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假如某中学生英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动，请你根据下表提示的要点，以“Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇短文，简述社会、家庭、学校及个人生活中的变化，展望未来生活及如何为之努力。
要求：
1. 内容包含所给的要点，可以适当发挥。
2. 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Changes in Our Life
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
要求：
1. 内容包含所给的要点，可以适当发挥。
2. 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Changes in Our Life
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
答案
参考范文:
Changes in Our Life
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
In my hometown, the most important change is that many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it's easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In school, students sit in the new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also through computers.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder so that I can realize my dream.
Changes in Our Life
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
In my hometown, the most important change is that many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it's easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In school, students sit in the new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also through computers.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder so that I can realize my dream.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以“Changes in Our Life”为题，结合表格要点完成短文。解题思路：首先承接已给开头，先描述家乡的变化，对应表格中“小路→宽路”及交通方式的改变；接着过渡到学校的变化，对应“旧校舍→新教学楼”和学习方式的变化；最后结合个人愿望，展望未来生活并说明实现愿望的努力方向，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】
先衔接开头，依次展开内容：1. 家乡部分：说明小路变为宽路，交通方式从步行、骑车变为乘坐公交或开小汽车，体现出行更便捷；2. 学校部分：描述旧校舍换成新教学楼，学习方式从仅通过书本学习拓展到借助电脑学习；3. 个人愿望部分：展望未来更好的生活，表明自己会努力学习来实现愿望，整体结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Changes in Our Life
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
In my hometown, the most important change is that many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it's easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In school, students sit in the new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also through computers.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder so that I can realize my dream.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点整合
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目给出的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁通顺，符合征文的要求，是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以“Changes in Our Life”为题，结合表格要点完成短文。解题思路：首先承接已给开头，先描述家乡的变化，对应表格中“小路→宽路”及交通方式的改变；接着过渡到学校的变化，对应“旧校舍→新教学楼”和学习方式的变化；最后结合个人愿望，展望未来生活并说明实现愿望的努力方向，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】
先衔接开头，依次展开内容：1. 家乡部分：说明小路变为宽路，交通方式从步行、骑车变为乘坐公交或开小汽车，体现出行更便捷；2. 学校部分：描述旧校舍换成新教学楼，学习方式从仅通过书本学习拓展到借助电脑学习；3. 个人愿望部分：展望未来更好的生活，表明自己会努力学习来实现愿望，整体结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Changes in Our Life
With the rapid development of China's economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
In my hometown, the most important change is that many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it's easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In school, students sit in the new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also through computers.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder so that I can realize my dream.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点整合
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目给出的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁通顺，符合征文的要求，是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
