四、写作。
以 Changes in my school 为题向大家介绍一下你们学校六年间的变化。要求:
条理清楚,用词得当,不少于五句话。

以 Changes in my school 为题向大家介绍一下你们学校六年间的变化。要求:
条理清楚,用词得当,不少于五句话。
答案
Changes in my school
My school has changed a lot in the past six years. There was only a small library before, but now we have a big and bright library with many new books. The playground was very small, but now it is much bigger and we can play basketball there after class. There was no dining hall before, so we had to eat outside. Now we have a clean and nice dining hall. I love my school very much and I hope it will be better and better.
My school has changed a lot in the past six years. There was only a small library before, but now we have a big and bright library with many new books. The playground was very small, but now it is much bigger and we can play basketball there after class. There was no dining hall before, so we had to eat outside. Now we have a clean and nice dining hall. I love my school very much and I hope it will be better and better.
解析
【分析】本题是英语写作题,要求以“Changes in my school”为题介绍学校六年间的变化,需条理清晰、用词得当且不少于五句话。解题时需先选取学校变化的典型方面(如图书馆、操场、食堂等),分别描述过去的状态和现在的改变,注意运用一般过去时描述过去,一般现在时描述现在,最后表达对学校的情感,确保语句通顺、符合要求。
【解析】围绕“学校变化”这一主题,选取图书馆、操场、食堂三个场景,对比过去与现在的不同:过去图书馆小,现在大且明亮;过去操场小,现在更大可开展活动;过去无食堂,现在有干净的食堂,最后表达对学校的喜爱与期望,组织成不少于五句话的短文,用词准确、条理清晰。
【答案】Changes in my school
My school has changed a lot in the past six years. There was only a small library before, but now we have a big and bright library with many new books. The playground was very small, but now it is much bigger and we can play basketball there after class. There was no dining hall before, so we had to eat outside. Now we have a clean and nice dining hall. I love my school very much and I hope it will be better and better.
【知识点】英语写作、一般过去时、一般现在时
【点评】本题考查学生的英语写作能力,要求学生结合实际观察学校的变化,运用正确时态进行对比描述,是基础的英语写作练习,能帮助学生提升语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】围绕“学校变化”这一主题,选取图书馆、操场、食堂三个场景,对比过去与现在的不同:过去图书馆小,现在大且明亮;过去操场小,现在更大可开展活动;过去无食堂,现在有干净的食堂,最后表达对学校的喜爱与期望,组织成不少于五句话的短文,用词准确、条理清晰。
【答案】Changes in my school
My school has changed a lot in the past six years. There was only a small library before, but now we have a big and bright library with many new books. The playground was very small, but now it is much bigger and we can play basketball there after class. There was no dining hall before, so we had to eat outside. Now we have a clean and nice dining hall. I love my school very much and I hope it will be better and better.
【知识点】英语写作、一般过去时、一般现在时
【点评】本题考查学生的英语写作能力,要求学生结合实际观察学校的变化,运用正确时态进行对比描述,是基础的英语写作练习,能帮助学生提升语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】0.3
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