2026年优学1+1评价与测试九年级英语全一册人教版第96页答案
Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
音乐是世界上最美的语言!请你以“Music makes me
”为题,补全题目并根据写作要求,用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文。
写作要点:1.你为什么喜欢音乐?
2.你喜欢什么种类的音乐?
3.音乐给你带来什么影响?
写作要求:文中请勿出现真实姓名、班级、校名等信息。

答案

One possible version:
Music makes me happy
Music is like a key,which opens the door to the world for me.
I love music because it washes away my worries. When I listen to it,I feel relaxed and peaceful. My favourite types are pop and classical music. Pop songs bring me energy,while classical pieces help me focus on studying. Music influences me deeply. If I feel tired,lively music cheers me up. It teaches me to stay positive. Music is my best friend forever!
Music is very important in our lives. If there is no music,our lives won't be so interesting.

解析

【分析】本题为半命题英语书面表达,解题思路如下:1. 补全题目,选择合适的形容词(如示例的happy);2. 围绕三个写作要点组织内容:①说明喜欢音乐的原因(如音乐能缓解压力、消除烦恼);②明确喜欢的音乐类型(如流行、古典);③阐述音乐对自己的影响(如情绪调节、积极心态的培养);3. 写作时需注意:语言通顺,词数不少于80,不出现真实姓名、班级等信息,结构完整。
【解析】首先补全题目为“Music makes me happy”,开头用比喻句点明音乐的意义;接着说明喜欢音乐的原因(能消除烦恼,带来放松);然后介绍喜欢的音乐类型及各自的作用(流行歌曲提供能量,古典音乐帮助专注学习);最后阐述音乐的影响:疲惫时活泼的音乐能让人振作,教会自己保持积极,结尾升华音乐在生活中的重要性,符合所有写作要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Music makes me happy
Music is like a key,which opens the door to the world for me.
I love music because it washes away my worries. When I listen to it,I feel relaxed and peaceful. My favourite types are pop and classical music. Pop songs bring me energy,while classical pieces help me focus on studying. Music influences me deeply. If I feel tired,lively music cheers me up. It teaches me to stay positive. Music is my best friend forever!
Music is very important in our lives. If there is no music,our lives won't be so interesting.
【知识点】英语半命题写作、话题作文
【点评】本文紧扣写作要点,结构清晰,语言生动,运用比喻修辞增强表达效果,准确传达音乐对自身的积极影响,符合书面表达的各项要求。
【难度系数】0.6