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五、书面表达。
英语课上，老师让我们以“My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文来介绍我们美丽的家乡。
写作要求：
1)家乡的地理位置；
2)家乡的气候特点；
3)友好善良的家乡人；
4)词数不少于60个。
My Hometown
英语课上，老师让我们以“My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文来介绍我们美丽的家乡。
写作要求：
1)家乡的地理位置；
2)家乡的气候特点；
3)友好善良的家乡人；
4)词数不少于60个。
My Hometown
Kaifeng is an old city in the north of China. It has a long history. Now it is still beautiful.
There are four seasons in a year. It's warm in spring. It's hot in summer. It's cool in autumn. It's cold in winter.
The spring and autumn are the best seasons. The weather is not very hot or cold.
You can eat a lot of food.
The people here are very kind and friendly.
Welcome to my hometown.
答案
My Hometown
Kaifeng is an old city in the north of China. It has a long history. Now it is still beautiful. There are four seasons in a year. It's warm in spring. It's hot in summer. It's cool in autumn. It's cold in winter. The spring and autumn are the best seasons. The weather is not very hot or cold. You can eat a lot of food. The people here are very kind and friendly. Welcome to my hometown.
Kaifeng is an old city in the north of China. It has a long history. Now it is still beautiful. There are four seasons in a year. It's warm in spring. It's hot in summer. It's cool in autumn. It's cold in winter. The spring and autumn are the best seasons. The weather is not very hot or cold. You can eat a lot of food. The people here are very kind and friendly. Welcome to my hometown.
解析
【分析】
首先审题，明确本次书面表达的主题是“My Hometown”，需覆盖四个写作要求：家乡的地理位置、气候特点、家乡人的友好善良，且词数不少于60。解题思路为：1. 选取一个具体的家乡（如开封，中国北方的古城）；2. 按“地理位置→气候特点→家乡人→结尾邀请”的逻辑组织内容，确保每个要点都有对应描述；3. 使用简单易懂的英语句式，避免复杂语法，保证语句通顺，词数达标。
【解析】
按照写作要求，结合具体家乡（开封），依次展开描述：先介绍家乡的地理位置（中国北方的古城），再说明四季气候特点，接着描述家乡人的友好，最后发出邀请，形成完整短文。具体内容如下：
Kaifeng is an old city in the north of China. It has a long history. Now it is still beautiful. There are four seasons in a year. It's warm in spring. It's hot in summer. It's cool in autumn. It's cold in winter. The spring and autumn are the best seasons. The weather is not very hot or cold. You can eat a lot of food. The people here are very kind and friendly. Welcome to my hometown.
【答案】
Kaifeng is an old city in the north of China. It has a long history. Now it is still beautiful. There are four seasons in a year. It's warm in spring. It's hot in summer. It's cool in autumn. It's cold in winter. The spring and autumn are the best seasons. The weather is not very hot or cold. You can eat a lot of food. The people here are very kind and friendly. Welcome to my hometown.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、家乡介绍类短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了地理位置、气候特点、家乡人友好三个写作要点，结构清晰，语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语写作的要求，词数达标，结尾加入邀请语句，内容完整自然。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先审题，明确本次书面表达的主题是“My Hometown”，需覆盖四个写作要求：家乡的地理位置、气候特点、家乡人的友好善良，且词数不少于60。解题思路为：1. 选取一个具体的家乡（如开封，中国北方的古城）；2. 按“地理位置→气候特点→家乡人→结尾邀请”的逻辑组织内容，确保每个要点都有对应描述；3. 使用简单易懂的英语句式，避免复杂语法，保证语句通顺，词数达标。
【解析】
按照写作要求，结合具体家乡（开封），依次展开描述：先介绍家乡的地理位置（中国北方的古城），再说明四季气候特点，接着描述家乡人的友好，最后发出邀请，形成完整短文。具体内容如下：
Kaifeng is an old city in the north of China. It has a long history. Now it is still beautiful. There are four seasons in a year. It's warm in spring. It's hot in summer. It's cool in autumn. It's cold in winter. The spring and autumn are the best seasons. The weather is not very hot or cold. You can eat a lot of food. The people here are very kind and friendly. Welcome to my hometown.
【答案】
Kaifeng is an old city in the north of China. It has a long history. Now it is still beautiful. There are four seasons in a year. It's warm in spring. It's hot in summer. It's cool in autumn. It's cold in winter. The spring and autumn are the best seasons. The weather is not very hot or cold. You can eat a lot of food. The people here are very kind and friendly. Welcome to my hometown.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、家乡介绍类短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了地理位置、气候特点、家乡人友好三个写作要点，结构清晰，语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语写作的要求，词数达标，结尾加入邀请语句，内容完整自然。
【难度系数】
0.5
