主题解读
本单元话题以“谈论假期活动和经历”展开,情境属于2022新课标“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”这一主题群,涉及子主题“丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”。该话题要求学生熟练使用一般过去时描述过去的事件。
任务情境
上个星期六,天气晴朗。你和父母一起去了泸沽湖(Lugu Lake)游玩。请根据提示,写一篇英语短文记录本次活动。
提示:1.天气;2.出行方式;3.活动(划船、拍照、吃特别的东西……);4.感受。
注意:1.必须包括上述全部提示,可适当发挥;2.词数70左右;3.不得出现真实的校名和人名。
思路点拨

逐步突破——三步训练法

Last Saturday, the weather was sunny and fine. I went to Lugu Lake with my parents. We drove there early in the morning. We went boating on the clear lake and took quite a few beautiful photos. For lunch, we ate the special local fish and it tasted really delicious. We went back home in the late afternoon. We all had a great time and felt very relaxed.

【分析】
本题为英语记叙文写作题，解题思路如下：首先审题明确要求：体裁是记叙文，采用第一人称，时态为一般过去时，需包含天气、出行方式、活动（划船、拍照、吃特色食物）、感受等全部提示内容，词数控制在70左右；其次搭建写作框架：开头点明时间、人物、地点与天气，中间按时间顺序叙述出行、上午活动、午餐内容，结尾表达游玩感受；最后确保语言准确，动词使用一般过去式，内容连贯。
【解析】
写作时，先开头交代时间（Last Saturday）、天气（sunny and fine）、同行人物（my parents）；接着说明出行方式（drove there）；再按顺序写上午活动：went boating、took photos；午餐内容：ate special local fish；最后写返程与感受（had a great time、felt relaxed），确保所有提示都涵盖，时态正确，语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Last Saturday, the weather was sunny and fine. I went to Lugu Lake with my parents. We drove there early in the morning. We went boating on the clear lake and took quite a few beautiful photos. For lunch, we ate the special local fish and it tasted really delicious. We went back home in the late afternoon. We all had a great time and felt very relaxed.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用；英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本题围绕假期活动展开写作，考查学生运用一般过去时描述过去经历的能力，要求学生整合提示信息、理清写作结构，是基础的英语写作训练题，能帮助学生巩固过去时态的运用。
【难度系数】
0.6

(一)短语翻译——根据写作要点翻译短语
1. 马上要做某事
2. 感觉像
3. 去划船
4. 如此……以至于……
5. 拍照

1. be ready to do sth 2. feel like
3. go boating 4. so...that... 5. take photos

【分析】本题为英语短语翻译题，需结合常用英语固定搭配及短语结构，将中文短语准确对应为标准英语表达，回忆每个中文短语对应的固定英语搭配，确保符合英语习惯用法。
【解析】1. “马上要做某事”对应固定短语be ready to do sth；2. “感觉像”对应固定搭配feel like；3. “去划船”对应“go + 动名词”结构的固定短语go boating；4. “如此……以至于……”对应结果状语从句的固定结构so...that...；5. “拍照”对应固定短语take photos。
【答案】1. be ready to do sth 2. feel like 3. go boating 4. so...that... 5. take photos
【知识点】英语短语翻译、固定搭配
【点评】本题考查基础英语常用短语的翻译，属于英语学习的核心基础内容，难度较低，适合巩固基础。
【难度系数】0.8

(二)句子翻译——结合(一)中短语和括号内的提示完成句子
1.泸沽湖非常美丽，周围环绕着许多树和花。（with 表伴随）

2.我感觉自己仿佛置身于一幅画中。（feel like +从句）

3.因为有太多的人。（there be 句型）

4.午餐我们在那里吃了些特别的东西。（不定代词+形容词）

5.食物如此美味以至于我们不想停下来。（so…that…句型）

(三)篇章展示——运用(二)中句子组成语段

1. Lugu Lake is very beautiful with many trees and flowers around it. 2. I felt like I was in a painting.
3. Because there were too many people. 4. We ate something special there for lunch. 5. The food was so delicious that we didn't want to stop.
（三）篇章展示
Last Saturday, I went to Lugu Lake on vacation with my family. It was sunny and hot, so we were ready to drive there.
We left early in the morning and got there at 9:00 a. m. Lugu Lake is very beautiful with many trees and flowers around it. I felt like I was in a painting. First, we went boating on the lake. We waited over half an hour for the boat because there were too many people. But we enjoyed everything beautiful along the way by boat. Then we ate something special there for lunch. The food was so delicious that we didn't want to stop. In the afternoon, we took some photos and I bought some gifts for my friends.
I learnt a lot about nature during this vacation. I hope to visit it again.

【分析】
本题分为句子翻译和篇章展示两部分。句子翻译需结合括号内提示的语法结构，逐一对应调整：①with表伴随结构，用“with + 名词短语+宾补”的结构；②feel like后接从句，需保持时态一致；③there be句型要契合语境时态；④不定代词修饰形容词时，形容词后置；⑤so...that...句型需正确使用结构表结果。篇章展示需将翻译的句子按时间逻辑串联，补充合理语境使语段连贯。
【解析】
1. 句子翻译：严格遵循提示的语法结构，符合英语表达习惯：①泸沽湖非常美丽，周围环绕着许多树和花译为Lugu Lake is very beautiful with many trees and flowers around it；②我感觉自己仿佛置身于一幅画中译为I felt like I was in a painting；③因为有太多的人译为Because there were too many people；④午餐我们在那里吃了些特别的东西译为We ate something special there for lunch；⑤食物如此美味以至于我们不想停下来译为The food was so delicious that we didn't want to stop。2. 篇章展示：以“泸沽湖度假”为主题，按时间顺序（出发→到达→活动→午餐→下午活动→感受）串联翻译的句子，补充合理细节形成连贯语段。
【答案】
1. Lugu Lake is very beautiful with many trees and flowers around it. 2. I felt like I was in a painting.
3. Because there were too many people. 4. We ate something special there for lunch. 5. The food was so delicious that we didn't want to stop.
（三）篇章展示
Last Saturday, I went to Lugu Lake on vacation with my family. It was sunny and hot, so we were ready to drive there.
We left early in the morning and got there at 9:00 a. m. Lugu Lake is very beautiful with many trees and flowers around it. I felt like I was in a painting. First, we went boating on the lake. We waited over half an hour for the boat because there were too many people. But we enjoyed everything beautiful along the way by boat. Then we ate something special there for lunch. The food was so delicious that we didn't want to stop. In the afternoon, we took some photos and I bought some gifts for my friends.
I learnt a lot about nature during this vacation. I hope to visit it again.
【知识点】
with表伴随结构；so...that句型；语篇组织写作
【点评】
本题考查基础语法的运用及语篇连贯组织能力，要求学生能将特定语法结构转化为连贯的语篇，注重知识的实际应用。
【难度系数】
0.6