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七、书面表达(满分35分)
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
66. 担任志愿者是很有意义的。
67. 我知道怎样去支持这些需要帮助的人。
68. 你真粗心,在考试中犯了这么多的错误。
69. 这位科学家永不放弃的精神感动了许多人。
70. 对我来说,最重要的事情不是获胜而是参与。
A)句子翻译(每小题2分,满分10分)
66. 担任志愿者是很有意义的。
It's meaningful to work as a volunteer.
67. 我知道怎样去支持这些需要帮助的人。
I know how to support these people in need.
68. 你真粗心,在考试中犯了这么多的错误。
It's so careless of you to make so many mistakes in the exam.
69. 这位科学家永不放弃的精神感动了许多人。
The scientist's spirit of never giving up has moved/touched many people.
70. 对我来说,最重要的事情不是获胜而是参与。
To me, the most important thing is not to win but to take part.
答案
七、书面表达
A)句子翻译
66. It's meaningful to work as a volunteer.
67. I know how to support these people in need.
68. It's so careless of you to make so many mistakes in the exam.
69. The scientist's spirit of never giving up has moved/touched
many people.
70. To me, the most important thing is not to win but to take part.
A)句子翻译
66. It's meaningful to work as a volunteer.
67. I know how to support these people in need.
68. It's so careless of you to make so many mistakes in the exam.
69. The scientist's spirit of never giving up has moved/touched
many people.
70. To me, the most important thing is not to win but to take part.
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英句子翻译题时，首先要梳理句子核心逻辑，优先匹配英语对应的常用固定句型，避免逐字直译产出中式英语：1. 先判断句子是否符合it作形式主语的高频句型，理清形容词修饰的是事物属性还是人的特质，选择对应的介词搭配；2. 遇到“怎样/何时/何地做某事”的表达，优先使用“疑问词+不定式”的简化结构；3. 遇到定语修饰名词的情况，短定语放名词前，介词短语类的长定语要放在被修饰名词后作后置定语；4. 遇到“不是…而是…”这类并列结构，要保证前后连接的成分形式一致，符合平行原则，最后通读检查语法是否通顺、搭配是否正确即可。
【解析】
66. 本句符合It作形式主语、不定式作真正主语的基础句型It's + 形容词 + to do sth，其中“有意义的”译为meaningful，“担任志愿者”译为固定搭配work as a volunteer，组合后得到正确译文。
67. 主句为I know，后面接“疑问词how + 不定式”结构作宾语，“需要帮助的”用介词短语in need作后置定语修饰people，“支持”译为support，组合后得到正确译文。
68. 本句中careless是描述人的性格特质的形容词，对应固定句型It's + 描述人特质的形容词 + of sb to do sth，“犯这么多错误”译为make so many mistakes，“在考试中”译为in the exam，组合后得到正确译文。
69. 主语部分“这位科学家永不放弃的精神”用名词所有格The scientist's spirit，搭配后置定语of never giving up修饰spirit，谓语“感动”可译为moved/touched，用现在完成时体现对现在的影响，组合后得到正确译文。
70. 本句使用not...but...“不是…而是…”的并列结构，前后要保持形式一致，都用不定式结构保证平行，“参与”译为take part，“最重要的事情”译为the most important thing，组合后得到正确译文。
【答案】
66. It's meaningful to work as a volunteer.
67. I know how to support these people in need.
68. It's so careless of you to make so many mistakes in the exam.
69. The scientist's spirit of never giving up has moved/touched many people.
70. To me, the most important thing is not to win but to take part.
【知识点】
it作形式主语句型
常用固定搭配
平行结构用法
【点评】
这组翻译题都是初中英语阶段的核心高频考点，覆盖了不同场景的常用基础句型，没有偏怪表达，同学们翻译时要注意区分it作形式主语时of和for的不同适用场景，避免出现结构不平行、定语位置错误的问题，平时多积累课本中的核心短语和句型，就能轻松完成这类翻译题。
【难度系数】
0.7
做这类汉译英句子翻译题时，首先要梳理句子核心逻辑，优先匹配英语对应的常用固定句型，避免逐字直译产出中式英语：1. 先判断句子是否符合it作形式主语的高频句型，理清形容词修饰的是事物属性还是人的特质，选择对应的介词搭配；2. 遇到“怎样/何时/何地做某事”的表达，优先使用“疑问词+不定式”的简化结构；3. 遇到定语修饰名词的情况，短定语放名词前，介词短语类的长定语要放在被修饰名词后作后置定语；4. 遇到“不是…而是…”这类并列结构，要保证前后连接的成分形式一致，符合平行原则，最后通读检查语法是否通顺、搭配是否正确即可。
【解析】
66. 本句符合It作形式主语、不定式作真正主语的基础句型It's + 形容词 + to do sth，其中“有意义的”译为meaningful，“担任志愿者”译为固定搭配work as a volunteer，组合后得到正确译文。
67. 主句为I know，后面接“疑问词how + 不定式”结构作宾语，“需要帮助的”用介词短语in need作后置定语修饰people，“支持”译为support，组合后得到正确译文。
68. 本句中careless是描述人的性格特质的形容词，对应固定句型It's + 描述人特质的形容词 + of sb to do sth，“犯这么多错误”译为make so many mistakes，“在考试中”译为in the exam，组合后得到正确译文。
69. 主语部分“这位科学家永不放弃的精神”用名词所有格The scientist's spirit，搭配后置定语of never giving up修饰spirit，谓语“感动”可译为moved/touched，用现在完成时体现对现在的影响，组合后得到正确译文。
70. 本句使用not...but...“不是…而是…”的并列结构，前后要保持形式一致，都用不定式结构保证平行，“参与”译为take part，“最重要的事情”译为the most important thing，组合后得到正确译文。
【答案】
66. It's meaningful to work as a volunteer.
67. I know how to support these people in need.
68. It's so careless of you to make so many mistakes in the exam.
69. The scientist's spirit of never giving up has moved/touched many people.
70. To me, the most important thing is not to win but to take part.
【知识点】
it作形式主语句型
常用固定搭配
平行结构用法
【点评】
这组翻译题都是初中英语阶段的核心高频考点，覆盖了不同场景的常用基础句型，没有偏怪表达，同学们翻译时要注意区分it作形式主语时of和for的不同适用场景，避免出现结构不平行、定语位置错误的问题，平时多积累课本中的核心短语和句型，就能轻松完成这类翻译题。
【难度系数】
0.7
B)写作(满分25分)
假如你是李华,你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆,现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点,用英语写一封自荐信。
(1)你的优势(advantages):热爱阅读,乐于助人,做事细心;
(2)工作设想:鼓励居民多读书,每周推荐一本好书,……;
(3)志愿工作的意义:……从对他人和对自己两方面进行阐述。
注意:(1)100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
(2)可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Sir/Madam.
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆,现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点,用英语写一封自荐信。
(1)你的优势(advantages):热爱阅读,乐于助人,做事细心;
(2)工作设想:鼓励居民多读书,每周推荐一本好书,……;
(3)志愿工作的意义:……从对他人和对自己两方面进行阐述。
注意:(1)100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
(2)可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Sir/Madam.
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community.
I have some advantages for this volunteer work. I love reading and I am always willing to help others. I am also careful and responsible in my work.
If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to do the following things. I will organize reading activities to encourage residents to read more books. I will recommend a good book every week to get them interested in reading. I also plan to set up a reading corner where people can share their reading experiences.
I believe that doing voluntary work is very meaningful. It can not only help others improve their reading skills but also enrich my own life.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
B)写作
【审题指导】
本文是一封自荐信,要求学生介绍自己的优势和展望,所以时态为
一般现在时和一般将来时,以第一人称为主。写作要求较多,注意
不要遗漏信息。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 介绍自己的优势;
第二步 介绍自己的工作设想;
第三步 介绍志愿工作的意义(2个角度)。
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself to be
the volunteer of the library in our community.
I have some advantages for this volunteer work. I love reading
and I am always willing to help others. I am also careful and
responsible in my work.
If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to
do the following things. I will organize reading activities to
encourage residents to read more books. I will recommend a good
book every week to get them interested in reading. I also plan to
set up a reading corner where people can share their reading
experiences.
I believe that doing voluntary work is very meaningful. It can
not only help others improve their reading skills but also enrich my
own life.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【审题指导】
本文是一封自荐信,要求学生介绍自己的优势和展望,所以时态为
一般现在时和一般将来时,以第一人称为主。写作要求较多,注意
不要遗漏信息。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 介绍自己的优势;
第二步 介绍自己的工作设想;
第三步 介绍志愿工作的意义(2个角度)。
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself to be
the volunteer of the library in our community.
I have some advantages for this volunteer work. I love reading
and I am always willing to help others. I am also careful and
responsible in my work.
If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to
do the following things. I will organize reading activities to
encourage residents to read more books. I will recommend a good
book every week to get them interested in reading. I also plan to
set up a reading corner where people can share their reading
experiences.
I believe that doing voluntary work is very meaningful. It can
not only help others improve their reading skills but also enrich my
own life.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类英语自荐信写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：第一，文体是正式的志愿申请书信，人称统一用第一人称，介绍自身情况用一般现在时，阐述后续工作安排用一般将来时；第二，要逐一对应题干给出的三个核心要点，不能遗漏：首先承接已给的开头，先清晰说明自身的三个优势：热爱阅读、乐于助人、做事细心，可适当补充合理的修饰词让表述更饱满；接着阐述工作设想，除了题干要求的鼓励居民阅读、每周推荐一本好书之外，可以适当增加符合社区图书馆场景的合理拓展内容，比如设置阅读分享角等，让内容更充实；最后从对他人、对自己两个角度阐述志愿工作的意义，对他人来说可以助力营造社区阅读氛围，对自己来说可以丰富自身经历、锻炼能力，最后衔接已给的结尾即可，全程注意控制总词数在100左右，不要出现真实人名校名地名。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成：
步骤1：承接开头介绍自身优势：直接点明自己匹配志愿工作的三个特质，把热爱阅读、乐于助人、做事细心的要点自然融入，补充“工作认真负责”的细节让优势更有说服力。
步骤2：阐述工作设想：先说明如果入选会尽全力做好工作，依次写出组织阅读活动鼓励居民多读书、每周推荐一本好书、增设阅读分享角供大家交流阅读体验的内容，完全覆盖题干要求同时适当拓展，逻辑连贯。
步骤3：说明志愿工作意义：从两个维度展开，对他人而言能帮助居民提升阅读体验、营造良好社区阅读氛围，对自己而言能在服务他人的同时丰富自身生活、锻炼能力，符合题干双向阐述的要求。
最后衔接题干已给出的结尾句，整体行文流畅，词数符合要求，没有出现违规信息。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community.
I have some advantages for this volunteer work. I love reading and I am always willing to help others. I am also careful and responsible in my work.
If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to do the following things. I will organize reading activities to encourage residents to read more books. I will recommend a good book every week to get them interested in reading. I also plan to set up a reading corner where people can share their reading experiences.
I believe that doing voluntary work is very meaningful. It can not only help others improve their reading skills but also enrich my own life.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，自荐信格式，一般将来时运用
【点评】
本题属于贴近生活实际的提纲类应用文写作，题干给出的要点清晰明确，学生只要做到不遗漏核心信息，适当补充符合场景的合理细节，保证行文逻辑通顺、语气礼貌正式，就能拿到不错的分数，同时也能锻炼学生用英语解决实际生活中申请类事务的表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇提纲类英语自荐信写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：第一，文体是正式的志愿申请书信，人称统一用第一人称，介绍自身情况用一般现在时，阐述后续工作安排用一般将来时；第二，要逐一对应题干给出的三个核心要点，不能遗漏：首先承接已给的开头，先清晰说明自身的三个优势：热爱阅读、乐于助人、做事细心，可适当补充合理的修饰词让表述更饱满；接着阐述工作设想，除了题干要求的鼓励居民阅读、每周推荐一本好书之外，可以适当增加符合社区图书馆场景的合理拓展内容，比如设置阅读分享角等，让内容更充实；最后从对他人、对自己两个角度阐述志愿工作的意义，对他人来说可以助力营造社区阅读氛围，对自己来说可以丰富自身经历、锻炼能力，最后衔接已给的结尾即可，全程注意控制总词数在100左右，不要出现真实人名校名地名。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成：
步骤1：承接开头介绍自身优势：直接点明自己匹配志愿工作的三个特质，把热爱阅读、乐于助人、做事细心的要点自然融入，补充“工作认真负责”的细节让优势更有说服力。
步骤2：阐述工作设想：先说明如果入选会尽全力做好工作，依次写出组织阅读活动鼓励居民多读书、每周推荐一本好书、增设阅读分享角供大家交流阅读体验的内容，完全覆盖题干要求同时适当拓展，逻辑连贯。
步骤3：说明志愿工作意义：从两个维度展开，对他人而言能帮助居民提升阅读体验、营造良好社区阅读氛围，对自己而言能在服务他人的同时丰富自身生活、锻炼能力，符合题干双向阐述的要求。
最后衔接题干已给出的结尾句，整体行文流畅，词数符合要求，没有出现违规信息。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to recommend myself to be the volunteer of the library in our community.
I have some advantages for this volunteer work. I love reading and I am always willing to help others. I am also careful and responsible in my work.
If I am lucky enough to be a volunteer, I will try my best to do the following things. I will organize reading activities to encourage residents to read more books. I will recommend a good book every week to get them interested in reading. I also plan to set up a reading corner where people can share their reading experiences.
I believe that doing voluntary work is very meaningful. It can not only help others improve their reading skills but also enrich my own life.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，自荐信格式，一般将来时运用
【点评】
本题属于贴近生活实际的提纲类应用文写作，题干给出的要点清晰明确，学生只要做到不遗漏核心信息，适当补充符合场景的合理细节，保证行文逻辑通顺、语气礼貌正式，就能拿到不错的分数，同时也能锻炼学生用英语解决实际生活中申请类事务的表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
