九、书面表达
四季轮回,美景纷呈;季节之韵,岁岁无穷。假设你校英语俱乐部正举办以“My Favourite Season”为题的英语征文比赛。请你根据以下信息,写一篇英语征文稿,参加本次比赛。

要求:
1. 词数80左右,文章结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My Favourite Season
Each season has its beauty. Let’s enjoy every time of year and always stay happy and hopeful!
四季轮回,美景纷呈;季节之韵,岁岁无穷。假设你校英语俱乐部正举办以“My Favourite Season”为题的英语征文比赛。请你根据以下信息,写一篇英语征文稿,参加本次比赛。
要求:
1. 词数80左右,文章结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My Favourite Season
Each season has its beauty. Let’s enjoy every time of year and always stay happy and hopeful!
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Season
Winter is my favourite season.
At this time of year, the temperature is usually below zero and it's often snowy. Everything is covered in deep white snow and the land is quiet and beautiful. My friends and I love playing outside in winter. It's exciting to have big snowball fights and make snowmen. Moreover, I enjoy the Ice Festival and I plan to go to Harbin to enjoy beautiful ice lanterns this winter holiday!
Winter is great! I always enjoy myself in winter.
My Favourite Season
Winter is my favourite season.
At this time of year, the temperature is usually below zero and it's often snowy. Everything is covered in deep white snow and the land is quiet and beautiful. My friends and I love playing outside in winter. It's exciting to have big snowball fights and make snowmen. Moreover, I enjoy the Ice Festival and I plan to go to Harbin to enjoy beautiful ice lanterns this winter holiday!
Winter is great! I always enjoy myself in winter.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:以“My Favourite Season”为题写英语征文,需覆盖思维导图的三个核心要点:点明最喜欢的季节(What is it?)、从天气、景色、活动等说明喜欢的原因(Why do you like it?)、表达对该季节的感受(How do you feel about it?)。解题时,先选定具体季节,再围绕天气、景色、活动组织内容,确保要点齐全、语言连贯,最后衔接给定结尾,符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 点明主题:直接说明最喜欢的季节是冬季;2. 描述天气:说明冬季气温低、多雪的特点;3. 描述景色:写被雪覆盖的美好景象;4. 描述活动:列举打雪仗、堆雪人、看冰灯节等活动;5. 表达感受:抒发对冬季的喜爱,最后衔接给定结尾句,完成写作。
【答案】My Favourite Season
Winter is my favourite season.
At this time of year, the temperature is usually below zero and it's often snowy. Everything is covered in deep white snow and the land is quiet and beautiful. My friends and I love playing outside in winter. It's exciting to have big snowball fights and make snowmen. Moreover, I enjoy the Ice Festival and I plan to go to Harbin to enjoy beautiful ice lanterns this winter holiday!
Winter is great! I always enjoy myself in winter.
Each season has its beauty. Let’s enjoy every time of year and always stay happy and hopeful!
【知识点】英语书面表达、季节话题写作
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定主题整合要点的英语写作能力,需准确覆盖思维导图内容,适当发挥使文章连贯,是初中英语常见的基础写作题型。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 点明主题:直接说明最喜欢的季节是冬季;2. 描述天气:说明冬季气温低、多雪的特点;3. 描述景色:写被雪覆盖的美好景象;4. 描述活动:列举打雪仗、堆雪人、看冰灯节等活动;5. 表达感受:抒发对冬季的喜爱,最后衔接给定结尾句,完成写作。
【答案】My Favourite Season
Winter is my favourite season.
At this time of year, the temperature is usually below zero and it's often snowy. Everything is covered in deep white snow and the land is quiet and beautiful. My friends and I love playing outside in winter. It's exciting to have big snowball fights and make snowmen. Moreover, I enjoy the Ice Festival and I plan to go to Harbin to enjoy beautiful ice lanterns this winter holiday!
Winter is great! I always enjoy myself in winter.
Each season has its beauty. Let’s enjoy every time of year and always stay happy and hopeful!
【知识点】英语书面表达、季节话题写作
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定主题整合要点的英语写作能力,需准确覆盖思维导图内容,适当发挥使文章连贯,是初中英语常见的基础写作题型。
【难度系数】0.6
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