2026年优学1+1评价与测试七年级英语下册人教版第152页答案
Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
又是一年圣女果采摘季。假如你是李华,上周日,你和家人一起去了一家农场采摘圣女果。请你结合下面的提示给你的笔友Anna写一封邮件分享这次经历。词数不少于70。

写作要求:1.语言流畅,层次清晰,提示内容须全部使用,可适当发挥;2.书写规范,卷面整洁;3.文中不能出现学生姓名和学校名称。

答案

One possible version:
Dear Anna,
How's it going with you?
Last Sunday,it was cloudy,neither too cold nor too hot. My family and I drove to a farm. In the morning,we picked cherry tomatoes there. I was happy to taste cherry tomatoes. They were delicious. I ate a lot of them. After lunch,we went fishing for crayfish. My family and I were all very excited. At four in the afternoon,we went home with crayfish. We made a big meal out of them. It was really fun!
Yours,
Li Hua

解析

【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Anna写一封邮件,分享上周日和家人去农场的经历。首先需遵循邮件的格式,开头问候后,按时间顺序结合表格中的所有提示信息(时间、天气、交通、活动、感受)组织内容,语言要流畅自然,适当补充细节让内容连贯,同时注意不能出现真实姓名和学校,词数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头:用邮件常用问候语“How's it going with you?”开启信件;
2. 点明背景:说明时间(last Sunday)、天气(cloudy)、出行方式(drove to a farm);
3. 上午活动:描述摘圣女果的过程,表达品尝圣女果的开心感受,补充“吃了很多”的细节;
4. 下午活动:讲述钓刺龙虾的经历,表达兴奋的心情,补充“用龙虾做了大餐”的细节;
5. 结尾:总结这次经历很有趣,用标准邮件结尾署名。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
How's it going with you?
Last Sunday,it was cloudy,neither too cold nor too hot. My family and I drove to a farm. In the morning,we picked cherry tomatoes there. I was happy to taste cherry tomatoes. They were delicious. I ate a lot of them. After lunch,we went fishing for crayfish. My family and I were all very excited. At four in the afternoon,we went home with crayfish. We made a big meal out of them. It was really fun!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达;邮件写作;一般过去时
【点评】
该范文完全符合写作要求,涵盖了所有提示信息,层次清晰,语言流畅自然,情感表达真实,适当补充细节让内容更丰富,是一篇优秀的邮件类书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5