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七、书面表达。
你的学校将举办服装设计比赛，请你根据下表提供的信息，以“My fashion design”为题，写一篇短文。词数80左右。
参考词汇：competition 比赛
My fashion design
你的学校将举办服装设计比赛，请你根据下表提供的信息，以“My fashion design”为题，写一篇短文。词数80左右。
参考词汇：competition 比赛
My fashion design
答案
One possible version:
My fashion design
I like fashion. I will take part in our school fashion design competition. Here is my design for a coat, a shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of boots.
First, the colour of the coat is blue. Blue looks cool. The coat is made of wool and it's warm. Next, I would like to design a grey cotton shirt. It must be comfortable and go well with the blue coat. I think they look nice on young people. Then, jeans are very popular with students, so I will design a pair of blue cotton jeans. I'm sure that students will look smart in blue. Finally, I want to design a pair of white leather boots. I think white matches any colour.
I think my design is very fashionable. Do you think so?
My fashion design
I like fashion. I will take part in our school fashion design competition. Here is my design for a coat, a shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of boots.
First, the colour of the coat is blue. Blue looks cool. The coat is made of wool and it's warm. Next, I would like to design a grey cotton shirt. It must be comfortable and go well with the blue coat. I think they look nice on young people. Then, jeans are very popular with students, so I will design a pair of blue cotton jeans. I'm sure that students will look smart in blue. Finally, I want to design a pair of white leather boots. I think white matches any colour.
I think my design is very fashionable. Do you think so?
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题，要求以“My fashion design”为题，结合表格提供的衣物（coat、shirt、jeans、boots）的特征、颜色、材质信息，写一篇80词左右的短文，用于学校服装设计比赛。解题思路：1. 开头点明要参加学校的服装设计比赛，引出自己的设计；2. 按顺序介绍四种衣物的颜色、材质、特点，使用连接词使结构清晰；3. 结尾表达对设计的看法，呼应主题，同时控制词数，保证语句通顺。
【解析】写作时，首先开头说明将参加学校的服装设计比赛，引出设计的四种衣物；接着用first、next、then、finally等连接词，依次描述coat（蓝色、羊毛材质、保暖）、shirt（灰色、棉质、舒适）、jeans（蓝色、棉质、受学生欢迎）、boots（白色、皮革、美观），运用be made of、go well with等短语丰富表达；最后总结自己的设计很时尚，符合比赛要求，注意词数控制在80左右，语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】One possible version:
My fashion design
I like fashion. I will take part in our school fashion design competition. Here is my design for a coat, a shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of boots.
First, the colour of the coat is blue. Blue looks cool. The coat is made of wool and it's warm. Next, I would like to design a grey cotton shirt. It must be comfortable and go well with the blue coat. I think they look nice on young people. Then, jeans are very popular with students, so I will design a pair of blue cotton jeans. I'm sure that students will look smart in blue. Finally, I want to design a pair of white leather boots. I think white matches any colour.
I think my design is very fashionable. Do you think so?
【知识点】英语书面表达、词汇运用、信息整合
【点评】本题结合表格信息考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生准确提取表格关键信息并转化为连贯短文，同时考查常用词汇和句式的运用，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，注重信息整合与语言表达的准确性。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时，首先开头说明将参加学校的服装设计比赛，引出设计的四种衣物；接着用first、next、then、finally等连接词，依次描述coat（蓝色、羊毛材质、保暖）、shirt（灰色、棉质、舒适）、jeans（蓝色、棉质、受学生欢迎）、boots（白色、皮革、美观），运用be made of、go well with等短语丰富表达；最后总结自己的设计很时尚，符合比赛要求，注意词数控制在80左右，语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】One possible version:
My fashion design
I like fashion. I will take part in our school fashion design competition. Here is my design for a coat, a shirt, a pair of jeans and a pair of boots.
First, the colour of the coat is blue. Blue looks cool. The coat is made of wool and it's warm. Next, I would like to design a grey cotton shirt. It must be comfortable and go well with the blue coat. I think they look nice on young people. Then, jeans are very popular with students, so I will design a pair of blue cotton jeans. I'm sure that students will look smart in blue. Finally, I want to design a pair of white leather boots. I think white matches any colour.
I think my design is very fashionable. Do you think so?
【知识点】英语书面表达、词汇运用、信息整合
【点评】本题结合表格信息考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生准确提取表格关键信息并转化为连贯短文，同时考查常用词汇和句式的运用，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，注重信息整合与语言表达的准确性。
【难度系数】0.6
