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七、书面表达(满分 30 分)
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分,满分 10 分)
71. 你必须提醒你的乘客在开车前系好安全带。
72. 你真粗心,在考试中犯了这么多错误。
73. 当看到他人身处困境时,我们伸出援助之手是必要的。
74. 幸运的是,小伟最终接受了手术,因为我们筹集到了足够的钱。
75. 在过去的二十年里,他通过艰苦奋斗取得了巨大成功。
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分,满分 10 分)
71. 你必须提醒你的乘客在开车前系好安全带。
72. 你真粗心,在考试中犯了这么多错误。
73. 当看到他人身处困境时,我们伸出援助之手是必要的。
74. 幸运的是,小伟最终接受了手术,因为我们筹集到了足够的钱。
75. 在过去的二十年里,他通过艰苦奋斗取得了巨大成功。
答案
A. 句子翻译
71. You have to remind your passengers to put their seat belts on before you drive.
72. It is really careless of you to make so many mistakes in the exam.
73. It is necessary for us to give a helping hand when seeing others in need.
74. Luckily, Xiao Wei finally received the operation because we raised enough money.
75. In the past twenty years, he has achieved great success through hard work.
71. You have to remind your passengers to put their seat belts on before you drive.
72. It is really careless of you to make so many mistakes in the exam.
73. It is necessary for us to give a helping hand when seeing others in need.
74. Luckily, Xiao Wei finally received the operation because we raised enough money.
75. In the past twenty years, he has achieved great success through hard work.
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英题目时，首先要梳理中文句子的核心逻辑，优先匹配英语中对应的常用固定句型，避免逐字直译产出中式英语：第一步先标记句子里的核心动词短语，比如“提醒某人做某事”“伸出援手”这类固定表达；第二步判断句子对应的时态，看到标志性时间状语立刻对应正确的时态规则；第三步如果遇到It作形式主语的句型，要区分形容词是描述人的品质还是描述事件属性，选择正确的介词of/for；最后写完后通读检查语法、主谓、介词搭配是否符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
71. 核心搭配：have to 必须，remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事，put their seat belts on 系好安全带，before you drive 开车前，组合后得到正确译句。
72. 本题套用固定句型It is + adj. + of sb. to do sth.（形容词描述人的性格品质），careless 粗心的，make so many mistakes 犯这么多错误，in the exam 在考试中，组合后得到正确译句。
73. 本题套用固定句型It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.（形容词描述事件的属性），necessary 必要的，give a helping hand 伸出援助之手，others in need 身处困境的人，状语从句可省略主语和be动词简化为when seeing，组合后得到正确译句。
74. 副词Luckily作状语放句首，核心搭配：receive the operation 接受手术，raise enough money 筹集到足够的钱，全句描述过去发生的事件，使用一般过去时，组合后得到正确译句。
75. 时间状语In the past twenty years是现在完成时的标志性提示，核心搭配：achieve great success 取得巨大成功，through hard work 通过艰苦奋斗，主语为第三人称单数he，现在完成时结构用has+过去分词，组合后得到正确译句。
【答案】
71. You have to remind your passengers to put their seat belts on before you drive.
72. It is really careless of you to make so many mistakes in the exam.
73. It is necessary for us to give a helping hand when seeing others in need.
74. Luckily, Xiao Wei finally received the operation because we raised enough money.
75. In the past twenty years, he has achieved great success through hard work.
【知识点】
汉译英固定句型，动词短语搭配，时态判断
【点评】
本题覆盖了初中英语核心的翻译考点，既考察了It形式主语的高频必考句型，也涉及不同场景下的常用固定短语，同时隐含了时态辨析的考察点，整体没有偏难怪的表达，学生只要平时积累课内核心短语和句型，注意区分of/for在形式主语句型中的差异，留意时间状语对应的时态规则，就可以拿到满分，要注意避免逐字翻译产出不符合英语习惯的中式表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
做这类汉译英题目时，首先要梳理中文句子的核心逻辑，优先匹配英语中对应的常用固定句型，避免逐字直译产出中式英语：第一步先标记句子里的核心动词短语，比如“提醒某人做某事”“伸出援手”这类固定表达；第二步判断句子对应的时态，看到标志性时间状语立刻对应正确的时态规则；第三步如果遇到It作形式主语的句型，要区分形容词是描述人的品质还是描述事件属性，选择正确的介词of/for；最后写完后通读检查语法、主谓、介词搭配是否符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
71. 核心搭配：have to 必须，remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事，put their seat belts on 系好安全带，before you drive 开车前，组合后得到正确译句。
72. 本题套用固定句型It is + adj. + of sb. to do sth.（形容词描述人的性格品质），careless 粗心的，make so many mistakes 犯这么多错误，in the exam 在考试中，组合后得到正确译句。
73. 本题套用固定句型It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.（形容词描述事件的属性），necessary 必要的，give a helping hand 伸出援助之手，others in need 身处困境的人，状语从句可省略主语和be动词简化为when seeing，组合后得到正确译句。
74. 副词Luckily作状语放句首，核心搭配：receive the operation 接受手术，raise enough money 筹集到足够的钱，全句描述过去发生的事件，使用一般过去时，组合后得到正确译句。
75. 时间状语In the past twenty years是现在完成时的标志性提示，核心搭配：achieve great success 取得巨大成功，through hard work 通过艰苦奋斗，主语为第三人称单数he，现在完成时结构用has+过去分词，组合后得到正确译句。
【答案】
71. You have to remind your passengers to put their seat belts on before you drive.
72. It is really careless of you to make so many mistakes in the exam.
73. It is necessary for us to give a helping hand when seeing others in need.
74. Luckily, Xiao Wei finally received the operation because we raised enough money.
75. In the past twenty years, he has achieved great success through hard work.
【知识点】
汉译英固定句型，动词短语搭配，时态判断
【点评】
本题覆盖了初中英语核心的翻译考点，既考察了It形式主语的高频必考句型，也涉及不同场景下的常用固定短语，同时隐含了时态辨析的考察点，整体没有偏难怪的表达，学生只要平时积累课内核心短语和句型，注意区分of/for在形式主语句型中的差异，留意时间状语对应的时态规则，就可以拿到满分，要注意避免逐字翻译产出不符合英语习惯的中式表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
B. 写作(满分 20 分)
假如你是李华,你将参加学校英文报以“You Are Happy! I Am Happy!”为题的征文活动,请你根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文来描述你是如何通过做志愿者来愉悦自己的。提示如下:
1. What are your interests and hobbies? 2. Which volunteer job(s) do you usually do? 3. How do you feel?
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息; 词数 100 左右; 标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
You Are Happy! I Am Happy!
I think volunteering my time to help others will make me happy.
假如你是李华,你将参加学校英文报以“You Are Happy! I Am Happy!”为题的征文活动,请你根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文来描述你是如何通过做志愿者来愉悦自己的。提示如下:
1. What are your interests and hobbies? 2. Which volunteer job(s) do you usually do? 3. How do you feel?
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息; 词数 100 左右; 标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
You Are Happy! I Am Happy!
I think volunteering my time to help others will make me happy.
答案
B. 写作
You Are Happy! I Am Happy!
I think volunteering my time to help others will make me happy. I'm interested in computers and teaching, so I usually volunteer as a computer teacher for people who need help. I've taught many old people how to write emails and use word processing software.
Every time I help the old people learn more about computers, I really feel excited. The old people feel happy and I am also happy because I think I do help them. Maybe this is what we call “You Are Happy! I Am Happy!”, which means “double win”.
I think being a volunteer is of great value for both others and ourselves.
You Are Happy! I Am Happy!
I think volunteering my time to help others will make me happy. I'm interested in computers and teaching, so I usually volunteer as a computer teacher for people who need help. I've taught many old people how to write emails and use word processing software.
Every time I help the old people learn more about computers, I really feel excited. The old people feel happy and I am also happy because I think I do help them. Maybe this is what we call “You Are Happy! I Am Happy!”, which means “double win”.
I think being a volunteer is of great value for both others and ourselves.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要先明确核心要求：围绕"助人即悦己"的志愿主题，完整覆盖题干给出的三个提示要点，同时符合征文的语境要求。第一步先梳理逻辑：首先承接题目给出的开头，自然引出自己的兴趣爱好，要注意兴趣爱好需要和后续的志愿工作形成合理关联，避免内容脱节；第二步对应第二个要点，介绍自己常做的志愿工作，补充1-2个具体的服务细节，让内容更真实饱满；第三步对应第三个要点，描述自己做志愿的真实感受，紧扣"You Are Happy! I Am Happy"的主题点出双方都获得快乐的内核，最后用简短的语句升华志愿的意义，同时控制总词数在100左右，注意不要出现个人真实信息即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：本题属于提纲类英语征文写作，使用第一人称叙述，整体以一般现在时为主要时态，描述已完成的志愿经历可搭配现在完成时，需严格覆盖全部3个提示要点，词数控制在100左右。
2. 结构搭建：
① 开篇承接给定开头，先介绍自身的兴趣爱好，顺势引出匹配的志愿岗位，补充具体的服务内容，比如结合对电脑和教学的爱好，说明自己做志愿教老年人使用电脑，列举教写邮件、使用文字处理软件的细节。
② 主体部分描述服务过程中的感受，说明看到老年人学会技能获得快乐的同时，自己也收获了成就感，直接呼应征文主题，点明"你快乐我也快乐"的双赢内核。
③ 结尾简短收尾，点明志愿活动对服务对象和自身都很有价值，完成全文。
3. 表达优化：合理使用be interested in、volunteer as、be of great value等常用短语，保证语句连贯，逻辑通顺，避免出现中式英语错误。
【答案】
You Are Happy! I Am Happy!
I think volunteering my time to help others will make me happy. I'm interested in computers and teaching, so I usually volunteer as a computer teacher for people who need help. I've taught many old people how to write emails and use word processing software.
Every time I help the old people learn more about computers, I really feel excited. The old people feel happy and I am also happy because I think I do help them. Maybe this is what we call "You Are Happy! I Am Happy!", which means "double win".
I think being a volunteer is of great value for both others and ourselves.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
志愿主题表达
要点全覆盖写作
【点评】
本题属于基础类的提示性写作，题干给出的三个要点指向非常清晰，学生只需要将要点自然串联，补充少量贴合生活的细节，最后呼应征文主题即可完成写作，难度较低，写作时要注意避免遗漏要点，不要堆砌复杂长句，保证表意通顺，同时严格遵守要求不泄露个人真实信息，控制好词数即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先要先明确核心要求：围绕"助人即悦己"的志愿主题，完整覆盖题干给出的三个提示要点，同时符合征文的语境要求。第一步先梳理逻辑：首先承接题目给出的开头，自然引出自己的兴趣爱好，要注意兴趣爱好需要和后续的志愿工作形成合理关联，避免内容脱节；第二步对应第二个要点，介绍自己常做的志愿工作，补充1-2个具体的服务细节，让内容更真实饱满；第三步对应第三个要点，描述自己做志愿的真实感受，紧扣"You Are Happy! I Am Happy"的主题点出双方都获得快乐的内核，最后用简短的语句升华志愿的意义，同时控制总词数在100左右，注意不要出现个人真实信息即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：本题属于提纲类英语征文写作，使用第一人称叙述，整体以一般现在时为主要时态，描述已完成的志愿经历可搭配现在完成时，需严格覆盖全部3个提示要点，词数控制在100左右。
2. 结构搭建：
① 开篇承接给定开头，先介绍自身的兴趣爱好，顺势引出匹配的志愿岗位，补充具体的服务内容，比如结合对电脑和教学的爱好，说明自己做志愿教老年人使用电脑，列举教写邮件、使用文字处理软件的细节。
② 主体部分描述服务过程中的感受，说明看到老年人学会技能获得快乐的同时，自己也收获了成就感，直接呼应征文主题，点明"你快乐我也快乐"的双赢内核。
③ 结尾简短收尾，点明志愿活动对服务对象和自身都很有价值，完成全文。
3. 表达优化：合理使用be interested in、volunteer as、be of great value等常用短语，保证语句连贯，逻辑通顺，避免出现中式英语错误。
【答案】
You Are Happy! I Am Happy!
I think volunteering my time to help others will make me happy. I'm interested in computers and teaching, so I usually volunteer as a computer teacher for people who need help. I've taught many old people how to write emails and use word processing software.
Every time I help the old people learn more about computers, I really feel excited. The old people feel happy and I am also happy because I think I do help them. Maybe this is what we call "You Are Happy! I Am Happy!", which means "double win".
I think being a volunteer is of great value for both others and ourselves.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
志愿主题表达
要点全覆盖写作
【点评】
本题属于基础类的提示性写作，题干给出的三个要点指向非常清晰，学生只需要将要点自然串联，补充少量贴合生活的细节，最后呼应征文主题即可完成写作，难度较低，写作时要注意避免遗漏要点，不要堆砌复杂长句，保证表意通顺，同时严格遵守要求不泄露个人真实信息，控制好词数即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
