Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
又是一年圣女果采摘季。假如你是李华,上周日,你和家人一起去了一家农场采摘圣女果。请你结合下面的提示给你的笔友Anna写一封邮件分享这次经历。词数不少于70。

写作要求:1.语言流畅,层次清晰,提示内容须全部使用,可适当发挥;2.书写规范,卷面整洁;3.文中不能出现学生姓名和学校名称。
又是一年圣女果采摘季。假如你是李华,上周日,你和家人一起去了一家农场采摘圣女果。请你结合下面的提示给你的笔友Anna写一封邮件分享这次经历。词数不少于70。
写作要求:1.语言流畅,层次清晰,提示内容须全部使用,可适当发挥;2.书写规范,卷面整洁;3.文中不能出现学生姓名和学校名称。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
How's it going with you?
Last Sunday,it was cloudy,neither too cold nor too hot. My family and I drove to a farm. In the morning,we picked cherry tomatoes there. I was happy to taste cherry tomatoes. They were delicious. I ate a lot of them. After lunch,we went fishing for crayfish. My family and I were all very excited. At four in the afternoon,we went home with crayfish. We made a big meal out of them. It was really fun!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Anna,
How's it going with you?
Last Sunday,it was cloudy,neither too cold nor too hot. My family and I drove to a farm. In the morning,we picked cherry tomatoes there. I was happy to taste cherry tomatoes. They were delicious. I ate a lot of them. After lunch,we went fishing for crayfish. My family and I were all very excited. At four in the afternoon,we went home with crayfish. We made a big meal out of them. It was really fun!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Anna写一封邮件,分享上周日和家人去农场的经历。首先需遵循邮件的格式,开头问候后,按时间顺序结合表格中的所有提示信息(时间、天气、交通、活动、感受)组织内容,语言要流畅自然,适当补充细节让内容连贯,同时注意不能出现真实姓名和学校,词数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头:用邮件常用问候语“How's it going with you?”开启信件;
2. 点明背景:说明时间(last Sunday)、天气(cloudy)、出行方式(drove to a farm);
3. 上午活动:描述摘圣女果的过程,表达品尝圣女果的开心感受,补充“吃了很多”的细节;
4. 下午活动:讲述钓刺龙虾的经历,表达兴奋的心情,补充“用龙虾做了大餐”的细节;
5. 结尾:总结这次经历很有趣,用标准邮件结尾署名。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
How's it going with you?
Last Sunday,it was cloudy,neither too cold nor too hot. My family and I drove to a farm. In the morning,we picked cherry tomatoes there. I was happy to taste cherry tomatoes. They were delicious. I ate a lot of them. After lunch,we went fishing for crayfish. My family and I were all very excited. At four in the afternoon,we went home with crayfish. We made a big meal out of them. It was really fun!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达;邮件写作;一般过去时
【点评】
该范文完全符合写作要求,涵盖了所有提示信息,层次清晰,语言流畅自然,情感表达真实,适当补充细节让内容更丰富,是一篇优秀的邮件类书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Anna写一封邮件,分享上周日和家人去农场的经历。首先需遵循邮件的格式,开头问候后,按时间顺序结合表格中的所有提示信息(时间、天气、交通、活动、感受)组织内容,语言要流畅自然,适当补充细节让内容连贯,同时注意不能出现真实姓名和学校,词数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头:用邮件常用问候语“How's it going with you?”开启信件;
2. 点明背景:说明时间(last Sunday)、天气(cloudy)、出行方式(drove to a farm);
3. 上午活动:描述摘圣女果的过程,表达品尝圣女果的开心感受,补充“吃了很多”的细节;
4. 下午活动:讲述钓刺龙虾的经历,表达兴奋的心情,补充“用龙虾做了大餐”的细节;
5. 结尾:总结这次经历很有趣,用标准邮件结尾署名。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
How's it going with you?
Last Sunday,it was cloudy,neither too cold nor too hot. My family and I drove to a farm. In the morning,we picked cherry tomatoes there. I was happy to taste cherry tomatoes. They were delicious. I ate a lot of them. After lunch,we went fishing for crayfish. My family and I were all very excited. At four in the afternoon,we went home with crayfish. We made a big meal out of them. It was really fun!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达;邮件写作;一般过去时
【点评】
该范文完全符合写作要求,涵盖了所有提示信息,层次清晰,语言流畅自然,情感表达真实,适当补充细节让内容更丰富,是一篇优秀的邮件类书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
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