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假如你是李华,你要为家乡杭州写一则广告,邀请全球各地的游客来观赏钱塘江大潮。请根据下面表格中的要点完成写作。
注意:1.内容要涵盖以上所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯通顺;
2. 词数100左右。
假如你是李华,你要为家乡杭州写一则广告,邀请全球各地的游客来观赏钱塘江大潮。请根据下面表格中的要点完成写作。
注意:1.内容要涵盖以上所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯通顺;
2. 词数100左右。
答案
One possible version:
The Qiantang River Tidal Bore:
Nature's Amazing Show!
Have you ever seen a river flow backwards? Have
you heard a wave roar? Come to the Qiantang River and
see this incredible natural wonder with your own eyes!
The famous wave can be up to 3 metres high, which
is taller than a single-story building. And it can travel 20
to 25 km per hour, almost as fast as you can ride a bike!
If you want to see the most amazing tide, come
around the Mid-autumn festival when the tide is the
strongest. You can see Line Tide or Crossing Tide, and
there is also a fun Tidal Bore Watching Festival!
However, the tidal bore is very powerful. So
remember to stay on the seawall or in designated safe
areas and listen to the announcements and follow the
guides.
Come and see the amazing tidal bore! I promise you
won't regret it!
The Qiantang River Tidal Bore:
Nature's Amazing Show!
Have you ever seen a river flow backwards? Have
you heard a wave roar? Come to the Qiantang River and
see this incredible natural wonder with your own eyes!
The famous wave can be up to 3 metres high, which
is taller than a single-story building. And it can travel 20
to 25 km per hour, almost as fast as you can ride a bike!
If you want to see the most amazing tide, come
around the Mid-autumn festival when the tide is the
strongest. You can see Line Tide or Crossing Tide, and
there is also a fun Tidal Bore Watching Festival!
However, the tidal bore is very powerful. So
remember to stay on the seawall or in designated safe
areas and listen to the announcements and follow the
guides.
Come and see the amazing tidal bore! I promise you
won't regret it!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇面向全球游客的旅游宣传邀请类应用文，解题可以按三步梳理思路：1. 先明确写作要求：文体是宣传广告，语气要热情有吸引力，时态以一般现在时为主，必须完整覆盖表格给出的全部要点，不能遗漏信息。2. 搭建行文逻辑：开头用趣味设问勾起读者对钱塘江大潮的好奇心，快速引入主题；中间依次串联大潮的位置、高度、行进速度等基础特征，再介绍最佳观赏时间和两大特色潮景，把零散的表格信息转化为通顺的游览介绍；最后自然补充安全提示，收尾发出诚挚邀约。3. 适当加入少量符合现实的合理拓展，比如把潮速类比为日常骑行速度，补充当地观潮节的相关内容，避免生硬罗列要点，同时控制总词数符合题目要求，保证行文流畅自然。
【解析】
写作可按以下规范步骤完成：
1. 开篇引入：用两个设问句快速抓住读者注意力，直接点明钱塘江大潮这一罕见自然奇观，发出初步游览邀请。
2. 基础信息介绍：说明大潮地处中国浙江省钱塘江，潮高区间为1.5至3米，行进速度可达每小时20到25公里，用生活化的类比让读者对大潮的规模和速度形成直观感知。
3. 观赏指南说明：点明中秋前后是观赏大潮的最佳时段，此时可以欣赏到极具特色的一线潮、交叉潮两大知名景观，还可以补充当地配套的观潮节庆活动，丰富内容层次。
4. 安全提示补充：自然引出观潮的两条安全规则，提醒游客务必留在海塘或指定安全区域，听从广播通知和向导指引，保障游览安全。
5. 收尾检查：再次发出热情邀约，通读全文核对所有表格要点无遗漏，调整语句流畅度，控制词数符合要求。
参考范文：
The Qiantang River Tidal Bore:
Nature's Amazing Show!
Have you ever seen a river flow backwards? Have you heard a wave roar? Come to the Qiantang River and see this incredible natural wonder with your own eyes!
The famous wave can be up to 3 metres high, which is taller than a single-story building. And it can travel 20 to 25 km per hour, almost as fast as you can ride a bike!
If you want to see the most amazing tide, come around the Mid-autumn festival when the tide is the strongest. You can see Line Tide or Crossing Tide, and there is also a fun Tidal Bore Watching Festival!
However, the tidal bore is very powerful. So remember to stay on the seawall or in designated safe areas and listen to the announcements and follow the guides.
Come and see the amazing tidal bore! I promise you won't regret it!
【答案】
One possible version:
The Qiantang River Tidal Bore:
Nature's Amazing Show!
Have you ever seen a river flow backwards? Have you heard a wave roar? Come to the Qiantang River and see this incredible natural wonder with your own eyes!
The famous wave can be up to 3 metres high, which is taller than a single-story building. And it can travel 20 to 25 km per hour, almost as fast as you can ride a bike!
If you want to see the most amazing tide, come around the Mid-autumn festival when the tide is the strongest. You can see Line Tide or Crossing Tide, and there is also a fun Tidal Bore Watching Festival!
However, the tidal bore is very powerful. So remember to stay on the seawall or in designated safe areas and listen to the announcements and follow the guides.
Come and see the amazing tidal bore! I promise you won't regret it!
【知识点】
应用文写作，信息点整合，语篇连贯
【点评】
本文作为旅游宣传广告，语气热情感染力强，开篇的设问设计能快速抓住读者注意力，表格给出的所有要点全部完整覆盖没有遗漏。作者通过生活化的类比让抽象的潮高、潮速数据变得通俗易懂，补充的观潮节细节也让内容更真实生动，安全提示部分过渡自然不生硬，整体行文流畅，完全符合题目的写作要求，是一篇质量很高的宣传邀请类短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇面向全球游客的旅游宣传邀请类应用文，解题可以按三步梳理思路：1. 先明确写作要求：文体是宣传广告，语气要热情有吸引力，时态以一般现在时为主，必须完整覆盖表格给出的全部要点，不能遗漏信息。2. 搭建行文逻辑：开头用趣味设问勾起读者对钱塘江大潮的好奇心，快速引入主题；中间依次串联大潮的位置、高度、行进速度等基础特征，再介绍最佳观赏时间和两大特色潮景，把零散的表格信息转化为通顺的游览介绍；最后自然补充安全提示，收尾发出诚挚邀约。3. 适当加入少量符合现实的合理拓展，比如把潮速类比为日常骑行速度，补充当地观潮节的相关内容，避免生硬罗列要点，同时控制总词数符合题目要求，保证行文流畅自然。
【解析】
写作可按以下规范步骤完成：
1. 开篇引入：用两个设问句快速抓住读者注意力，直接点明钱塘江大潮这一罕见自然奇观，发出初步游览邀请。
2. 基础信息介绍：说明大潮地处中国浙江省钱塘江，潮高区间为1.5至3米，行进速度可达每小时20到25公里，用生活化的类比让读者对大潮的规模和速度形成直观感知。
3. 观赏指南说明：点明中秋前后是观赏大潮的最佳时段，此时可以欣赏到极具特色的一线潮、交叉潮两大知名景观，还可以补充当地配套的观潮节庆活动，丰富内容层次。
4. 安全提示补充：自然引出观潮的两条安全规则，提醒游客务必留在海塘或指定安全区域，听从广播通知和向导指引，保障游览安全。
5. 收尾检查：再次发出热情邀约，通读全文核对所有表格要点无遗漏，调整语句流畅度，控制词数符合要求。
参考范文：
The Qiantang River Tidal Bore:
Nature's Amazing Show!
Have you ever seen a river flow backwards? Have you heard a wave roar? Come to the Qiantang River and see this incredible natural wonder with your own eyes!
The famous wave can be up to 3 metres high, which is taller than a single-story building. And it can travel 20 to 25 km per hour, almost as fast as you can ride a bike!
If you want to see the most amazing tide, come around the Mid-autumn festival when the tide is the strongest. You can see Line Tide or Crossing Tide, and there is also a fun Tidal Bore Watching Festival!
However, the tidal bore is very powerful. So remember to stay on the seawall or in designated safe areas and listen to the announcements and follow the guides.
Come and see the amazing tidal bore! I promise you won't regret it!
【答案】
One possible version:
The Qiantang River Tidal Bore:
Nature's Amazing Show!
Have you ever seen a river flow backwards? Have you heard a wave roar? Come to the Qiantang River and see this incredible natural wonder with your own eyes!
The famous wave can be up to 3 metres high, which is taller than a single-story building. And it can travel 20 to 25 km per hour, almost as fast as you can ride a bike!
If you want to see the most amazing tide, come around the Mid-autumn festival when the tide is the strongest. You can see Line Tide or Crossing Tide, and there is also a fun Tidal Bore Watching Festival!
However, the tidal bore is very powerful. So remember to stay on the seawall or in designated safe areas and listen to the announcements and follow the guides.
Come and see the amazing tidal bore! I promise you won't regret it!
【知识点】
应用文写作，信息点整合，语篇连贯
【点评】
本文作为旅游宣传广告，语气热情感染力强，开篇的设问设计能快速抓住读者注意力，表格给出的所有要点全部完整覆盖没有遗漏。作者通过生活化的类比让抽象的潮高、潮速数据变得通俗易懂，补充的观潮节细节也让内容更真实生动，安全提示部分过渡自然不生硬，整体行文流畅，完全符合题目的写作要求，是一篇质量很高的宣传邀请类短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
