at home before. But now, I love playing badminton with my friends. I couldn't ride a bike two years ago, but now I can ride it very well. I like my changes.
【知识点】
1. 一般过去时与现在时对比运用
2. 个人成长类写作
3. 情态动词时态变化
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣主题,从性格、爱好、能力三个维度清晰展现成长变化,时态运用准确规范,过去时与现在时区分明确,语句通顺自然,结构完整,完全符合题目要求的字数和内容标准,是一篇极具参考性的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
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