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任务三:书面表达。
在上面的短文中,作者提到了自己的生活习惯。请根据下列写作要点写一篇短文,介绍你的生活习惯。可适当发挥,不少于 60 词。
写作要点:
1. Do you have any healthy / unhealthy habits? What are they?
2. What can you do to make your life better?
在上面的短文中,作者提到了自己的生活习惯。请根据下列写作要点写一篇短文,介绍你的生活习惯。可适当发挥,不少于 60 词。
写作要点:
1. Do you have any healthy / unhealthy habits? What are they?
2. What can you do to make your life better?
答案
My Living Habits
I have lots of living habits, some are healthy but others are not.
My healthy habits are great: I eat vegetables and fruit every day, and I play sports with my classmates three to four times a week after class. But I also have bad habits: I sometimes stay up late to play phone games on weekends, and I often eat too much junk food as snacks.
To make my life better, I will make a reasonable daily plan to stop staying up late, and I will eat less junk food and do more exercise. I think my life will become much healthier soon.
I have lots of living habits, some are healthy but others are not.
My healthy habits are great: I eat vegetables and fruit every day, and I play sports with my classmates three to four times a week after class. But I also have bad habits: I sometimes stay up late to play phone games on weekends, and I often eat too much junk food as snacks.
To make my life better, I will make a reasonable daily plan to stop staying up late, and I will eat less junk food and do more exercise. I think my life will become much healthier soon.
解析
【分析】
本题要求介绍自己的生活习惯，需涵盖两个核心要点：一是说明自身健康与不健康的习惯及具体内容；二是说明改善生活的做法，同时要适当发挥，字数不少于60词。写作思路可分为三步：1. 开头总起，点明自身习惯有健康和不健康两类；2. 分别列举具体的健康习惯（如饮食、运动）和不健康习惯（如熬夜、吃垃圾食品）；3. 提出改进措施，表达对健康生活的期待，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣要点展开：① 开头总述：说明自己有健康和不健康的生活习惯；② 具体举例：健康习惯为每天吃蔬菜水果、每周3-4次课后和同学运动；不健康习惯为周末有时熬夜玩手机、常吃太多垃圾食品当零食；③ 改进计划：制定合理作息计划不熬夜，少吃垃圾食品、多运动，最后表达对健康生活的期待。全程使用一般现在时，语句通顺，确保字数达标。
【答案】
My Living Habits
I have lots of living habits, some are healthy but others are not.
My healthy habits are great: I eat vegetables and fruit every day, and I play sports with my classmates three to four times a week after class. But I also have bad habits: I sometimes stay up late to play phone games on weekends, and I often eat too much junk food as snacks.
To make my life better, I will make a reasonable daily plan to stop staying up late, and I will eat less junk food and do more exercise. I think my life will become much healthier soon.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、生活习惯话题、一般现在时
【点评】
本文结构清晰，紧扣写作要点，内容具体充实，语言通顺自然，准确传达了自身习惯及改进计划，适当发挥合理，符合初中英语书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求介绍自己的生活习惯，需涵盖两个核心要点：一是说明自身健康与不健康的习惯及具体内容；二是说明改善生活的做法，同时要适当发挥，字数不少于60词。写作思路可分为三步：1. 开头总起，点明自身习惯有健康和不健康两类；2. 分别列举具体的健康习惯（如饮食、运动）和不健康习惯（如熬夜、吃垃圾食品）；3. 提出改进措施，表达对健康生活的期待，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣要点展开：① 开头总述：说明自己有健康和不健康的生活习惯；② 具体举例：健康习惯为每天吃蔬菜水果、每周3-4次课后和同学运动；不健康习惯为周末有时熬夜玩手机、常吃太多垃圾食品当零食；③ 改进计划：制定合理作息计划不熬夜，少吃垃圾食品、多运动，最后表达对健康生活的期待。全程使用一般现在时，语句通顺，确保字数达标。
【答案】
My Living Habits
I have lots of living habits, some are healthy but others are not.
My healthy habits are great: I eat vegetables and fruit every day, and I play sports with my classmates three to four times a week after class. But I also have bad habits: I sometimes stay up late to play phone games on weekends, and I often eat too much junk food as snacks.
To make my life better, I will make a reasonable daily plan to stop staying up late, and I will eat less junk food and do more exercise. I think my life will become much healthier soon.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、生活习惯话题、一般现在时
【点评】
本文结构清晰，紧扣写作要点，内容具体充实，语言通顺自然，准确传达了自身习惯及改进计划，适当发挥合理，符合初中英语书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
