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(一)
假如你是Molly,你的美国笔友Millie想要了解你的同学Tom,请帮助Millie按照提示从以下几个方面写一封电子邮件介绍Tom的情况。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,不要简单翻译,可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯;
2. 词数100左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Millie,
Tom is my classmate and my best friend. I would like to tell you something about him. He lives in Sunshine Town.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Molly
(一)
假如你是Molly,你的美国笔友Millie想要了解你的同学Tom,请帮助Millie按照提示从以下几个方面写一封电子邮件介绍Tom的情况。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,不要简单翻译,可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯;
2. 词数100左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Millie,
Tom is my classmate and my best friend. I would like to tell you something about him. He lives in Sunshine Town.
There are many changes there. In the past, the town was very old. But now it has become one of the famous places of interest and it is very clean and modern.
Tom likes travelling because he thinks he can meet people from all over the world and learn a lot when travelling. He also likes reading. He said, "Reading can help us get a lot of knowledge and make us feel relaxed."
Tom has good manners. He follows traffic rules and stands in line in public. He knows table manners well and he never makes noise when he has meals.
Tom is a cheerful boy and we all like him. I hope you can also be good friends.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Molly
答案
(一)
【审题指导】
本文是一封电子邮件,在邮件中介绍同学的情况,时态以一般现在
时为主。其中介绍同学家乡变化的部分需要对过去和现在进行对
比,也需要用到一般过去时。文章要点给的较详细,写作时不要死
板地翻译,可以用一些衔接词、过渡句将文章巧妙串联起来。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 介绍Tom家乡的变化；
第二步 介绍Tom的爱好；
第三步 介绍Tom的好礼仪。
One possible version:
Dear Millie,
Tom is my classmate and my best friend. I would like to tell
you something about him. He lives in Sunshine Town.
There are many changes there. In the past, the town was very
old. But now it has become one of the famous places of interest and
it is very clean and modern.
Tom likes travelling because he thinks he can meet people
from all over the world and learn a lot when travelling. He also
likes reading. He said, "Reading can help us get a lot of knowledge
and make us feel relaxed."
Tom has good manners. He follows traffic rules and stands in
line in public. He knows table manners well and he never makes
noise when he has meals.
Tom is a cheerful boy and we all like him. I hope you can also
be good friends.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Molly
【审题指导】
本文是一封电子邮件,在邮件中介绍同学的情况,时态以一般现在
时为主。其中介绍同学家乡变化的部分需要对过去和现在进行对
比,也需要用到一般过去时。文章要点给的较详细,写作时不要死
板地翻译,可以用一些衔接词、过渡句将文章巧妙串联起来。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 介绍Tom家乡的变化；
第二步 介绍Tom的爱好；
第三步 介绍Tom的好礼仪。
One possible version:
Dear Millie,
Tom is my classmate and my best friend. I would like to tell
you something about him. He lives in Sunshine Town.
There are many changes there. In the past, the town was very
old. But now it has become one of the famous places of interest and
it is very clean and modern.
Tom likes travelling because he thinks he can meet people
from all over the world and learn a lot when travelling. He also
likes reading. He said, "Reading can help us get a lot of knowledge
and make us feel relaxed."
Tom has good manners. He follows traffic rules and stands in
line in public. He knows table manners well and he never makes
noise when he has meals.
Tom is a cheerful boy and we all like him. I hope you can also
be good friends.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Molly
解析
【解析】
1. 审题：本题要求以Molly的身份给笔友Millie写一封介绍同学Tom的电子邮件，主体时态以一般现在时为主，描述家乡今昔对比部分需结合一般过去时，词数控制在100左右，给定首尾不计入总词数，需覆盖所有提示要点，适当补充细节避免生硬直译，保证行文连贯。
2. 写作步骤：
第一步：承接开头给出的He lives in Sunshine Town，补充描述Tom家乡的变化：点明小镇近年发展，对比过去老旧的状态，说明如今已成为知名景点，整洁又现代化。
第二步：介绍Tom的爱好：先说明他热爱旅行，解释旅行可以结识世界各地的人、拓宽见闻；再补充他喜爱阅读，点明阅读能获取知识、放松身心的益处。
第三步：介绍Tom的良好品行：说明他举止得体，日常遵守交通规则、在公共场合自觉排队，熟知餐桌礼仪，用餐时从不发出噪音。
第四步：收尾补充Tom性格开朗，大家都很喜欢他，表达希望Millie也能和Tom成为好朋友的愿望，衔接给定的结尾句即可。
参考范文：
Dear Millie,
Tom is my classmate and my best friend. I would like to tell you something about him. He lives in Sunshine Town.
There are many changes there. In the past, the town was very old. But now it has become one of the famous places of interest and it is very clean and modern.
Tom likes travelling because he thinks he can meet people from all over the world and learn a lot when travelling. He also likes reading. He said, "Reading can help us get a lot of knowledge and make us feel relaxed."
Tom has good manners. He follows traffic rules and stands in line in public. He knows table manners well and he never makes noise when he has meals.
Tom is a cheerful boy and we all like him. I hope you can also be good friends.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Molly
【答案】
参考范文如上，符合要点齐全、行文连贯、词数达标的要求即可。
【知识点】
电子邮件写作，一般现在时运用，要点型书面表达
【点评】
本题属于初中英语人物介绍类应用文写作，难度适中，提示要点清晰，学生只需要按照提示的三个模块梳理内容，合理使用过渡词串联语句，避免逐字生硬翻译，注意时态的正确切换，就可以写出符合要求的短文，同时也能锻炼学生用英语介绍他人相关信息的表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
1. 审题：本题要求以Molly的身份给笔友Millie写一封介绍同学Tom的电子邮件，主体时态以一般现在时为主，描述家乡今昔对比部分需结合一般过去时，词数控制在100左右，给定首尾不计入总词数，需覆盖所有提示要点，适当补充细节避免生硬直译，保证行文连贯。
2. 写作步骤：
第一步：承接开头给出的He lives in Sunshine Town，补充描述Tom家乡的变化：点明小镇近年发展，对比过去老旧的状态，说明如今已成为知名景点，整洁又现代化。
第二步：介绍Tom的爱好：先说明他热爱旅行，解释旅行可以结识世界各地的人、拓宽见闻；再补充他喜爱阅读，点明阅读能获取知识、放松身心的益处。
第三步：介绍Tom的良好品行：说明他举止得体，日常遵守交通规则、在公共场合自觉排队，熟知餐桌礼仪，用餐时从不发出噪音。
第四步：收尾补充Tom性格开朗，大家都很喜欢他，表达希望Millie也能和Tom成为好朋友的愿望，衔接给定的结尾句即可。
参考范文：
Dear Millie,
Tom is my classmate and my best friend. I would like to tell you something about him. He lives in Sunshine Town.
There are many changes there. In the past, the town was very old. But now it has become one of the famous places of interest and it is very clean and modern.
Tom likes travelling because he thinks he can meet people from all over the world and learn a lot when travelling. He also likes reading. He said, "Reading can help us get a lot of knowledge and make us feel relaxed."
Tom has good manners. He follows traffic rules and stands in line in public. He knows table manners well and he never makes noise when he has meals.
Tom is a cheerful boy and we all like him. I hope you can also be good friends.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Molly
【答案】
参考范文如上，符合要点齐全、行文连贯、词数达标的要求即可。
【知识点】
电子邮件写作，一般现在时运用，要点型书面表达
【点评】
本题属于初中英语人物介绍类应用文写作，难度适中，提示要点清晰，学生只需要按照提示的三个模块梳理内容，合理使用过渡词串联语句，避免逐字生硬翻译，注意时态的正确切换，就可以写出符合要求的短文，同时也能锻炼学生用英语介绍他人相关信息的表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
(二)
阳光中学英文报正在开展关于"合理利用电脑进行学习"的征稿活动,假如你是李华,请你根据下表所提示的要点写一篇不少于90词的征文投稿,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about computers and schoolwork.
Yours,
Li Hua
阳光中学英文报正在开展关于"合理利用电脑进行学习"的征稿活动,假如你是李华,请你根据下表所提示的要点写一篇不少于90词的征文投稿,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about computers and schoolwork.
With the development of the internet, many students are enjoying surfing the internet in their free time. On the one hand, there are many resources on the internet and it's convenient for students to find out what they need. On the other hand, students can send and receive emails and they can communicate with friends easily through the internet. What's more, students can listen to music and watch films to relax themselves.
However, every coin has two sides. Surfing the internet may cause a lot of problems. Some students are addicted to playing computer games. Besides, the internet takes so much time that students don't have enough time to communicate with their parents.
In my opinion, students should use the internet properly. It's better to regard the internet as a good helper in our study.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
(二)
【审题指导】
本文是一篇征文投稿,主要围绕"合理利用电脑进行学习"展开陈
述,以第三人称和一般现在时为主。写作时要运用不同的句式和
短语,使文章逻辑清晰、层次清楚,不要出现单词拼写错误和语法
错误。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 电脑用于学习的优势；
第二步 电脑可能导致的问题；
第三步 你的看法和建议。
One possible version:
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about computers and schoolwork.
With the development of the internet, many students are
enjoying surfing the internet in their free time. On the one hand,
there are many resources on the internet and it's convenient for
students to find out what they need. On the other hand, students
can send and receive emails and they can communicate with friends
easily through the internet. What's more, students can listen to
music and watch films to relax themselves.
However, every coin has two sides. Surfing the internet may
cause a lot of problems. Some students are addicted to playing
computer games. Besides, the internet takes so much time that
students don't have enough time to communicate with their
parents.
In my opinion, students should use the internet properly. It's
better to regard the internet as a good helper in our study.
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题指导】
本文是一篇征文投稿,主要围绕"合理利用电脑进行学习"展开陈
述,以第三人称和一般现在时为主。写作时要运用不同的句式和
短语,使文章逻辑清晰、层次清楚,不要出现单词拼写错误和语法
错误。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 电脑用于学习的优势；
第二步 电脑可能导致的问题；
第三步 你的看法和建议。
One possible version:
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about computers and schoolwork.
With the development of the internet, many students are
enjoying surfing the internet in their free time. On the one hand,
there are many resources on the internet and it's convenient for
students to find out what they need. On the other hand, students
can send and receive emails and they can communicate with friends
easily through the internet. What's more, students can listen to
music and watch films to relax themselves.
However, every coin has two sides. Surfing the internet may
cause a lot of problems. Some students are addicted to playing
computer games. Besides, the internet takes so much time that
students don't have enough time to communicate with their
parents.
In my opinion, students should use the internet properly. It's
better to regard the internet as a good helper in our study.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【解析】
这是一篇主题为"合理利用电脑进行学习"的英文征文写作题，解题步骤如下：
1. 审题：明确文体为英文投稿书信，主体人称为第三人称，核心时态为一般现在时，词数要求不少于90词，给定开头不计入总词数。
2. 搭建写作框架：
第一步：阐述电脑用于学习的优势，结合提示要点说明网络资源丰富、检索资料便捷，可收发邮件和朋友顺畅交流，还能通过听音乐、看电影放松身心；
第二步：辩证说明不合理使用网络可能引发的问题，比如部分学生沉迷网络游戏，占用大量本该学习、陪伴家人的时间；
第三步：给出合理使用电脑的观点与建议，倡导将电脑作为学习的得力助手，规范上网时长，优先利用网络资源服务学业。
3. 串联内容，保证逻辑连贯，句式多样，规避拼写与语法错误，完成符合要求的征文。
【答案】
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about computers and schoolwork.
With the development of the internet, many students are enjoying surfing the internet in their free time. On the one hand, there are many resources on the internet and it's convenient for students to find out what they need. On the other hand, students can send and receive emails and they can communicate with friends easily through the internet. What's more, students can listen to music and watch films to relax themselves.
However, every coin has two sides. Surfing the internet may cause a lot of problems. Some students are addicted to playing computer games. Besides, the internet takes so much time that students don't have enough time to communicate with their parents.
In my opinion, students should use the internet properly. It's better to regard the internet as a good helper in our study. We can make a reasonable timetable to control our online time, and we should focus more on learning resources rather than entertainment content on the internet.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作，议论文辩证表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于初中英语话题写作题，要求学生紧扣给定要点完成辩证类征文，既考查学生的基础词汇、句式积累能力，也锻炼学生的逻辑表达和辩证思考能力，写作时注意覆盖所有提示要点，保证行文连贯即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇主题为"合理利用电脑进行学习"的英文征文写作题，解题步骤如下：
1. 审题：明确文体为英文投稿书信，主体人称为第三人称，核心时态为一般现在时，词数要求不少于90词，给定开头不计入总词数。
2. 搭建写作框架：
第一步：阐述电脑用于学习的优势，结合提示要点说明网络资源丰富、检索资料便捷，可收发邮件和朋友顺畅交流，还能通过听音乐、看电影放松身心；
第二步：辩证说明不合理使用网络可能引发的问题，比如部分学生沉迷网络游戏，占用大量本该学习、陪伴家人的时间；
第三步：给出合理使用电脑的观点与建议，倡导将电脑作为学习的得力助手，规范上网时长，优先利用网络资源服务学业。
3. 串联内容，保证逻辑连贯，句式多样，规避拼写与语法错误，完成符合要求的征文。
【答案】
Dear editor,
I'd like to say something about computers and schoolwork.
With the development of the internet, many students are enjoying surfing the internet in their free time. On the one hand, there are many resources on the internet and it's convenient for students to find out what they need. On the other hand, students can send and receive emails and they can communicate with friends easily through the internet. What's more, students can listen to music and watch films to relax themselves.
However, every coin has two sides. Surfing the internet may cause a lot of problems. Some students are addicted to playing computer games. Besides, the internet takes so much time that students don't have enough time to communicate with their parents.
In my opinion, students should use the internet properly. It's better to regard the internet as a good helper in our study. We can make a reasonable timetable to control our online time, and we should focus more on learning resources rather than entertainment content on the internet.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信写作，议论文辩证表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于初中英语话题写作题，要求学生紧扣给定要点完成辩证类征文，既考查学生的基础词汇、句式积累能力，也锻炼学生的逻辑表达和辩证思考能力，写作时注意覆盖所有提示要点，保证行文连贯即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
(三)
阅读是人们获得知识的主要途径,人们越来越注重阅读。请用英语写一篇短文,与同学们分享你在阅读方面的一些经验和看法。
要求:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My reading habits
阅读是人们获得知识的主要途径,人们越来越注重阅读。请用英语写一篇短文,与同学们分享你在阅读方面的一些经验和看法。
要求:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My reading habits
I love reading. We can get knowledge through reading.
I usually spend over an hour a day reading books. I like history books best. So far, I have read many books. I borrowed most of the books from the school library. My parents often buy some books from the bookshop for me too. And I also like reading online books now.
Reading opens up a whole new world to me. It can also help me relax after a busy day. Good books are good friends. Reading is always a wonderful pastime.
I would like to advise that everyone should read more books. Let's start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
答案
(三)
My reading habits
I love reading. We can get knowledge through reading.
I usually spend over an hour a day reading books. I like history books best. So far, I have read many books. I borrowed most of the books from the school library. My parents often buy some books from the bookshop for me too. And I also like reading online books now.
Reading opens up a whole new world to me. It can also help me relax after a busy day. Good books are good friends. Reading is always a wonderful pastime.
I would like to advise that everyone should read more books. Let's start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
My reading habits
I love reading. We can get knowledge through reading.
I usually spend over an hour a day reading books. I like history books best. So far, I have read many books. I borrowed most of the books from the school library. My parents often buy some books from the bookshop for me too. And I also like reading online books now.
Reading opens up a whole new world to me. It can also help me relax after a busy day. Good books are good friends. Reading is always a wonderful pastime.
I would like to advise that everyone should read more books. Let's start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
解析
【解析】
这是一篇主题为My reading habits的英语短文写作，按照思维导图的结构分为三个部分完成写作：
1. 开篇点明自身对阅读的喜爱，说明阅读是获取知识的重要途径，引出主题；
2. 第一部分阐述阅读经验：说明日均阅读时长、喜爱的书籍类型、书籍的来源（校图书馆借阅、父母从书店购买），补充提及当下也喜欢阅读线上书籍；
3. 第二部分阐述阅读收获：点明阅读能打开全新的世界，帮助自己在忙碌一天后放松，点明好书如挚友，阅读是很棒的消遣方式；
4. 结尾部分给出倡议，呼吁大家多阅读，让阅读成为生活的一部分，全文词数符合100词左右的要求，内容连贯，未出现真实人名、校名等信息。
【答案】
My reading habits
I love reading. We can get knowledge through reading.
I usually spend over an hour a day reading books. I like history books best. So far, I have read many books. I borrowed most of the books from the school library. My parents often buy some books from the bookshop for me too. And I also like reading online books now.
Reading opens up a whole new world to me. It can also help me relax after a busy day. Good books are good friends. Reading is always a wonderful pastime.
I would like to advise that everyone should read more books. Let's start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【知识点】
英语提纲作文写作，常用英语句式运用，内容逻辑组织
【点评】
本篇写作严格贴合题目给出的所有要点，完全匹配思维导图的经验、收获、倡议三个模块的内容要求，语句通顺自然，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的个人信息，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇主题为My reading habits的英语短文写作，按照思维导图的结构分为三个部分完成写作：
1. 开篇点明自身对阅读的喜爱，说明阅读是获取知识的重要途径，引出主题；
2. 第一部分阐述阅读经验：说明日均阅读时长、喜爱的书籍类型、书籍的来源（校图书馆借阅、父母从书店购买），补充提及当下也喜欢阅读线上书籍；
3. 第二部分阐述阅读收获：点明阅读能打开全新的世界，帮助自己在忙碌一天后放松，点明好书如挚友，阅读是很棒的消遣方式；
4. 结尾部分给出倡议，呼吁大家多阅读，让阅读成为生活的一部分，全文词数符合100词左右的要求，内容连贯，未出现真实人名、校名等信息。
【答案】
My reading habits
I love reading. We can get knowledge through reading.
I usually spend over an hour a day reading books. I like history books best. So far, I have read many books. I borrowed most of the books from the school library. My parents often buy some books from the bookshop for me too. And I also like reading online books now.
Reading opens up a whole new world to me. It can also help me relax after a busy day. Good books are good friends. Reading is always a wonderful pastime.
I would like to advise that everyone should read more books. Let's start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【知识点】
英语提纲作文写作，常用英语句式运用，内容逻辑组织
【点评】
本篇写作严格贴合题目给出的所有要点，完全匹配思维导图的经验、收获、倡议三个模块的内容要求，语句通顺自然，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的个人信息，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
(四)
很快就要到世界环境日了,你校正举办以"Being a Volunteer for Going Green"为题的英语演讲比赛。假如陈军想要参加比赛,请你以陈军的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己。
提示:
1. What are you like?
2. What have you ever done for going green?
3. Tell us the reasons for going green and how to do it.
要求:
1. 要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯;
2. 正确使用时态,语法正确,书写整洁;
3. 100词左右,文中已给出内容不计入总词数。
Being a Volunteer for Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer for going green. I'm glad to make a speech here.
Thank you for listening!
很快就要到世界环境日了,你校正举办以"Being a Volunteer for Going Green"为题的英语演讲比赛。假如陈军想要参加比赛,请你以陈军的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己。
提示:
1. What are you like?
2. What have you ever done for going green?
3. Tell us the reasons for going green and how to do it.
要求:
1. 要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯;
2. 正确使用时态,语法正确,书写整洁;
3. 100词左右,文中已给出内容不计入总词数。
Being a Volunteer for Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer for going green. I'm glad to make a speech here.
In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I'm always willing to help others. I have ever worked as a volunteer to protect the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
Earth is our only home. I think it's necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I will do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and encourage people around me to do the same. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I will try my best to make a big difference.
Thank you for listening!
答案
(四)
Being a Volunteer for Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer for going green. I'm glad to make a speech here.
In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I'm always willing to help others. I have ever worked as a volunteer to protect the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
Earth is our only home. I think it's necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I will do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and encourage people around me to do the same. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I will try my best to make a big difference.
Thank you for listening!
Being a Volunteer for Going Green
Hello, everyone. I'm Chen Jun. I want to be a volunteer for going green. I'm glad to make a speech here.
In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I'm always willing to help others. I have ever worked as a volunteer to protect the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
Earth is our only home. I think it's necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I will do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and encourage people around me to do the same. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I will try my best to make a big difference.
Thank you for listening!
解析
【解析】
这是一篇主题为"Being a Volunteer for Going Green"的英语演讲稿写作题，写作时需覆盖全部给定要点：1. 介绍自身性格与爱好，体现乐于助人的特质；2. 列举过往参与环保相关的志愿经历；3. 阐述践行绿色环保的原因，说明当选志愿者后的具体环保行动方案。写作过程中要保证时态使用准确，语句连贯通顺，词数控制在100词左右，符合演讲稿的正式表达风格。参考范文完整覆盖所有提示要点，语法规范，逻辑清晰，符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I'm always willing to help others. I have ever worked as a volunteer to protect the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
Earth is our only home. I think it's necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I will do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and encourage people around me to do the same. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I will try my best to make a big difference.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
环保主题表达
英语时态运用
【点评】
本题属于应用类英语写作题，核心考查学生的英语演讲稿撰写能力，要求学生紧扣给定的三个提示要点组织内容，同时兼顾语法正确性和语句连贯性，引导学生结合环保主题输出符合要求的表达，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇主题为"Being a Volunteer for Going Green"的英语演讲稿写作题，写作时需覆盖全部给定要点：1. 介绍自身性格与爱好，体现乐于助人的特质；2. 列举过往参与环保相关的志愿经历；3. 阐述践行绿色环保的原因，说明当选志愿者后的具体环保行动方案。写作过程中要保证时态使用准确，语句连贯通顺，词数控制在100词左右，符合演讲稿的正式表达风格。参考范文完整覆盖所有提示要点，语法规范，逻辑清晰，符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
In my free time, I like travelling, reading and exercising. I'm always willing to help others. I have ever worked as a volunteer to protect the environment. I have also organized a charity show to raise money for WWF.
Earth is our only home. I think it's necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.
If I can be a volunteer, I will do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and encourage people around me to do the same. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I will try my best to make a big difference.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
环保主题表达
英语时态运用
【点评】
本题属于应用类英语写作题，核心考查学生的英语演讲稿撰写能力，要求学生紧扣给定的三个提示要点组织内容，同时兼顾语法正确性和语句连贯性，引导学生结合环保主题输出符合要求的表达，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
(五)
文明礼仪是交流沟通的重要部分,想想你哪一次的沟通经历让你意识到文明礼仪可以促进有效沟通,进而帮助你解决问题或者增进与他人之间的感情。请以"Good Manners Bridge Communication"为题写一篇短文。
要点:1. 礼仪的作用;
2. 你的亲身经历;
3. 行动倡议。
注意:1. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称等信息;
2. 词数100左右。
Good Manners Bridge Communication
文明礼仪是交流沟通的重要部分,想想你哪一次的沟通经历让你意识到文明礼仪可以促进有效沟通,进而帮助你解决问题或者增进与他人之间的感情。请以"Good Manners Bridge Communication"为题写一篇短文。
要点:1. 礼仪的作用;
2. 你的亲身经历;
3. 行动倡议。
注意:1. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称等信息;
2. 词数100左右。
Good Manners Bridge Communication
Good manners help people communicate better by showing kindness and respect. Simple words like "please" and "thank you", along with listening carefully, can solve problems and make relationships stronger.
Last year, my friend and I argued about a group project. Instead of getting angry, we talked calmly. I said, "Your idea is good, but maybe we can try this ..." My friend listened and shared her thoughts too. In the end, our project was successful, and we became closer friends.
Let's show good manners every day. Smile often, speak kindly, and listen to others. Remember, good manners build happy connections between people!
答案
(五)
Good Manners Bridge Communication
Good manners help people communicate better by showing kindness and respect. Simple words like "please" and "thank you", along with listening carefully, can solve problems and make relationships stronger.
Last year, my friend and I argued about a group project. Instead of getting angry, we talked calmly. I said, "Your idea is good, but maybe we can try this ..." My friend listened and shared her thoughts too. In the end, our project was successful, and we became closer friends.
Let's show good manners every day. Smile often, speak kindly, and listen to others. Remember, good manners build happy connections between people!
Good Manners Bridge Communication
Good manners help people communicate better by showing kindness and respect. Simple words like "please" and "thank you", along with listening carefully, can solve problems and make relationships stronger.
Last year, my friend and I argued about a group project. Instead of getting angry, we talked calmly. I said, "Your idea is good, but maybe we can try this ..." My friend listened and shared her thoughts too. In the end, our project was successful, and we became closer friends.
Let's show good manners every day. Smile often, speak kindly, and listen to others. Remember, good manners build happy connections between people!
解析
【解析】
这是一篇命题英语短文写作，需紧扣题目要求的三个要点完成创作：
1. 开篇点明文明礼仪的作用：说明文明礼仪通过传递善意与尊重助力高效沟通，可借助常用礼貌用语、认真倾听等细节体现其对解决问题、增进关系的正向作用；
2. 主体部分叙述亲身经历：选取和同学合作项目产生分歧的真实感场景，描述双方用礼貌平和的方式沟通，最终顺利完成项目且加深情谊的过程，贴合主题；
3. 结尾发出行动倡议：呼吁大家日常践行文明礼仪，用友善言行搭建人际间的美好联结，全文控制词数在100左右，不出现个人真实隐私信息即可符合要求。
【答案】
Good Manners Bridge Communication
Good manners help people communicate better by showing kindness and respect. Simple words like "please" and "thank you", along with listening carefully, can solve problems and make relationships stronger.
Last year, my friend and I argued about a group project. Instead of getting angry, we talked calmly. I said, "Your idea is good, but maybe we can try this ..." My friend listened and shared her thoughts too. In the end, our project was successful, and we became closer friends.
Let's show good manners every day. Smile often, speak kindly, and listen to others. Remember, good manners build happy connections between people!
【知识点】
英语命题写作
文明礼仪主题表达
要点式作文结构
【点评】
本篇作文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部要点，结构清晰逻辑连贯，内容贴合学生真实生活场景，语言表达简洁地道，词数符合要求，完全规避了个人隐私信息，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的合格范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇命题英语短文写作，需紧扣题目要求的三个要点完成创作：
1. 开篇点明文明礼仪的作用：说明文明礼仪通过传递善意与尊重助力高效沟通，可借助常用礼貌用语、认真倾听等细节体现其对解决问题、增进关系的正向作用；
2. 主体部分叙述亲身经历：选取和同学合作项目产生分歧的真实感场景，描述双方用礼貌平和的方式沟通，最终顺利完成项目且加深情谊的过程，贴合主题；
3. 结尾发出行动倡议：呼吁大家日常践行文明礼仪，用友善言行搭建人际间的美好联结，全文控制词数在100左右，不出现个人真实隐私信息即可符合要求。
【答案】
Good Manners Bridge Communication
Good manners help people communicate better by showing kindness and respect. Simple words like "please" and "thank you", along with listening carefully, can solve problems and make relationships stronger.
Last year, my friend and I argued about a group project. Instead of getting angry, we talked calmly. I said, "Your idea is good, but maybe we can try this ..." My friend listened and shared her thoughts too. In the end, our project was successful, and we became closer friends.
Let's show good manners every day. Smile often, speak kindly, and listen to others. Remember, good manners build happy connections between people!
【知识点】
英语命题写作
文明礼仪主题表达
要点式作文结构
【点评】
本篇作文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部要点，结构清晰逻辑连贯，内容贴合学生真实生活场景，语言表达简洁地道，词数符合要求，完全规避了个人隐私信息，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的合格范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
(六)
走进江苏,游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加"Go Jiangsu"旅游活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以"Welcome to Lianyungang"为题写一篇英语短文,邀请他们走进家乡连云港,品山海文化,游大圣故里。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcome to Lianyungang
I'm Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
走进江苏,游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加"Go Jiangsu"旅游活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以"Welcome to Lianyungang"为题写一篇英语短文,邀请他们走进家乡连云港,品山海文化,游大圣故里。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcome to Lianyungang
I'm Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang lies in the northeast of Jiangsu. It's famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It's cool in summer.
Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I'm sure you will enjoy it.
Don't miss Lianyungang when you attend "Go Jiangsu". Welcome to our hometown. We're looking forward to meeting you soon.
答案
(六)
Welcome to Lianyungang
I'm Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang lies in the northeast of Jiangsu. It's famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It's cool in summer.
Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I'm sure you will enjoy it.
Don't miss Lianyungang when you attend "Go Jiangsu". Welcome to our hometown. We're looking forward to meeting you soon.
Welcome to Lianyungang
I'm Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang lies in the northeast of Jiangsu. It's famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It's cool in summer.
Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I'm sure you will enjoy it.
Don't miss Lianyungang when you attend "Go Jiangsu". Welcome to our hometown. We're looking forward to meeting you soon.
解析
【解析】
这是一篇提示类英语应用文写作，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇已给出，直接衔接介绍连云港的基本信息：点明连云港位于江苏东北部，夏季气候凉爽，引出当地知名景点。
2. 依次覆盖所有提示要点：介绍核心景点花果山（孙悟空故里）、连岛苏马湾的海滨风光，补充说明当地山海文化底蕴丰厚、民风友善，还可推荐特色本地美食。
3. 结尾发出诚挚邀约，契合"Go Jiangsu"旅游活动的主题，保证词数约90，行文连贯自然，不出现个人隐私信息。
【答案】
Welcome to Lianyungang
I'm Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang lies in the northeast of Jiangsu. It's famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It's cool in summer.
Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I'm sure you will enjoy it.
Don't miss Lianyungang when you attend "Go Jiangsu". Welcome to our hometown. We're looking forward to meeting you soon.
【知识点】
英语提示类作文；景点介绍表达；应用文写作
【点评】
本篇写作完整覆盖了地理位置、特色景点、地域文化、民风民俗等所有提示要点，行文逻辑流畅，语言表达贴合初中英语写作要求，符合词数规定，完成了向外籍友人推介家乡连云港的写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇提示类英语应用文写作，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇已给出，直接衔接介绍连云港的基本信息：点明连云港位于江苏东北部，夏季气候凉爽，引出当地知名景点。
2. 依次覆盖所有提示要点：介绍核心景点花果山（孙悟空故里）、连岛苏马湾的海滨风光，补充说明当地山海文化底蕴丰厚、民风友善，还可推荐特色本地美食。
3. 结尾发出诚挚邀约，契合"Go Jiangsu"旅游活动的主题，保证词数约90，行文连贯自然，不出现个人隐私信息。
【答案】
Welcome to Lianyungang
I'm Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang lies in the northeast of Jiangsu. It's famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It's cool in summer.
Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I'm sure you will enjoy it.
Don't miss Lianyungang when you attend "Go Jiangsu". Welcome to our hometown. We're looking forward to meeting you soon.
【知识点】
英语提示类作文；景点介绍表达；应用文写作
【点评】
本篇写作完整覆盖了地理位置、特色景点、地域文化、民风民俗等所有提示要点，行文逻辑流畅，语言表达贴合初中英语写作要求，符合词数规定，完成了向外籍友人推介家乡连云港的写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
