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假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据思维导图所给提示给他写封回信,给出你的建议。
提高记忆力
锻炼大脑
做新事情
改变日常习惯
健康
均衡饮食
给大脑足够时间休息
保持放松
不要太焦虑
……（请你补充）
要求:词数 80 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据思维导图所给提示给他写封回信,给出你的建议。
提高记忆力
锻炼大脑
做新事情
改变日常习惯
健康
均衡饮食
给大脑足够时间休息
保持放松
不要太焦虑
……（请你补充）
要求:词数 80 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, living a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, living a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, living a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为建议类英文书信写作，要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Tom回信，围绕“提高记忆力”主题，结合思维导图提示（锻炼大脑、健康生活、放松心态）补充合理建议，词数80左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 保持笔友间亲切自然的语气，遵循书信格式；2. 围绕思维导图的三个核心方向展开建议：锻炼大脑可通过做新事、改变日常习惯激活大脑；健康生活需均衡饮食、保证大脑休息；心态上要放松不焦虑；3. 补充合理建议（如遇问题向亲友倾诉），控制词数，确保语言通顺。
【解析】首先承接开头，分点给出建议：第一，锻炼大脑可通过做新事物、改变日常习惯，让大脑更活跃；第二，健康生活需均衡饮食，给大脑充足休息时间；第三，保持放松不焦虑，避免影响注意力；最后补充遇到问题可向亲友求助。结尾表达希望建议有帮助，期待对方进步，符合书信要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, living a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定话题撰写建议类英文书信的能力，依托思维导图提示降低了写作难度，要求学生语言通顺得体，符合词数与格式要求，是常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头，分点给出建议：第一，锻炼大脑可通过做新事物、改变日常习惯，让大脑更活跃；第二，健康生活需均衡饮食，给大脑充足休息时间；第三，保持放松不焦虑，避免影响注意力；最后补充遇到问题可向亲友求助。结尾表达希望建议有帮助，期待对方进步，符合书信要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it's a good idea to do some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, living a healthy life also makes sense, which requires a balanced diet and enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day. What's more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can't focus on your study the next day. Finally, if you have any trouble, please talk to your friends and teachers anytime you need.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生围绕指定话题撰写建议类英文书信的能力，依托思维导图提示降低了写作难度，要求学生语言通顺得体，符合词数与格式要求，是常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.5
