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九、书面表达(根据横线后的写作素材提示补全句子)。(每小题2.5分,共12.5分)
假设你是 Moonlight Middle School 的一名八年级学生,学校正在举行"畅想未来"的英语征文活动,请根据提示,以"My ideal school life"为题,写一篇短文。
参考词汇: do experiments 做实验
My ideal school life
My ideal school life is colourful and enjoyable.
We won't just sit in classrooms listening to teachers. 1.
2.
假设你是 Moonlight Middle School 的一名八年级学生,学校正在举行"畅想未来"的英语征文活动,请根据提示,以"My ideal school life"为题,写一篇短文。
参考词汇: do experiments 做实验
My ideal school life
My ideal school life is colourful and enjoyable.
We won't just sit in classrooms listening to teachers. 1.
Instead, we'll learn by doing things like doing experiments in science class
(相反,我们将通过做事情来学习,比如在科学课上做实验).2.
There will also be different kinds of DIY activities
(也会有不同种类的 DIY 活动). We can make small crafts or design our own school decorations. 3. What's more, I'll make many friends here
(此外,在这里我会交到很多朋友). 4. We'll study together, help each other solve problems, and share joys in daily life
(我们会一起学习,互相帮助解决问题,分享日常生活中的乐事). 5. This kind of school life will not only help us learn well but also allow us to grow happily
(这种学校生活不仅能帮助我们学好,而且能让我们快乐地成长).答案
1. Instead, we'll learn by doing things like doing experiments in science class
2. There will also be different kinds of DIY activities
3. What's more, I'll make many friends here
4. We'll study together, help each other solve problems, and share joys in daily life
5. This kind of school life will not only help us learn well but also allow us to grow happily
2. There will also be different kinds of DIY activities
3. What's more, I'll make many friends here
4. We'll study together, help each other solve problems, and share joys in daily life
5. This kind of school life will not only help us learn well but also allow us to grow happily
解析
【分析】
这道题是结合英语写作语境的汉译英补全句子题型，解题时首先要明确全文是畅想未来的主题，所有句子统一使用一般将来时，保证时态和前后文一致。接下来逐句对应中文提示：首先找准每个句子的核心表达，比如“相反”“此外”这类衔接词要选符合英语写作习惯的表达，“有某物”要对应there be句型的将来形式，“不仅…而且…”要套用对应的固定并列结构，同时注意介词后接动名词、help sb do等固定搭配，避免逐字硬翻，保证句子通顺符合英语表达逻辑即可。
【解析】
1. 句首用衔接词Instead对应“相反”，呼应前一句“我们不会只坐在教室听老师讲课”的否定语境；“通过做事情学习”用结构learn by doing things，by后接动名词表方式；“比如在科学课上做实验”用like doing experiments in science class，贴合题干给出的参考词汇，整体用一般将来时保持时态统一。
2. 表达“存在有”的含义，选用there be句型的一般将来时结构There will be，“不同种类的”翻译为different kinds of，后接DIY activities，语义通顺。
3. 用递进衔接短语What's more对应“此外”，符合写作的逻辑衔接习惯，“我会交到很多朋友”翻译为I'll make many friends here，时态为一般将来时。
4. 用并列谓语结构串联三个动作：study together（一起学习）、help each other solve problems（互相帮助解决问题，符合help sb do sth的固定搭配）、share joys in daily life（分享日常生活中的乐事），三个并列动词都放在will之后用原形，结构平行工整。
5. 套用固定并列结构not only...but also...对应“不仅…而且…”，主语为This kind of school life，整体用will统领谓语，“帮助我们学好”对应help us learn well，“让我们快乐地成长”对应allow us to grow happily，语义完整。
【答案】
1. Instead, we'll learn by doing things like doing experiments in science class
2. There will also be different kinds of DIY activities
3. What's more, I'll make many friends here
4. We'll study together, help each other solve problems, and share joys in daily life
5. This kind of school life will not only help us learn well but also allow us to grow happily
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时
2. There be句型
3. Not only...but also...结构
【点评】
本题结合写作场景考察基础汉译英能力，难度较低，既引导学生掌握英语征文的常用衔接表达，也强化了时态统一、固定句型搭配的知识点运用，解题时只需注意贴合全文未来语境，避免中式英语直译，就能顺利完成作答。
【难度系数】
0.8
这道题是结合英语写作语境的汉译英补全句子题型，解题时首先要明确全文是畅想未来的主题，所有句子统一使用一般将来时，保证时态和前后文一致。接下来逐句对应中文提示：首先找准每个句子的核心表达，比如“相反”“此外”这类衔接词要选符合英语写作习惯的表达，“有某物”要对应there be句型的将来形式，“不仅…而且…”要套用对应的固定并列结构，同时注意介词后接动名词、help sb do等固定搭配，避免逐字硬翻，保证句子通顺符合英语表达逻辑即可。
【解析】
1. 句首用衔接词Instead对应“相反”，呼应前一句“我们不会只坐在教室听老师讲课”的否定语境；“通过做事情学习”用结构learn by doing things，by后接动名词表方式；“比如在科学课上做实验”用like doing experiments in science class，贴合题干给出的参考词汇，整体用一般将来时保持时态统一。
2. 表达“存在有”的含义，选用there be句型的一般将来时结构There will be，“不同种类的”翻译为different kinds of，后接DIY activities，语义通顺。
3. 用递进衔接短语What's more对应“此外”，符合写作的逻辑衔接习惯，“我会交到很多朋友”翻译为I'll make many friends here，时态为一般将来时。
4. 用并列谓语结构串联三个动作：study together（一起学习）、help each other solve problems（互相帮助解决问题，符合help sb do sth的固定搭配）、share joys in daily life（分享日常生活中的乐事），三个并列动词都放在will之后用原形，结构平行工整。
5. 套用固定并列结构not only...but also...对应“不仅…而且…”，主语为This kind of school life，整体用will统领谓语，“帮助我们学好”对应help us learn well，“让我们快乐地成长”对应allow us to grow happily，语义完整。
【答案】
1. Instead, we'll learn by doing things like doing experiments in science class
2. There will also be different kinds of DIY activities
3. What's more, I'll make many friends here
4. We'll study together, help each other solve problems, and share joys in daily life
5. This kind of school life will not only help us learn well but also allow us to grow happily
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时
2. There be句型
3. Not only...but also...结构
【点评】
本题结合写作场景考察基础汉译英能力，难度较低，既引导学生掌握英语征文的常用衔接表达，也强化了时态统一、固定句型搭配的知识点运用，解题时只需注意贴合全文未来语境，避免中式英语直译，就能顺利完成作答。
【难度系数】
0.8
